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Theillustrationsbelowshowhowchocolateisproduced.Summarisetheinformaitonbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures.【高分范文及深度点评】Thediagramshowsthestagesintheprocessofmakingchocolate.【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：process：整个过程,stage：阶段，step：步骤】Chocolatecomesfromthecacaotree,whichisgrowninpartsofSouthAmerica,AfricaandIndonesia.【开头不能冲上来就直接介绍cacaotree，而是通过主题词chocolate引出，否则显得太唐突】【流程图特点之一：介绍过程要使用一般现在时】【流程图特点之二：大量使用定语从句，将有关联的两句话连接。】【流程图特点之三：大量使用被动语态】Thetreeproduceslargeredpodswhichcontainwhitecocoabeans.Firstly,【流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词】whenthepodsareripe,theyareharvested,thebeansareremovedandtheyarefermentedforseveraldaysinlargewoodenboxes.【三个句子的并列：“句子A，句子Band句子C”。】Duringthefermentingprocess,thebeansturnbrown.【流程图特点之五：要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的的一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观观点，否则会扣分】Next,thebrownbeansarespreadinthesuntodry.Theyarethenputinlargesacksandtransportedbytrainorlorry.Afterthis,thebeansaretakentoachocolatefactorywheretheyareroastedinanovenattemperaturesofbetween250and350degreeCelsius.Afterbeingroasted,thebeansarecrushedandtheoutershellisremoved.Thispartisnotneededformakingchocolate.Finally,theinnerpartofthebeanispressedandliquidchocolateisproduced.【流程图特点之六：一般不需要写总结】最后再总结一下流程图的特点：特点一：现在时特点二：定语从句特点三：被动语态特点四：顺序词特点五：适当添加特点六：无总结雅思流程图范文《砖块的制作》(含9分范文及考官点评）WRITINGTASK1Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Thediagrambelowshowstheprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustry.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Writeatleast150words.Brickmanufacturing*Clay:typeofstickyearththatisusedformakingbricks,pots,etc.【满分范文】Theprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustrycanbeoutlinedinsevenconsecutivesteps.Firsttherawmaterial,clay,whichwasjustbelowthesurfaceofsoilincertainclay-richareashastobedugupbyadigger.Thenthelumpsofclayareplacedonametalgridinordertobreakupthebigchunksofclayintomuchsmallerareas,whichfallthroughthemetalgridontoaroller,whosemotionfurthersegregatesthebitsofclay.Sandandwaterareaddedtomakeahomogenousmixture,whichistheneitherformedinmouldsorcutintobrick-shapedpiecesbymeansofawirecutter.Thosefreshbricksarethenkeptinadryingovenforatleast24andamaximumof48hours,severaldozensifnothundredsofbricksatatime.Thedriedbricksarethentransferredtoaso-calledkiln,anothertypeofhightemperatureoven.Firsttheyarekeptatamoderatetemperatureof200℃-1300℃.Thisprocessisfollowedbycoolingdownthefinishedbricksfor48to72hoursinacoolingchamber.Oncethebrickshavecooleddownandhavebecomehard,theygetpackagedanddeliveredtotheirfinaldestination,beitabuildingsiteorstorage.(215words)【考官评语】Band9Thisresponsefullysatisfiestherequirementsofthetask.Allkeyfeaturesofeachstageoftheprocessareappropriatelyandaccuratelypresented.Anexcellentoverviewisgivenatthebeginningoftheresponseandthisskilfullyincorporatespartoftherubric,changingthegrammaticalfunction,togiveabriefsummaryofthewholeprocess.Themessageisveryeasytoread,withseamlesscohesionthatattractsnoattention.Paragraphing,linkingandreferencingareallskilfullymanaged.Thelanguageusedisveryfluentandsophisticated.Awiderangeofvocabularyandstructuresareusedwithfullflexibilityandaccuracy.Onlyrareminor‘slips’canbefoundandthesedonotdetractfromthehighrating.雅思写作剑桥范文解析流程图下面是剑桥6的test3考到的流程图，考官给的范文。范文中有两步考官直接就写成一步，本来是3-8天和16天两个时间段，缩成了3个星期，大家写的时候可以分别写，不用写这么精练。考官范文：Thefirstdiagramshowsthattherearefourmainstagesinthelifeofthesilkworm.第一个图显示了，在蚕的生命过程中主要有四步。Firstofall,eggsareproducedbythemothandittakestendaysforeacheggtobecomeasilkwormlarvathatfeedsonmulberryleaves.首先，蛾子产出卵，每个卵用10天的时间变成蚕的幼虫，他们以桑叶为食。Thisstagelastsforuptosixweeksuntilthelarvaproducesacocoonofsilkthreadarounditself.这个阶段持续最多到六个星期，直到幼虫周围生产出茧（silkthread）.Afteraperiodofaboutthreeweeks,theadultmothseventuallyemergefromthesecocoonsandthelifecyclebeginsagain.经过三个星期的一段时间之后，成年的蛾子最终从茧里面出来，这个生命的循环就再一次开始了。Thecocoonsaretherawmaterialusedfortheproductionofsilkcloth.茧是生产丝绸的原材料。Onceselected,theyareboiledinwaterandthethreadcanbeseparatedintheunwindingstage.一旦被挑选出来，他们在水里煮沸，丝可以在打开的阶段中被分离出来。Eachthreadisbetween300and900metreslong,whichmeanstheycanbetwistedtogether,dyedandthenusedtoproduceclothintheweavingstage.每条丝是300到900米长，这就意味着，他们能够被缠绕在一起，染色，然后在织布阶段被用于生产布品。Overall,thediagramsshowthatthecocoonstageofthesilkwormcanbeusedtoproducesilkcloththroughaverysimpleprocess.范文总结：1．163个字。2．使用了很多合适的关联词，见阴影部分。3．主要是简单的并列句。4．句型，搭配了一些被动语态。5．动词使用丰富：produce,feedon,last,emerge,select,boil,separate,unwind,twist(多数原词带入)6．名词比较专业：lifecycle,rawmaterial.表述时间：in10days,duringtheperiodof10days,Theprocesslastsforupto10days.after10days,10dayspassedutillsomethinghappened.表示然后：then,next,inthenextstate,followingthat,afterthat,thenextstepinthestageis....表示过程：process,procedure,formation,development表示步骤：step,stage,phase方法：l找到流程图的过程，起点，终点。l找到图上标出的已知动作，如果出现生词，尽量猜测。无词，用自己语言。l按照步骤，分段描述，千万不能省略任何一步。l切记！加入流畅合理的表示顺序的关联词。l句型以主动为主，搭配被动，以及主语从句（例如：Itcanbeseenfromthegraphthat…）l时态要使用一般现在时补充的表达方式流程图常用词汇：时间阶段：afteraperiodof..months/days/minutes,during…顺序连词：first,firstofall,inthefirststage,initially,tobeginwithSecond,then,next,alsoAfterthat,atthesametime,inthemea