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Alittlefiremancontinuationwriting-情节的逻辑性和语言的丰富性注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右。2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:ThreedayslaterFiremanPhilipandhismenarrivedatthehospitalasscheduled._____________________________________________________________________________________...Paragraph2:Hisdayasarealfiremanstarted._____________________________________________________________________________________________________...wardwasfilledwithsadnessdreamoutofbreaththelong-lostexcitementfirestationfireenginedeeplymovedWednesdaymorningfireuniformWhatisthetypeofwriting?A.narrative(记叙文）B.exposition（说明文)C.argumentation(议论文）when,where,who,what,why,howThebasicplotsofthestorywhowhenwhatwhyYoungmotherBobPhilipAcoldSundaymorning,WednesdaymorningmakeBob’sdreamcometrueBobwasdyingFurtherReadingQ:HowwasBob?Wecouldinferfrom……*Helookedsosmallandweakthatevenagentletouchcouldbreakhim.*Thoughthewordscosthimmuchstrength,andhewasnowcoughingandoutofbreathusedetaileddescription(细节描写)toshowcharactersmallandweakQ:Howdidtheyoungmotherfeelwhenhersonwasdying?ShewasfilledwithsadnessQ:HowdidtheyoungmotherfeelwhenPhilipdecidedtohelpher?gratefulHecouldseethatthemother’seyeswereglitteringwithgratitudeQ:Didshedoanythingforherson?Shewantedtomakeherson’sdreamcometrue,sobeggedPhilipforhelpusedetaileddescription(细节描写)toshowcharacter…beanhonoraryfiremanforthewholedayandgetarealuniform…comedowntothefirestationandgooutonallfirecalls…takearideonthefireengineQ:InordertomakeBob’sdreamcometrue,whatwouldPhilipdo?Whatwouldhappeninthehospital?Paragraph1:ThreedayslaterFiremanPhilipandhismenarrivedatthehospitalasscheduled…wardwasfilledwithsadnessdreamoutofbreaththelong-lostexcitementfirestationfireenginedeeplymovedWednesdaymorningfireuniformTrytousethefollowingwordsParagraphA:ThreedayslaterFiremanPhilipandhismenarrivedatthehospitalasscheduled.TheyrushedintoBob’sward.Bobjumpedwithjoyandwonderedwhytheycamehere.“Bob,youhavetotakeonalotofresponsibilitiestoday,soyoucan’trelaxanymore!”FiremanPhilipspokequicklybeforeBobcouldsayanything.Meanwhile,anotherfiremanaskedBobtodresshimselfintothefireuniform.Bobdidn’tknowwhathappened.Hejustrealizedthathewasafiremannow.Fewminuteslater,theyheadedforthefirestationimmediately.ComparisonParagraphB:ThreedayslaterFiremanPhilipandhismenarrivedatthehospitalasscheduled.ThemotherwassoexcitedthatsheledthemtoBob’swardwithoutdelay.Onseeingthefiremen,Bobstruggledtositupandtriedtogreetthem.Philipquicklysteppedforwardandgavehimabighug.“Welcometobeamemberofus.Mylittlefireman!”theyhelpedBobsitup,dressedhiminhisfireuniformandwheeledhimtothewaitingtruckatthegate.“Arealfireengine!”Bobscreamedexcitedly.WithPhilipleadingtheway,Bobdirectedthetruckbacktothefirestation.Tip:Acoherentparagraphisbasedonlogicalfactsreferredfromrelatedcluesinthecontext.（条理清楚的段落是建立在合逻辑的事实基础上的，而这些事实应根据上下文的相关线索来推断。）DetaileddescriptionFromwhichaspect?①herheartwasfilledwithsadness/themothercouldfeelthelong-lostexcitementfeelingsbehavior③cough，outofbreath,beg,struggletositup,triedtogreet...facialexpressionlanguage②eyeswereglitteringwithgratitude/hiseyesglitteringwithexcitement④“mydreamofbeingarealfiremanisfinallytoberealized!”Paragraph2:Hisdayasarealfiremanstarted._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________...Whatwouldhedothewholeday?Findoutsomerelatedclues(相关的线索）inthecontext.…beanhonoraryfiremanforthewholedayandgetarealuniform…comedowntothefirestationandgooutonallfirecalls…takearideonthefireengineMorethan……rescuepeoplefrom……answerfirecalls……putthefireout…HowwouldBobfeel?happy,nervous,upset,excited,satisfied？