高分作文二:增分句型-公开课

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三大句型增分技巧Rachel一.整齐美观的书写四.句式灵活,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with复合结构等.二.注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词,以增加文采。三.有效使用连接词,过渡自然,连贯通顺,使文章结构紧凑。写好规范的英语句子A)Simplesentence:简单句B)Compoundsentence:并列句C)Complexsentence:复合句I.巧妙运用短语,写出增分的简单句:1)借助名词短语做同位语2)借助介词短语做定语3)借助介词短语做状语4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语1)借助名词短语做同位语如:李立,男,27岁,1986年生;籍贯:广东。LiLi,amanof27,wasborninGuangdongin1986.我是李华,高三学生,来自重庆新华中学I’mLiHua,__________________comingfromChongqingXinhuaMiddleschool.aseniorthreestudent2)借助介词短语做定语如:李飞,男,10岁,棕色短发,身穿白色茄克。LiFeiisaten-year-oldboywithshortbrownhairandawhitejacket.RewritethefollowingsentencesTinaisouroralEnglishteacher.Sheiswarm-heartedandeasy-going.(用名词作同位语)TTina,ouroralEnglishteacher,iswarm-heartedandeasy-going.Chinaisagreatcountrywithalargeareaandpopulation.Chinaisagreatcountry.Ithasalargeareaandpopulation.(用with)介绍人、事、物有了Tom带路,我们很快就找到了他们的村子。__________________________,wesoonfoundtheirvillage.3)借助介词短语做状语如:他躺在草地上,阳光洒在他的脸上Helayonthegrasswiththesunlightfallingonhisface.WithTomleadingtheroad4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语如:他们站在大树下,等待着总统的到来Theyarestandingunderthebigtree,_________________________________.我很害羞,不敢在公共场合发言_____________,I’mafraidofmakingspeechesinpublic.waitingforthepresidentBeingshyTtranslate1.随着中国文化的流行,越来越多的人开始学习中文。2.中秋节是中国的传统节日,历史悠久。RewriteManystudentsstudyveryhardwithoutanyphysicalexercise,becausetheyhopetoenterabetteruniversity.(用非谓语动词)Hopingtoenterabetteruniversity,manystudentsstudyveryhardwithoutanyphysicalexercise.1.WiththepopularityoftheChineseculture,moreandmorepeoplebegintolearnChinese.2.TheMid-autumnDay,atraditionalChinesefestival,hasalonghistory.II.巧用连接词,写出增分的并列句:继续坚持,你的努力会有回报的。_____________________,____youreffortwillpayoffintime.Keeponworkinghardand学习对我们来说至关重要,但我们也不能忽视我们的身体健康。Studyissurelyofvitalimportancetousstudents,yetwecannotneglectourhealth.hardly...when...;nosooner...than;notonly…butalso…;either…or…;neither…nor…for,so,and,or,but,yet如:中国,地处亚洲东部;特点:地大物博、人口众多。China,whichliesintheeastofAsia,isagreatcountrywithalargeareaandpopulationaswellasrichnaturalresources.1)定语从句III.用好从句和引导词,写出增分的复合句:重庆位于中国的西南部,是一座群山环绕的美丽城市。Chongqing,whichliesinthesouthwestofChina,isaverybeautifulcitywithmountainssurroundingit.重庆位于中国的西南部,是一座群山环绕的美丽城市。正如材料所揭示的现象那样,有20%的中学生体重都超重。这个现象引起了社会的普遍关注。Asisrevealedinthematerial,____________________________________________________________________________,_______________________________________________________thereexistsaphenomenonthat20%highschoolstudentsareoverweightwhichhascausedagreatconcerninsociety.2)名词性从句(主语、宾语、表语、同位语)Itiswell-knownthat...Itisgenerallybelievedthat...Somepeopleclaimthat...Thereisnodoubtthat...Thereisnodenyingthefactthat...1、重要的是你所做的而不是你所说的。Whatmatters/countsisnotwhatyousaybutwhatyoudo.Itisnotwhatyousaybutwhatyoudothatmatters/counts.2.我最喜欢的是你们为消费者提供的便利及时的服务。______________istheconvenientandtimelyservicethatyouprovideforuscustomers.3.我如此难过是因为我听不懂老师上课讲的内容。ThereasonwhyIamsoupsetisthatIcan’tunderstand____________________________________________WhatIenjoymostwhattheteacherissayinginclass.常见错误:Icanlearnsomethingwhatisveryimportantforourfuturelife.Ipassedthefinalexaminationmademyparentsveryexcited.SomethingthatThatItmademyparentsveryexcitedthatIpassedtheexam.3)状语从句(时间、地点、方式、目的、原因、条件、让步…)尽管很难,我还是会尽力去完成它。________________Iwilltrymybesttofinishit.一听到这个难过的消息,她就大哭了起来。_____________________________,sheburstintotears.Difficultasitis,Themomentsheheardthesadnews常见错误:WhenIreadingit,Ifoundmanypagesmissing.Inordertoabrightfuture,weshouldtryourbesttoworkhard.Inordertohaveabrightfuture,Inorderthatwecanhaveabrightfuture,学会使用复合句现象学生作文中出现很多错别字原因1.上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。2.每天有很多作业做,没有记住生字。参考词汇:错别字:wrongly-writtencharacters网络语言:weblanguage要求:1.用两句话表达表格内容2.两句话要有连贯性Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudents’compositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.Moreover,theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.

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