雅思写作完全攻略TotalSolutionofIELTSWriting俞伟国-2009-1雅思考试作文部分题型题型分值字数要求建议时间小作文图表作文(Report)1/3150words20mins大作文议论文(Essay)2/3250words40mins课时安排:MarkingSystemEssayWritingIntroductionBodyConclusionStructureReportWriting近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况(FromMatClark)Band4orbelow:15%-20%Band5:60%Band6:15%-20%Band7:5%Band8orabove:RareKeyLanguageFeaturesinMarkingSystemTaskResponse:1.Noevidenceofdigression/irrelevantcontent2.AdequateWords3.Position+SupportingIdeas+DevelopmentCoherenceandCohesion1.Logicaloverallstructure2.TopicSentence3.CohesivedevicesLexicalResource1.Accurateness2.AuthenticVocabulary(Less-commonVocabulary)3.VarietyGrammaticalRangeandAccuracy1.Accurateness2.ComplexSentence3.Variety2ChapterOne-EssayWriting第一章.议论文完全攻略___________________________________________________________________________________________________PartOne-Introduction-闪亮开篇--Version5.7-StructureofIntroduction1.BackgroundInformation(1).Lead-inSentence(Introducethesubjectofthetopic)(2).PublicOpinion2.Statement(Stateyourposition)1.主体背景(BackgroundInformation)(1)Inthelastcentury,thefirstmanwalkingonthemoonsaid:“Itisabigstepformankind”.However,somepeoplethinkitmadelittledifferencetopeople’slives.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(2006.4.8)______________________________,when________________________________________________________________forthefirsttime,he_____________________________________________________thatitwasagreatstepformankind.Nowadays,however,somepeoplebelievethatitactually_____________________________________________________LanguageSkill:Paraphrase方法之一-具体化(笼统概念-缩小范围)(2)Foodcanbeproducedmuchmorecheaplytodaybecauseofimprovedfertilizersandbettermachinery.However,somepeoplethinkthemethodsusedtodothismayhavenegativeeffectsonlocalcommunitiesandbedangeroustohumanhealth.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(2005.2.5)Nowadayspeoplecan_______________foodfarmore________________________________________more_______________fertilizersandmachinery.Nevertheless,somepeopleholdthemethodsusedmay____________________________________________________________________________________________________LanguageSkill:Paraphrase方法之二-单词转换(优先考虑三大词类:)Paraphrase方法之三-句型转换(方法1)(方法2)(3)Manypeoplesayteachersshouldonlyteachstudentsacademicsubjects;Otherssayteachersshouldalsotaketheresponsibilityofteachingstudentstojudgewhatisrightandwrong.Discussthebothviewpointsandgiveyourownopinion.(2006.3.18)Somepeopleholdtheopinionthat___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whilesomearguethat____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3LanguageSkill:句型转换(方法3)(4)Somepeoplebelievethatairtravelshouldbeprohibitedasitusesupfuelresourcesandcausespollution.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?Youshoulduseyourownexperiencetosupportyourargument.(2006.2.18)Accordingtosome__________,airtravelshouldbe_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LanguageSkill:Paraphrase思路顺序:单词转换句型转换具体化(5)Somepeoplebelievethatscientificresearchshouldbeconductedbythegovernmentratherbyprivatecompanies.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(2005.12.10)Somepeopleproposethat_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LanguageSkill:句型转换(方法4)(6).Inmodernsociety,therearemoreandmoreoldpeople,doyouthinkitsbenefitsoutweighitsdisadvantages?(2006.2.12)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LanguageSkill:信息量偏少的TopicIntroduction写作对策追根溯源法-Factor(s)[因]-Phenomenon(Subject)[果]2.总论点(Statement)Topic-Ifchildrenbehavebadly,shouldtheirparentsacceptresponsibilityandalsobepunished?AverageExample:Inmyopinion,theparentsshouldnotbepunished.DecentExample:Inmyopinion,theparentsshouldnotbepunishedexceptthat(unless)theyarethosewhopurposefullyteachthechildtobehavebadly.Topic-Somepeoplethinkthatitisbeneficialforstudentstogotoprivatesecondaryschools.Butothersfeelthatithasnegativeeffectsonthem.Discussthebothviewpointsandgiveyouropinion.(2006.6.24)Frommypointofview,itisanidealchoicetosendchildrentoprivatemiddleschools______________________________Exercise1:Topic-Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LanguageSkill:句型转换(方法5)Exercise2:Topic-Shouldcollegestudentsbeencouragedtotakeuppart-timejobs?____________________________