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书面表达-写景物通用版小升初搞定写作写景篇|写物篇一、课程引入二、课程讲解三、课程总结contents课程引入What’syourfavoriteseason?What’stheweatherlike?Whatcanyoudo?What’syourfavoriteseason?Myfavoriteseasonissummer.What’stheweatherlike?It’susuallyhotinsummer.Whatcanyoudo?Icaneatice-creamandgoswimming.写景篇课程讲解PART01想一想，哪些属于写景作文？MyhometownMyfavoriteseasonMyfavoriteanimalThelastsummervacationIlovemydog写景作文,就是把我们日常看见的那些自然景观或者人文景观,通过文字的方式记录下来。什么是写景作文？课程讲解1.典型例题2.思路点拨3.范文赏析4.万能模板5.写作训练典型例题一请以“Myfavoriteseason”为题，写一篇文章，不少于60个单词。思路点拨二season季节spring春天summer夏天autumn秋天winter冬天weather天气warm温暖的hot热的cool凉爽的cold寒冷有用的词汇一windy有风的cloudy多云的sunny晴朗的rainy下雨的snowy下雪的windy有风的有用的词汇二goswimming去游泳gotothebeach去沙滩eatice-cream吃冰激凌paintpictures画画pickapples摘苹果playinthesnow在雪里玩耍makeasnowman堆雪人goonapicnic去野餐goforawalk去散步flykites放风筝有用的词汇三springsummerautumnwinterwarmhotcoolcoldpickapplesflykiteseatice-creammakeasnowman连一连造句练习。It’s______and____in_______.温度季节warmhotcoolcoldwindycloudysunnyrainysnowywindyspringsummerautumnwinterIusually______in_____.天气季节活动goswimminggotothebeacheatice-creampaintpicturespickapplesMyfavoriteseasonisspring.Ilikespringbest.It’swarminspring.It’swindyinspring.It’sgetting/becomingwarmerandwarmerinspring.Therearegreentreesandbeautifulflowerseverywhere.Icangoonapicnicinspring.Icangoforawalkinspring.Iflykitesinspringwithmyfriends.有用的句子一春天最喜欢的季节季节的天气季节的活动It’shotinsummer.Theweatherishotinsummer.Wesweatlikepigsinsummer.Summerismyfavoriteseason.Ilikesummerbest,becausethere’sasummervacation.Icaneatice-creamandgoswimminginsummer.SometimesIgotothebeachwithmyparents.有用的句子二夏天Myfavoriteseasonisautumn/fall.Ilikeautumnbest.Theweatheriscool.Theleavesturnyellowandthecolorsarereallynice.Iusuallygoforawalkinautumn.Ilikepaintingpictures,too.SometimesIpickappleswithmyparents.有用的句子三秋天Myfavoriteseasoniswinter,becausewehaveSpringFestivalinwinter.It’scoldanditsnowyinwinter.Onsnowydays,it’swhiteeverywhere.Icanmakeasnowmanandplayinthesnow.DuringSpringFestival,Ialwaysgetredpacketsfrommyparents.有用的句子四冬天springsummerautumnwinterweatherwarm,windyhotcoolcold,snow,activitiesgoonapicnic,goforawalk,flykitesgoswimming,gotothebeach,eatice-creamgoforawalk,paintpictures,pickapplesplayinthesnow,makeasnowman,getredpackets范文赏析三Myfavoriteseasonissummer.It’shotinsummer.Thereisasummervacationinsummer.Idon’tgotoschool.Ithinkmanychildrenlikethisseason,becausetheycaneatice-creamandgoswimming.Icangoswimming.SometimesIgotothebeachwithmyparents.SometimesIgototheswimmingpoolwithmyfriends.Iusuallyvisitmanyplacesinsummervacation.Ilikesummerbest!Myfavoriteseasonissummer.It’shotinsummer.Thereisasummervacationinsummer.Idon’tgotoschool.Ithinkmanychildrenlikethisseason,becausetheycaneatice-creamandgoswimming.1.开篇点题2.描述总体温度3.描述喜欢的原因,暑假是一大原因4.manychildren主要活动Icangoswimming,too.SometimesIgotothebeachwithmyparents.SometimesIgototheswimmingpoolwithmyfriends.Iusuallyvisitmanyplacesinsummervacation.Ilikesummerbest!6.首尾呼应5.“我”的主要活动万能模板四Therearefourseasonsinayear.Myfavoriteseasonis___.It’s__in__.Ithinkmanychildrenlikethisseason,becausetheycan__Ican__too.Iusually__withmyfriends.SometimesI___.Howinteresting!Ilike__best!写作训练五你最喜欢的季节是什么？为什么喜欢这个季节？写一篇短文，不少于60词。你最喜欢的动物是什么？它有什么外貌特征？它和你有什么样的故事？写物篇课程讲解PART02课程讲解1.典型例题2.思路点拨3.范文赏析4.万能模板5.写作训练典型例题一MyFavoriteAnimal描写一个你最喜爱的动物，不少于60个单词。提示：可以对其进行外形的描写思路点拨二1.描述最喜欢的动物用到的两个句子有：My_______animalisdogs.I_____dogsbest.2.如何描述动物外貌特征？long,short,fat,thin,tall,short,big,small,cute,noisyItis…Ithas…eyes,nose,mouth,ears,head,body,legs,tail,fur,claw你能用右面词汇句型造句子吗？3.想一想，怎么描述人和小动物的互动呢？Weoftenplaytogether.Sometimes,wegototheparkontheweekends.WhenI’mhome,itfollowsmeallthetime.单击键入文本范文赏析三Ilikeanimalsverymuch.Ihaveadog.It’smyfavouriteanimal.It’swhite,anditlookslikeasnowball.Ithastwobigeyesandears.Butitsnoseandmouthareverysmall.It’sverynaughty.ItoftenlooksatmyfoodwhenIhaveameal.WhenI’mhome,itfollowsmeallthetime.WhenIdomyhomework,itoftensitsbesidemequietly.Ilikemydogverymuch.Ilikeanimalsverymuch.Ihaveadog.It’smyfavouriteanimal.It’swhite,anditlookslikeasnowball.Ithastwobigeyesandears.Butitsnoseandmouthareverysmall.It’sverynaughty.请你用下划线分别画出点题的，外貌描写的，互动的句子，朗读并翻译。ItoftenlooksatmyfoodwhenIhaveameal.WhenI’mhome,itfollowsmeallthetime.WhenIdomyhomework,itoftensitsbesidemequietly.Ilikemydogverymuch.Ilikeanimalsverymuch.Ihaveadog.It’smyfavouriteanimal.It’swhite,anditlookslikeasnowball.Ithastwobigeyesandears.Butitsnoseandmouthareverysmall.It’sverynaughty.请你分别画出点题的，外貌描写的，互动的句子，朗读并翻译。Weoftengototheparktogether.WhenI’mhome,itfollowsmeallthetime.WhenIdomyhomework,itoftensitsbesidemequietly.Ilikemydogverymuch.修辞的运用比喻Itlookslikeasnowball.它看起来像一个雪球。It_____asnowball.它像一个雪球。looklike=belike像万能模板四Ilikeanimalsverymuch.Myfavouriteanimalis___.It’s__,anditlookslike__.Ithastwo__eyesandears.Butitsnoseandmoutharevery__.Itlikeseating__.Weoftenplaytogether.Ilike__verymuch.写作训练五What’syourfavoriteanimal?写一篇不少于50个单词的短文。Ilikeanimalsverymuch.Ihaveacat.It’smyfavouriteanimal.It’swhite,anditlookslikeasnowball.Ithastwobigeyesandears.Butitsnoseandmouthareverysmall.It’sverycute.WhenI’mhome,itfollowsmeallthetime.WhenIdomyhomework,itoftensitsbesidemequietly.Ilikemycatv