考点巩固卷22 书面表达之建议信（解析版）

资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】1考点巩固卷22书面表达之建议信高考真题1．【2023▪新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.提出建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后试卷第2页，共19页练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建议：suggestion→advice选择：choose→select2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（运用了现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）2．（2023·北京·统考高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：(1)活动形式；(2)活动内容。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】3【答案】DearJim,Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.Youcanshowcasegarbageclassificationonsite,planttreesandpublicizesharingeconomy,whichwillallfitintothethemeof“GreenBeijing”.Hopefully,youwillgetsomeinspirationfrommysuggestions.Wishyousuccess.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→tip提供：offer→provide开展：carryout→conduct主题：theme→topic2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmydhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.拓展句：Sinceyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.【点睛】[高分句型1]Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)3．（2021·北京·高考真题）【北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表达歉意并说明原因;2.提出建议并给出理由。注意：试卷第4页，共19页1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.HowaboutgoingoutnextSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetattheschoolgateat9:00.Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。【详解】1.词汇积累通知：tell→inform除此之外：inaddition→besides适合：fit→suit有空的：available→free2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeafl