IELTSWriting

WRITNGSevenTheghostA/G12月份考考官心情会很好地域的不同，分数不同必须写成4段或者5段小作文不重要题型要改革了，再不考就更难了流程图一年就考2回字数少一点无所谓，230多没问题任务完成程度：TR-TaskResponse结构与衔接程度：CC-Coherence（条理性；连贯性；一致性）&Cohesion（结合）词汇丰富程度：LR-LexicalResource语法应用程度：GRA-GrammaticalRange&AccuracyTypesofsubject160topics15typesEducation/Society---80%Language/Animal/Woman/FactoryGovernment/Culture/Technology/Tourism/Media/Environment/Development/Globalization/Crime大作文出题的形式：DiscussbothviewsandgiveyouropinionDiscussbothviewsdisadvantagesandadvantagesTowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreecauses+solutionsTypicalflawsofessayBabywordsClichéNologicNodiversifiedsentences/structuresNoimpressionNoun(名词)Anounisawordthatnamesapersonorthing:Thedogbarkedloudly.Theboyswereplayinginthegarden.Youmustalwaystellthetruth.Verb(动词)Averbisawordthatdescribesanaction:Theboysswamashore.Averbmaysimplylinkasubjectandacomplement:Therabbitwasbrownandwhite.Adjective(形容词)Anadjectiveisawordthatdescribessomething:AbigdogAgreencarAdverb(副词)Anadverbisawordthataddsinformationabouttheactionofaverb:Theyalllaughedloudly.Iwillbebacktonight.Pronoun(代词)Apronounisawordsuchashe,she,I,we,etcConjunction(连词)Aconjunctionisawordthatlinksclauses:IwillcomewhenIamready.Wetriedandtriedbutwecouldnotopenthebox.基本句型主—动—补（SVC）结构在SVC结构中，谓语动词通常是联系动词（LinkingVerb）.例如：Themanisateacher.Helooksfine.Dinnerisatsixo’clock.Thetape-recorderisonthetable.主—动（SV）结构在SV结构中，谓语动词通常是不及物动词（IntransitiveVerb）例如：Ironrusts.Everybodylaughed.主—动—宾（SVO）结构在SVO结构中，谓语动词通常是及物动词（TransitiveVerb）,随后须跟宾语，带一个宾语。例如：Iwantaticket.Liverpoolwonthegame.Subject(主语)Anoun,nounphrase,orpronounthatusuallycomesbeforeamainverbandrepresentsthepersonorthingthatperformstheactionoftheverb,oraboutwhichsomethingisstated,forexample“she”in“shehitJohn”or“elephants”in“Elephantsarebig”Predicate(谓语)Thecoreofthepredicateisalwaysaverb.Averbusuallydescribestheactionoractivityofthesubject:HereadtheletterwithsatisfactionTheplaneflewlowoverthehillsJamesshookhishead.Object(宾语)Theobjectofaverbisthepersonorthingthatreceivestheactionoftheverb:ShewasreadingabookPaythemoneyandlet’sgo.Complement(补语)Awordorphrasethatfollowsaverbanddescribesthesubjectoftheverb.In“Johniscold”and“Johnbecamechairman”,“cold”and“chairman”arecomplements.Modalverb(情态助动词)Oneoftheseverbforms:can,could,may,might,shall,should,will,would,must,oughtto,usedto,need,hadbetter,anddare.Theyareallusedwithotherverbstoexpressideassuchaspossibility,permission,orintentionVocabularyApplyinglanguageToincreasereading,likeEconomist,BBCNews,andNovelsetc…Shouldafactorybebuiltinyourcommunity?Doyouagreeordisagree?OutlineAgreeorDisagreeBodySumupA.thetopicsentencecomesatornearthebeginning;B.thesucceedingsentencesexplainorestablishordevelopthestatementmadeinthetopicsentence;C.thefinalsentenceeitheremphasizesthethoughtofthetopicsentenceorstatessomeimportantconsequence.段落伊始要开门见山点明中心思想随后的句子要对表示主题的句子进行解释、举证或扩展；最后的句子或者强调段落开头的主题，或者总结一些重要的结果。ParagraphRulesPREPMethodPointReasonExample(Re-)PointFirstParagraphFirstly,anewfactorynearourcommunityhelpstoimprovethelivingstandardofpeopleinourcommunity.Thefactorywillemployalotofworkers.Asaconsequence,theunemploymentratewilldropsignificantly.Manypeopleinourcommunitywillfindajobinthefactory.Aspeople’sincomeincreases,theywillbeabletospendmoremoneyontheirfood,clothingandleisure,andthequalityoflifewillbeincreased.删除不必要的词：生动的文章是简练的。一个句子不应包含那些不必要的词，一个段落不应包含不必要的句子，出于同样的原因，一幅画不应有不必要的线条，一部机器不应有不必要的零件。这不是要求作者所写的句子都是短句，后者作者不要交代所有的细节以及对主题只做概述而已，而是要求每一个词都要有用。Vigorouswritingisconcise.Asentenceshouldcontainnounnecessarywords,aparagraphnounnecessarysentences,forthesamereasonthatadrawingshouldhavenounnecessarylinesandamachinenounnecessaryparts.Thisrequiresnotthatthewritermakeallhissentencesshort,orthatheavoidalldetailandtreathissubjectsonlyinoutline,butthateverywordtell.ThequestionastowhetherWhetherThereisnodoubtbutthatNodoubt(doubtless)UsedforfuelpurposesUsedforfuelHeisamanwhoheThisisasubjectwhichThissubjectHisstoryisastrangeoneHisstoryisstrangeMacbethwasveryambitious.ThisledhimtowishtobecomekingofScotland.Thewitchestoldhimthatthiswishofhiswouldcometrue.ThekingofScotlandatthistimewasDuncan.Encouragedbyhiswife,MacbethmurderedDuncan.HewasthusenabledtosucceedDuncanasking.(51words)Encouragedbyhiswife,MacbethachievedhisambitionandrealizedthepredictionofthewitchesbymurderingDuncanandbecomingkingofScotlandinhisplace.(26words)SpeakingandWriting,What’sdifferent?SpeakingFirst,Ithinkeducationshouldbefreebecauseitwillhelpsociety.Morepeoplecangetaneducationiftheydon’thavetopayforit.And,becauseofthat,peoplewillcreativemorecompanies,andthiswillgivealotofpeoplebetterjobs,likehigh-techjobsincomputers.Also,thesepeoplewillmakemoremoney,andtheycanbuybiggerhomesandnicercars.Thiswillhelpotherindustries,likeconstruction.WritingFirst,Isupportfreeeducationbecauseofthesocialbenefits.Morestudentscangetaneducationiftheydon’thavetopaytuition.Thehighernumberofeducatedcitizenswillleadtomorecompanies.Therefore,manype