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资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。Inthebeginningofyears,whentheworldwassonewandtheAnimalswerejustbeginningtoworkforMan,therewasaCamel,andhelivedinthemiddleofaHowlingDesertbecausehedidnotwanttowork;andbesides,hewasaHowlerhimself.Whenanybodyspoketohimhesaid＇Humph!'Just“Humph!'andnomore.PresentlytheHorsecametohimonMondaymorning,withasaddle(鞍)onhisbackandabitinhismouth,andsaid,“Camel,OCamel,comeoutandrunliketherestofus.”“Humph!”saidtheCamel;andtheHorsewentawayandtoldtheMan.PresentlytheDogcametohim,withastickinhismouth,andsaid,“Camel,OCamel,comeandfetchandcarryliketherestofus.”“Humph!”saidtheCamel;andtheDogwentawayandtoldtheMan.PresentlytheOxcametohim,withtheyokeonhisneckandsaid,“Camel,OCamel,comeandplough(耕田)liketherestofus.”“Humph!”saidtheCamel;andtheOxwentawayandtoldtheMan.AttheendofthedaytheMancalledtheHorseandtheDogandtheOxtogether,andsaid,“Three,OThree,I'mverysorryforyou(withtheworldsonew-and-all);butthatHumph-thingintheDesertcan'twork,orhewouldhavebeenherebynow,soIamgoingtoleavehimalone,andyoumustworkdouble-timetomakeupforit.”ThatmadetheThreeveryangry(withtheworldsonew-and-all),andtheythoughttheCamelwasagood-for-nothingontheedgeoftheDesert;andtheCamelcamechewingonmilkweed,andlaughedatthem.Thenhesaid'Humph!'andwentawayagain.PresentlytherecamealongtheDjinninchargeofAllDeserts,rollinginacloudofdust(DjinnsalwaystravelthatwaybecauseitisMagic),andhestoppedtotheCamelandpow-powwiththeThree.＂DjinnofAllDeserts,saidtheHorse,“isitrightforanyonetobeidle,withtheworldsonew-and-all?“Certainlynot,”saidtheDjinn.Paragraph1:“Well,”saidtheHorse,“there'sathingthathasdonenothingsinceMondaymorning.Hewon'trun.”Paragraph2:AndtheCamelsaid'Humph!'again,butnosoonerhadhesaiditthanhesawagreatbiglollopinghumph(驼峰)(wecallit'hump'now,nottohurthisfeelings)onhisback.资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【参考范文】Paragraph1：“Well,”saidtheHorse,“there'sathingthathasdonenothingsinceMondaymorning.Hewon'trun.”“Oh!”saidtheDjinn,whistling,“that’smyCamel.Heshouldbemostpowerfulamongallofyou.Didn’thedomostofthejob?Whatdoeshesayaboutit?”“No,notatall.Heonlysays‘Humph!’”saidtheDog;“andhewon’tfetchandcarry.”“Verygood,”saidtheDjinn.“I’llchangehimifyouwillkindlywaitaminute.”TheDjinnwalkedacrossthedesert,andfoundtheCamelmostidle,lookingathisownreflectioninapoolofwater.“Myfriend,”saidtheDjinn,“Ihearyouhavedonenowork,withtheworldsonew-and-all?”Paragraph2：AndtheCamelsaid'Humph!'again,butnosoonerhadhesaiditthanhesawagreatbiglollopinghumph(驼峰)(wecallit'hump'now,nottohurthisfeelings)onhisback.“Doyouseethat?”saidtheDjinn.“That’syourveryownhumpthatyou’vebroughtuponyourveryownselfbynotworking.TodayisThursday,andyou’vedonenoworksinceMonday,whentheworkbegan.Nowyouaregoingtowork.”TheCamelwentawaytojointheThree.Andfromthatdaytothisheworkssilentlyallthetimebutalwayswearsahump.【文章概要】文章讲述一只在沙漠中无所事事的骆驼。因为骆驼不愿干事情而引起了马，狗和牛的不满。最终掌管沙漠的精灵来了。【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：“是这样，”马儿说，“有只动物从星期一早上起就没做什么事情。他不会跑。”所以这一段应该写精灵听了所有动物对骆驼的抱怨后找到了骆驼。第二段开头是：骆驼说:“哼!可他刚说完，就看见背上有个巨大的驼峰(我们现在叫它“驼峰”，免得伤了他的感情)。所以这段主要写骆驼收到了惩罚，从此带着驼峰加入其他动物的行列默默的工作。最后还要注意所续写短文的基础时态为一般过去时,由于本篇文章人物角色存在动物视角，需要注意人称，且对话过程一般又会使用现在进行时，需要注意转化从句使用定语从句：That’syourveryownhumpthatyou’vebroughtuponyourveryownselfbynotworking；条件状语从句：I’llchangehimifyouwillkindlywaitaminute.资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。Iwaswalkingdownthemuddyroadonedaywhenmycellphonerang.Achild'svoiceontheotherendspoketomesoftly,Dad,pleasecomehacksoon.Imissyousomuch!”Unconsciously,Iknewitwasawrongnumberonceagain.Idon’thaveasingledaughter.Ijusthaveasix-year-oldson.Itisnotunusualtoreceivethiskindofcallsnowadays,soIrepliedrudely,You'vedialedthewrongnumber!”andthenhungupinanger.Duringthefollowingdays,Igotthesamecallnowandthen.Itdisturbedme,soIeitherrejectedherorhunguprightawayrudely.Icouldn’thelpcomplainingaboutthis,“Whatanimpolitegirl!Howcanshecallmeupoverandoveragain?”How1wishedthelittlegirlwouldstopcausinganytroubletomesomeday!Suddenly,thephonerangupagain.Itwasfromthesamegirl-Itseemedthatshewouldnotgiveupuntilshegotananswer.Sheconstantlycalledmeup.EvenifIdidnotgiveherananswer,shestilldialedmynumberfromtimetotime.EventuallyIunwillinglyansweredthephone.1heardtheweakvoiceofthatlittlegirl,“Dad,pleasecomebacknow.Imissyousomuch!Momtoldmethiswasnotawrongnumber.Itisyourcellphonenumber,right?Dad,Iaminsomuchpain!Momsaidyouweretoobusytotakecareofme.Sheistiredoutfromlookingafterme.Dad,Iknowyouarebusy.Ifyoucannotcomehome,pleasekissmeagaininthephone,OK?”Theinnocentrequestwasdifficulttoreject.Imadealoudkissintothephoneandheardaweakvoicesaying,“Thankyou....Dad,Iamso...happy,so…happyParagraph1:Shortlyafterthis,Ibecameinterestedinwhohadbeenontheotherendofmyphone.Paragraph2:Icouldn’twaittoaskthewomanhowherdaughterwas.资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【文章概要】通过阅读所给文章可知，作者无意中接到一个女孩找爸爸的错误来电并粗鲁挂断之后，女孩依旧不时地拨打作者的号码，即使并未得到答复。在意识到女孩不会轻易放弃后，作者最终接了女孩的电话。感动于女孩对爸爸的想念，作者应其请求，在电话中给了她一个吻，女孩也因为这个吻而感到格外的开心。【参考范文】Paragraph1:Shortlyafterthis,Ibecameinterestedinwhohadbeenontheotherendofmyphone.WhenIcalledthenumberback,awomananswered,“Sorry,sir.Iamreallysorrytobotheryou.Ididw