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2020年中考真题英语分项汇编专题21书面表达考点1观点看法类（一）【2020•北京市】40.“不积跬步，无以至千里。”积累，有助于我们达成目标，实现梦想。某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。提示词语：accumulate（积累）,read,keep,makeprogress提示问题：●Whatdidyoudotoaccumulateknowledge?●Whathaveyoulearnedfromdoingso?Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据提示词语和提示问题来写一篇短文，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。【参考范文】Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Asforme,Ihavetakenlotsofmeasurestoaccumulateknowledge.Firstofall,Iattentivelylistenedtotheteachers,parents,andtheotherswhocouldprovidemewithmuchknowledge,consideringthatitwasoneofthemosteffectivewaystoenrichmyself.Inthesecondplace,IusedtoobservesomethingcarefullyandtooknoteatthesametimesothatIwouldnotmissanythingimportant.Lastbutnotleast,whenhavingsparetime,IchosetoreadvariousbooksandreviewedwhatIhadgainedregularly.Inaword,Ihavelearnedalotduringtheprocessofaccumulatingknowledge.Justasanoldsayinggoes,Romewasnotbuiltinoneday.Thatistosay,onecannotsucceedwithoutpersistentaccumulation.SoIhavelearnedthatonlybygainingknowledgestepbystepcanweachieveourgoalandrealizeourdream.Inthefuture,Iwillcontinuetokeepaccumulatingknowledgeandmakegreaterprogress.【名师点评】1.例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，用上了所给提示词并回答了“你是如何积累知识的？”和“你从中学到了什么？”这两个问题。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。2.高分亮点：单词和短语：asfor；takelotsofmeasurestodosth.；firstofall；providesb.withsth.；usedtodosth.；atthesametime；lastbutnotleast；inaword；stepbystep；makeprogress。句型：who引导的限制性定语从句；that引导的宾语从句；sothat引导的目的状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；what引导的宾语从句；以only开头的倒装句。（二）【2020•贵州省安顺市】81.某英语网站正在开展关于良好生活习惯的征文大赛，请以“GoodLivingHabitsMakeMe________”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文参加此次大赛。要求如下：1.补全标题；2.征文应包含第一节所有信息（1.What’syourfavoritefood?2.Howoftendoyouexercise?3.Howmanyhoursdoyousleepeverynight?4.Howdoyourelaxyourselfinyourdailylife?5.Whatdoyouthinkofyourlivinghabits?）；3.重点谈谈良好的生活习惯对你的积极影响和作用；4.征文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】本题为话题作文，要求补充完题目“GoodLivingHabitsMakeMe________”后写一篇短文。文章时态用现在时或过去时，人称用第一人称。【参考范文】GoodLivingHabitsMakeMeHealthierGoodlivinghabitsareimportantinourlives.Theyinfluenceusinmanyways.Ithinkgoodlivinghabitsmakemehealthier.Iusedtoprefermeattofruitorvegetables.ButnowItryallkindsoffood.What’smore,Ilikesports,andIexercisefor30minuteseveryday.Everyoneneedssleep.Ihaveeighttotenhours’sleepatnight.Withenoughsleepatnight,Icanbereadyforschoolactivities.InsparetimeI’dliketodosomereading.Itmakesmefeelrelaxed.Ithinkmylivinghabitsareprettyhealthy.Developinggoodlivinghabitswasquitedifficultformeatthebeginning,butnowIamusedtoitandenjoyit.Ilookmuchstrongerthanbefore.Ithinkitisgoodlivinghabitsthatmakemehealthierandhealthier.【名师点评】1.例文点评：例文分三段，第一段用于引出GoodLivingHabitsMakeMeHealthier这一话题，第二段则根据第一节的五个要点对自己的良好生活习惯进行了描述，第三段则对自己的生活习惯进行了评价并肯定了健康生活习惯给自己带来的积极影响。例文层次分明，思路清晰，叙述流畅，文中用了许多高分句型及短语，为文章增色不少。2.高分亮点：短语：usedtodo，prefer…to…，allkindsof，what’smore，bereadyfor，atthebeginning。句型：（1）What’smore,Ilikesports,andIexercisefor30minuteseveryday.（and连接的并列句）（2）Ithinkgoodlivinghabitsmakemehealthier.（宾语从句）（3）Developinggoodlivinghabitswasquitedifficultformeatthebeginning,butnowIamusedtoitandenjoyit.（动名词作主语）（三）【2020•贵州省黔东南州】86.请将文章用0.5毫米黑色签字笔写在答题卡相应的位置上。安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中学生,我们可能遇到哪些安全问题?该怎样处理呢?校团委决定组织一次安全教育主题班会,请根据以下要点提示,以HowtoKeepSafe为题写一篇英文发言稿。中学生安全问题及对策一、交通安全:遵守交通规则。二、食品安全:注意饮食安全。三、活动安全:上下楼梯靠右行;体育锻炼要小心:不允许私自下河游泳。四、交友安全:注意网络交友安全。遇险建议遇到危险要保持冷静,保证自身安全,然后及时报警或向家长、老师求助。写作要求:1.结构完整,要点齐全,可适当发挥;2.表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰;3.文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息;4.词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。HowtoKeepSafeHello,everyone.Safetyisveryimportantforus.Weshouldlearntoprotectourselves.Herearesomesu