高考英语概要写作

提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60字左右的内容概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性(3)上下文的连贯性(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况◆Whilereading◆Whilewriting◆Whilereading1.Isthepassageanarration,exposition,argumentationoradescription?2.Isthereanytopicsentenceorkeywords?Ifso,underlinethem.3.Gothroughthesupportingdetailsorevidencetocheckwhetherthetopicsentenceorkeywordsyoufindisappropriate.outlinetopicsentencesupportingdetails(conclusion)(以议论文为例)◆Whilewriting1.Structure1)Topicsentence*2)Mainsupportingpoints/evidence3)About60words2.Language1)Touseyourownwords*2)Tobeconcise(leaveoutthedetails;reducetheexamples;simplifythedescriptions;eliminateallrepetitions.3)Topresenttheinformationfairly,donotgiveyourowncomments4)Tousethethirdpersontoretell5)TensePara1：Childraisingfindouttopsentencesorwordswhichcanbestservethemainidea.Childraisingisprobablyoneofthemostdifficultjobsforpeopletodoallovertheworld.Sincebabiesdonotcomewithchildraisingmanuals(指南),couples,especiallyfuturemothers,havetolearnfromtheirmothers,aunts,mothers-in-law,oranyotherrelativewhoisclosetothem.difficultTopic：Characteristics：Reasons找对主旨句Step1readingPara2：Aschildrengrowup,parentshavetofindreasonablewaysinordertohelptheirchildren,advisethem,punishthem,leadthemtoachievements,andteachthem.Sometimeschildrenundertenmaybehaveinappropriately.Forexample,theylearntosayoffensivewordsandtheyshownorespectfortheirrelatives.Ithinkparentsinthesecasesshouldpunishtheirchildreninareasonableway.Childrenmustknowthosekindsofattitudesarenotgoodatall..Adetailedexample忽略具体事例，或者一笔带过Para3：Therearemanyaspectswhichinfluenceparentsinthishardjob,forexample,thecultureinwhichtheylive,theeconomicsituationintheirsociety,andthereligiousenvironment.Para4Onegroupconsistsofpeoplewhodon’thaveeconomicalresourcesoreducation.…Para5Othergroupsofpeoplearehardworkersorwell-educated.…例子若篇幅较长，应该简要概括EvidenceStep2writing•Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Para1Childraisingisprobablyoneofthemostdifficultjobsforpeopletodoallovertheworld.Tip1：分析句子结构，抓住重点信息Childraisingisadifficultjob.Step2writing•Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?BringingupachildChildraisingisadifficultjob.Tip2：转换同义词或者词性ishardwork/Tip3：转换句型Itisrathertoughtoraiseachildforpeople.difficult/tough.Step2writing•Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Para2Aschildrengrowup,parentshavetofindreasonablewaysinordertohelptheirchildren,advisethem,punishthem,leadthemtoachievements,andteachthem.Tip4：用一个可以涵盖的词汇概括几个列举的并列词汇educatetheirchildrenParentsshould__________________toeducatetheirchildren.adoptreasonablemethodsStep2writing•Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Therearemanyaspectswhichinfluenceparentsinthishardjob.Tip5：代词转换成具体信息Therearemanyfactorsthatinfluencetheparentsin____________________.bringinguptheirchildrentwoexamplesaregiveninordertomakeitclearStep2writing•Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?Onegroupconsistsofpeoplewhodon’thaveeconomicalresourcesoreducation.…Othergroupsofpeoplearehardworkersorwell-educated.Tip6：具体事例需要概括其特征或代表性Inordertomakeitclear,twoexamplesaregiven,whichshowthat___________________________________childrenraisedinfamilieswithdifferenteconomicalandeducationalbackgroundmayhavedifferentfuturesItisrathertoughtoraisechildrenforcouples,especiallyfuturemothers.Parentsshouldadoptreasonablemethodstoeducatetheirchildren.Therearemanyfactorsthatinfluencetheparentsinbringinguptheirchildren.Inordertomakeitclear,twoexamplesaregiven,whichshowthatchildrenraisedinfamilieswithdifferenteconomicalandeducationalbackgroundmayhavedifferentfutures.