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续写AVacationwithMyMotherIhadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusement,allbecauseofmymother---loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaselventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwewouldeverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquite.”Wewereneveractuallyleftinastrangecity,butwewerenotabouttotakeanychance.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections(反对).Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.提炼原文情节1.Mymother’sforgetfulnessfilledourlifewithmuchsurpriseandamusement.2.Duringafamilytrip,myfamilyhadtoreturnbacktofetchourpurseandtraveler’schecksasmymotherforgottobring.3.Sheadvisedustoputupatentinastranger’sfamily,becauseshethoughtotherswereasniceasherself.Butmyfatherturneddowntheidea.wefinallyspentanightinahotel.Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.开头句出现了thebrand-newtent,可以围绕这个新的帐篷展开，结合妈妈比较健忘这个特点，可以把这两个结合起来。比如前面是我们在酒店里住了一晚，会不会妈妈把帐篷丢在酒店呢？我们为什么会想到帐篷呢？是不是有可能要野营已给词汇：absent-minded,forgetful,trip,David,camping,tent,Mom,Dad,trouble,nice步骤三：Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Thenightbefore,weturneddownMom’sideaofcampinginthehouse’sbackyard.Inordertorealizeherdream,wemadeourmindstospendanightinthewild.Whatsurpriseduswasthatalongtheway,anicecampingsite,locatedbyalake,cametooureyes.Inthemomentwepulledover,wefoundmanytravelersbusysettinguptheirtents.Thesunsetcastanorangelightoverthelakeandglorifiedthegreengrass,whichattractedusimmediately.Havinggreetedourneighbors,webegantosetupourbrand-newtent.However,outofourexpectation,thesleepingbagsweremissing.Yes,mymotherforgottopackupthem.Myparentshadtoturntoourneighborsforhelp.Tooursurprise,aneighborofferedtheirsparebags,makingusabletospendthenightinourtents.Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Itwasagreattrip,andweweredrownedinthebeautifulscenery.Finally,wearrivedatmygrandparents’housewherewesharedthefantasticexperienceswiththemalltheway.Whentheyheardmymother’sfunnystories,theymadefunofher.DespiteMom’sbeingabsent-minded,shewasstillakindandniceMom.