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题型19读后续写第一步读文章、定线索。01题型解读02答题模板构建03满分词汇模板04满分句型模板命题特点读后续写是浙江卷率先引入的新题型，根据所提供的350以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写，集阅读和写作为一体，旨在考查考生的综合语言运用能力。阅读材料一般以记叙文为主，夹叙夹议文为辅。故事浅显易懂，但故事情节曲折动人。写作特点：1.逻辑性。2.创造性。3.语篇构建能力。写作要求：1.词数要求：词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。2.与所给短文及段落开头语衔接合理。3.使用语言结构和词汇的丰富性及准确性。4.上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。第二步读续写首句，定续写思路。第三步拟草稿、修病句。第四步工整眷写、字迹清晰。【典例】【2024·河南·统考模拟预测】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Lastsummer,Hildaworkedasavolunteerwithdolphintrainersatasealifepark.Herjobwastomakesurethetankswerefreeofanyitemssothatthetrainerscouldtrainthedolphinstofetchspecificitems.However,onedayaftercleaning,oneofthedolphins,Maya,presentedHildawithacandywrapperfromthetank.WhenKatherine,thetrainer,sawthis,sheblamedHildaforhercarelessness.Upsetbutnotdiscouragedbythisevent,HildadecidedtodosomespyingonMaya.Thenextmorning,Hildaarrivedattheparkearly.Sheputonherscubagear(水下呼吸器)andjumpedintothetankforherusual,underwatersweep.Findingnothinginthetank,sheclimbedoutofthewaterjustintimetoseeKatherinejumpinginontheotherside.Afterwhathappenedyesterday,Hildaknewwhatshewasdoing.ShewatchedasKatherineperformedherunderwatersearch,butHildawasn’tsurprisedwhenshesurfacedempty-handed.Duringthetanksweeps,Mayahadbeenswimmingplayfully,butnowthedolphinstoppedsuddenlyandswamtothebackpartofthetankwherethefilter(过滤)boxwaslocated.Shestuckhernosedownbehindtheboxandthenswamaway.WhatwasMayadoingbackthere?Hildawondered.Shejumpedbackintothewaterandswamovertotakealookbehindthebox,andherquestionwasanswered.HildathenswamacrossthetankfollowingMaya’spathandemergedfromthewatertofindKatherineremovingherscubagear.AsKatherineturnedaround,hermouthdroppedopen.TherewasMayaattheedgeofthetankwithacomb(梳子)inhermouthwaitingforhertreat.“Maya!Wheredidyougetthat?”demandedKatherine,takingthecombandthrowingherafish.“Iknowwhereshegotit,”declaredHildaclimbingoutofthetankwithahandfulofitemsstillwetfromtheirwatery,restingplace.“What’sallthis?”Katherineasked,obviouslyconfused.注意：(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“ThisisMaya’ssecret,”Hildasaidwithabigsmile.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________NowKatherinerealizedwhathadbeengoingon.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分句型模板之状语】1.Katherineasked,obviouslyconfused.凯瑟琳问，显然很困惑。2.Catherineaskedinsurprise.凯瑟琳吃惊地问道。3.Catherinethoughttoherself,...凯瑟琳心里想，......4.Fromthenon,theSeaLifeParkisfullofwarmthandharmony.从那时起，海洋生物公园就充满了温暖与和谐。5....Hildasaidwithabigsmile.......希尔达笑着说。6.Upsetbutnotdiscouragedbythisevent,HildadecidedtodosomespyingonMaya.希尔达很沮丧，但她决定监视玛雅。【满分句型模板之从句】1.Thetruthofthematter,Hildacontinued,isthatMayahasbeensecretlycollectingitemsfromthetank,hidingthemnearthefilterinthebackofthetank.希尔达继续说，事实是，玛雅一直在秘密地从坦克中收集物品，并把它们藏在坦克后面的过滤器附近。2.NowKatherinerealizedwhathadbeengoingon.现在凯瑟琳意识到到底发生了什么事。3.Whenyoutrainher,shewillgiveyousomeitemssothatshecangettreatsfromyou.当你训练她时，她会给你一些东西，这样她就可以从你那里得到食物。【满分作文模板】【模板】1.文章线索：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了希尔达在一家海洋生物公园与海豚训练员凯瑟琳一起做志愿者，以及她们和海豚玛雅之间的故事。2.续写线索：由第一段首句内容“‘这是玛雅的秘密，’希尔达笑着说。”可知，第一段可描写玛雅的秘密是什么。3.由第二段首句内容“现在凯瑟琳意识到发生了什么事。”可知，第二段可描写凯瑟琳的对这件事的反应以及事情的结果。【范文】“ThisisMaya’ssecret,”Hildasaidwithabigsmile.Thetruthofthematter,Hildacontinued,isthatMayahasbeensecretlycollectingitemsfromthetank,hidingthemnearthefilterinthebackofthetank.Whenyoutrainher,shewillgiveyousomeitemssothatshecangettreatsfromyou.“Really?Howdoyouknowthat?”Catherineaskedinsurprise.Hildalaughedandreplied,“Ittookmealongtimetodiscoverthissecret,too.It’snoteasytofollowMaya.”NowKatherinerealizedwhathadbeengoingon.Catherinethoughttoherself,thisisreallyacleverdolphin.AndshesaidtoHilda,“Well,Mayalovestreats,sowe’llworktogether,andyou’llsecretlyhelphercollectafewthingsandputtheminthefilteratthebackofthetank.I’llgivehertreats,thenumberofwhichIcanincrease.”Hildareplied,“Goodidea,let’sdoit.”Fromthenon,theSeaLifeParkisfullofwarmthandharmony.Maya’sperformanceinfrontoftheaudienceisgettingbetterandbetter.1.（2024·广东深圳·高三统考期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasaSaturday.Whetheritwassunnyorcloudy,hotorcold,Icannotremember,butIdorememberitwasaSaturdaybecausethemallwasfullofpeople.Iwaswithmymom.Itiseasytomissherinacrowdsimplybecausesheissoordinary.Onthatdaywewalkedcasually,takingquicklooksatthestorewindowsbecausewebothknewwewouldn’tbebuyingmuch,likealways.Iremember