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下载最新免费模拟卷，到公众号：一枚试卷君Onepossibleversion:DearLisa,Howiseverythinggoing?MyschoolisgoingtoholdatraditionalChineseartfestivalnextweek.KnowingthatyouarequiteinterestedinChineseartI’mwritingtoinviteyoutoattendit.Theartfestivalwillbeheldfrom8a.mto5p.m.nextFridayintheschoolhallwhichwillcoverawiderangeofappealingactivities.YoucanenjoybeautifulChinesepaintingsandcalligraphyworksinthefestival.Therearealsosomehands-onactivitieslikepapercuttingandpaintingPekingOperafacialmasks.I’msureyou’lllikeit.Willyoubeavailablethatday?LookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyYours,LiHua英语试题读后续写评分标准及流程一、写作思路1.基本情节前文大意：退伍军官TimRobinson独自在海边散步，不小心踩到水草滑倒在地，摔伤了腿。不幸的是，他既没有带手机，也无人可以求救。他利用之前的部队知识进行自救，经过多次不懈的尝试只能选择爬行，并利用手电筒发出求救信号，终于得到远方的回应。续写思路：结合原文，由续写第一段首句“Timfinallygotaresponsefromthedistance”可以预测续写第一段主要内容：是谁给Tim做出回应？是如何回应的？又是如何救助Tim的？（此处可以有对话——询问状况，动作——实施firstaid以及情感描述）。由第二段首句“Tim’sconditionwasworsethanMrs.Robinsonthought.”可以预测：是Tim的妻子发现了他发出的求救信号，并做出反应（用手电筒回应或者大喊，打急救电话，实施急救）。结合原文及续写第二段首句“Tim’sconditionwasworsethanMrs.Robinsonthought.”可以预测续写第二段主要内容:妻子发现Tim伤情严重，（此处需要对伤情展开适度描述——身体状况糟糕）。幸运的是，救护车及时赶到，Tim得到了及时的救助。故事结尾突出主题：Tim把部队所学生存技巧应用于实践中以及Tim面对困难时的坚强意志。2.续写要点（建议）：第一段：关键字：是谁给Tim做出回应？是如何回应的？又是如何救助Tim的？建议：注意两人之间的互动，情感、对话等细节描写第二段：关键字：伤情严重，救助及时，意志坚强。建议：对伤情展开适度描述，强调自救知识或生存技巧的重要性，突出故事主题。3.参考范文Onepossibleversion:Timfinallygotaresponsefromthedistance.Hewasexcitedtoseeatorchflashingback.Itwashiswifeshiningthetorchinresponsetohissignal.Thankfullyhiswifeknewsomethingmusthavebeenwrongandwentlookingforherhusband.Shekeptmovingtowardherhusband,shiningherlight.Allthewhile,Mrs.Robinsoncalledforhelp.Astheygotclosertoeachothershewaitedanxiouslyforhelptoarrive.Shehadnoideahowhurtherhusbandactuallywas.Tim’sconditionwasworsethanMrs.Robinsonthought.Tim’sbrokenleghurtincreasinglyworseandwasatriskofinfection.Heneededmedicalcareimmediately.Luckily,theambulancefinallyshowedup.Aftercheckinghisleg,themedicalworkerscouldn’tbelievewhathehadputhimselfthrough.Thismanhadcrawledsuchalongdistanceaftersufferingsuchawound.Ifithadn’tbeenforhistraininginthearmy,hemightnothavemadeit.He’llcarryhiscellphonewithhimatalltimesnow.