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【中小学教辅资源店微信：mlxt2022】专题21书面表达考点4叙事描写类（一）（2022·新疆·中考真题）初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。例如：1.一次难忘的旅行2.一次难忘的比赛3.一次难忘的志愿服务……要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名：3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。Lookingbackatthesepastthreeyears,Ihadalotofsweetmemories…________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Lookingbackatthesepastthreeyears,Ihadalotofsweetmemories.Lastsummervacation,Idecidedtolearntoswim.Atfirst,Iwasafraidofswimminginthewater.Ididn’tfeelgoodinthewater.Butthecoachsaidhewouldprotectme.ThenIstartedswimming,butIcouldn’tswimforward【中小学教辅资源店微信：mlxt2022】atall.Withthecoach’shelp,Iknewhowtomoveandswimwithmyhandsandlegs.Afewdayslater,Icouldswimbymyself.Iwasveryexcitedandproudofmyself.WhatIlearnfromthisexperienceisthatnothingisimpossibleifIputmyheartintoitandtrytodoitbravely.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。（二）（2022·甘肃武威·中考真题）以“beinglost”为主题，根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。Thepicturesareprovidedtohelpyouthinkaboutthistopic.Payattentiontothefollowingpointswhenyouplanyourcomposition.●WherewasMary?●WhatwasMarydoing?●Whathappenedtoher?●WhatdidMaryfeelwhenseeinghermother?Thefollowingwordsmayhelpyou:●crowdedwithvisitors●sointerestedintheanimals●noonearound●turnto…【中小学教辅资源店微信：mlxt2022】要求：1.条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现其他人名和地名等信息；3.在答题卡的相应位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:MarywenttothezoowithhermotheronalovelySundayafternoon.Thezoowascrowdedwithvisitors.Nearthegateofthezoostoodtwoprettygiraffes.Maryhadneverseensuchamazinganimalsbefore.Shewassointerestedintheanimalsthatshelookedateverysmallmovementofthemcarefully.Afterawhile,shewantedtotellhermotherwhatshe’dfoundabouttheseanimals.However,shenoticedtherewasnoonearound.Shewasafraidandworried,butsherememberedthathermothertoldhernottomovewhenbeinglost.Soshewaitedforhermotherjustatthegateofthezoo.Soonafter,shesawhermotherwalkingtothegateanxiously.Whenseeinghermother,Marywashappyandrantohermother.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，结合图片提示进行详细地描述故事的发生以及过程及结果，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要紧密结合所给出的要点内容，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。【中小学教辅资源店微信：mlxt2022】（三）（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题）亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。内容包括：1.你对这位老师的印象；2.你感谢他（她）的原因；3.你对他（她）的祝福。注意：1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当举例或拓展；3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythanksto_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythankstomyEnglishteacherMr.Zhang.Sheisverykindandpatient.ShehashelpedmealotinmystudiessinceIcametothisschool.WhenIwasintrouble,sheusedtoencouragemeandgivemesomegoodadvice.AtonetimeIfailedtopassanEnglishtestandIwasverysadaboutit.Shecameandcheeredmeup.ShetoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.I’msothankfultoherforherkindhelpthatIwillworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.Ihopeshewillbecomebetterandbetter.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，本文开头