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►第09讲自然环境描写（讲义）目录目标1的描写景、物环境目标2地点方位的描写目标3天气的描写目标4气氛的描写目标5经典赏析目标6真题感悟一的描写景、物环境对景、物等的描写通常会直接使用物作主语，或者用拟人化的修辞手法。（2023年浙江卷1月）Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingto1.conveysomedeep,unspokengratitude.那只鸟似乎在等着我，它那明亮的眼睛盯着我，仿佛在试图表达某种深深的、不言而喻的感激之情。2.（2024届广东省四校高三第一次联考试题）Afewhoursintothetrek,hesaweyesinthedistance,sohegrabbedhisbatbeforerealizingitwasjustastraydog.长途跋涉几个小时后，他看到了远处的眼睛，所以他抓起了球棒，才意识到那只是一只流浪狗。3.Themoonwashedthewoodsinagentlelight.Thestarstwinkledlikeachild’scuriouseyesblinkingwithanticipation.月亮用柔和的光洗刷着树林星星闪烁着，像孩子好奇的眼睛闪烁着期待。4.Thesoundcameswiftlynearer,andbecameawildroar,fillingthewholevalley.这声音很快就走近了，变成了狂吼，响彻整个山谷。5.Duringautumn,thesesamemountainsaregold,andinwintertheyarecoveredinsheetsofwhitefrost.在秋天，这些山是金色的，而在冬天，它们身披白露。6.Theroaroftheoceanwavesandcriesoftheseabirdsmakeupthemusicofthecoast.海浪的咆哮和海鸟的鸣叫组成了海岸的音乐。7.Theleaveshadalmostallfallenoff,creatingaseaoffierycolorsthatcrunchedbeneathourfeet.几乎所有的叶子都掉下来了，在我们的脚下形成一片火红色的海洋。我们踩上去发出嘎吱嘎吱的声响。8.TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.漫步街头，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉落，在微风中轻轻摇摆，飘然落地。9.Bathedinthegoldensunlight,thesearippledandsparkledcharmingly.大海沐浴在金色的阳光下,荡漾着迷人的波光。10.Inaninstant,everythinghadsuddenlygonequiet.Birdsdidn'tchirp,leavesdidn'trustleandinsectsdidn'tsing.Afeelingofstillnesscreptuponme刹那间,万物突然安静。鸟儿不再鸣叫,树叶不再沙沙作响,昆虫停止歌唱。一种寂静的感觉悄然向我袭来。11.Birdswerechattering/twitteringsomewhere.鸟儿在某处唧唧喳喳地叫着。12.Onaquitemorninginthemountains,feelthesunonyourskinandbreatheinthesweetscentoffreshflowerswhilebirdsgreetthenewdaywiththeirmorningsong.山中宁静的清晨，感受阳光洒在你的身上，呼吸鲜花的芳香，聆听鸟儿们用它们的歌声迎接新的一天。二地点方位的直接描写1.Thepeacefullandscapeisatruefeastfortheeyes,withitsrollinggreenhillsdottedwithsheepandcattle.绵延起伏的青山上散落着牛羊，这幅祥和宁静的景象真让人赏心悦目。2.Mist-coveredmountainsweredottedwithsmallfarmsandvillages.雾蒙蒙的山上星星点点地散落着小农场和村落。3.Thepathiswindingandwesawmountainstoweringoverthegreenvalleysandcliffsthatseemedendless.小路蜿蜒曲折,我们看到高山耸立在绿色的山谷和悬崖上，似乎没有尽头。4.Atthatmoment,Inoticedmyfathermadeaturnoffthehighwayanddrovepastasignthatread“AirportParking”.就在那一刻，我注意到我的父亲在高速公路上转弯，开车经过了一个写着“机场停车”的标志。5.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtothespotthatthebearhadfinallytoredownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.当我们安全地坐在空中的直升机上时，我惊讶地发现，熊终于撕毁了栅栏，向我们留下的食物跑去。6.Nomorethan30pacesawayinthebogwasahugeAlaskantimberwolf-caughtinoneofTrapperGeorge’straps.不到30步远的沼泽地里，一只巨大的阿拉斯加大灰狼被捕猎者TrapperGeorge的陷阱困住了。三天气的描写天气的描写属于情节的一部分，但不建议大篇幅进行描写。为了渲染气氛，烘托情节，可以细化到风、雪、雨、雷、阴、晴等。No.1.风1.Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。2.Thewindwassobone-chillingthatIcouldn'tstopshiveringfromthecod.寒风刺骨，我冷得不停打哆嗦。3.Outside,thewindsblewthetreesandbeatagainstthehouse,whichmadepeopleunabletoonetheireyes.外面，风吹着树，拍打着房子，使人们无法睁开眼睛。4.Asthewindblows,wecanheartheleavesrustlinginthetrees.随着风的吹拂,我们可以听到树沙沙作响。5.Itwasgettingdarkandthewinddiedaway.天渐渐黑了，风渐渐小了。6.Thebreezegentlykissedhischecks.微风轻柔地亲吻着他的脸庞。No.2.雨1.Iwasdisturbedbytheannoyingsoundoftherain.淅淅沥沥的雨声扰乱了我的思绪。2.Immediately,sheetsofbitterlycoldrainfilledtheair.顷刻间，空中下起了阵阵刺骨的冷雨。3.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨倾盆，溪水上涨，狂风咆哮这撞击房屋。4.Thoughtherainstopped,thewindrushedbyandwhistledandmadestrangesounds.雨虽停了，风却呼啸而过，发出奇怪的声音。5.Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨滴敲打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。6.Itwasrainingcatsanddogsyesterdayafterschool,andIwasallwetwhenIgothome.昨天放学的时候下着倾盆大雨，我到家时全身都湿了。7.Therewasaheavydownpour.Unfortunately,Tomwascaughtintheheavyrain.下了一场大暴雨。不幸的是，Tom在暴雨中被淋成了落汤鸡。No.3.雪1.Thefrozensnowcrunchedunderourfeet.冻结的雪在我们的脚下嘎吱作响。2.Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.雪覆盖了每一个屋顶,压在老树的枝丫上。3.Thecountrysidewastransformedintoahugewhiteplainbythesnow.It'sdarknowandthesnowisfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingdown.乡村被雪变成了一片巨大的白色平原。现在天黑了，雪还在下，一片片湿漉漉的雪花飘落下来。4.Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.鹅毛般的雪花在夜空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的画。No.4.雾1.Theviewwasobscuredbyfog.雾中景色朦胧。2.Thehillswereenvelopedindensefog.群山被浓雾笼罩着。3.Themorningfogblockedourview.清晨的雾挡住了我们的视线。4.Thefogsoonencompassedthewholevalley.雾很快笼罩了整个山谷。5.Thetownwascoveredinathickblanketoffog.大雾笼罩着这个城镇。6.Theheavyfogseemedtobecastinganetoverme.浓雾似乎在我身上撒下了一张网。No.5.太阳1.Thisweatheristerrible.Iamsweatinglikeapig,althoughI'mnotdoinganything.天热得吓人，虽然我什么都没做，但还是汗流浃背。2.Inthisheat,eventhetreesappeareddefeated,withleavesdroopinglifelessly.在这种炎热的天气里、连树木都显得萎靡不振,树叶都毫无生气地垂落着。3.Thesunwasatitshighest.TheheatbeatdownonmyheadasifIwasbaconunderthegrill.太阳处于最高点,热浪击打在头上，我好像烤架下的培根一样。4.Thewaterwasdeepblueandthesunlightglitteredonitsglass-clearsurface.湖水深蓝，阳光在风平浪静的湖面上熠熠生辉。No.6.雾1.Thecloudshadspreadandnearlycoveredtheentiresky.云层散开，几乎遮住了整个天空。2.Theskywasfullofdarkmassesofclouds.天空中乌云密布。3.Byafternoon,thecloudshaveclearedaway.到了下午，云已经散去。4.Theskywasovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds,andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.天阴沉沉的，乌云密布，整个世界仿佛都被笼罩在一张巨大的灰色被子里。No.7.雷电1.Anashoflightningflashedacrossthesky.一道闪电划过天空。2.Outside,thunderboomedandcrashed.外面雷声隆降，发出巨响。3.Th