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资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已经为你写好。Myin-laws(公公婆婆)lovedtotravelandeverywinterwouldvisitdifferentcountries.Whiletheyweregone,somefriendsmovedintotheirhousesoitwouldnotbeleftempty.ThisyearitwasdecidedthatIwouldbetheonetomoveintotheirhouse.Fortunately,Iwasallowedtoreturnhomeontheweekend.Itriedtokeepmyselfbusy.EachdayIwalkeddowntothebottomofthedrivewaytocollectthemail,sewedcurtainsforfourlargewindows,filledthebirdfeeders,cleanedthehousefromtoptobottom.watchedanoccasionalTVshowandspentadisappointingcoupleofhourstryingtogetonthedial-upInternet.Chattingwithfriendsandfamilyonthephonehelpedcomfortme,buttheseconversationsandthesimplechoresdidn'ttotallyfillmytime.BasicallyIdidwhateverIcouldtokeepmymindoffthefactthatIwastherealone.OnFridayIwouldheadbacktothecitytomeetupwithfriendsandspendtimewithmyhusbandandourfamily.OnMonday,thecarfilledwithgroceries.I'dmakethedrivebacktomyin-laws'house.Duringmythirdweekinthecountrythetemperaturedroppedandamassivesnowstormsetin.Thedrivewaywasfilledquicklywithwet,heavysnow.Ihadn'tseenthatmuchsnowsinceIwasachild.andlovelyasitwas.IfearedthatIwouldn'tbeabletogetout.Itwasverycoldandeverydaythesnowkeptfalling.OnThursdaynightitstartedtorain.WithasinkingheartIknewIwouldn'tbegoinghomethatweekend.Disappointedandfeelingverylow,Iworriedaboutnothavingenoughfood.WhatwouldIdoifthepowerwentout?WhatifIfellill?FridaymorningIawoketoawinterwonderland.Thetreeswereweigheddownwithiceandthesurroundingcountrysidewasblanketedinadeephillofunbrokenwhite.Ifeltveryhelpless.Paragraph1:SuddenlyIheardanoiseandIquicklyranacrosstheroomtothewindow.Paragraph2:AsIstoodtherewatching,IrealizedthatImighthaveaslimchancethatIwouldgetout.资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】【文章概要】通过阅读所给文章可知,作者的公公婆婆喜欢旅游,每年冬天会去不同的国家。当他们离开后,一些朋友搬进了他们的房子,这样房子就不会空着了。今年决定由作者来搬进他们的房子。幸运的是,作者被允许在周末回家。在第三个星期时,气温下降了,一场巨大的暴风雪来临了,作者知道自己那个周末回不了家了。失望,情绪低落。作者担心着各种可能会发现的坏事。星期五早上,作者一觉醒来,就看到了一个冬天的仙境。树木被冰压垮了,周围的乡村被覆盖在连绵不断的白雪皑皑的深山中。作者感到很无助。【参考范文】Paragraph1:SuddenlyIheardanoiseandIquicklyranacrosstheroomtothewindow.Itwasfreezingcoldoutside,thelightwindblowingintothehouse.IsawamanthatIhadnevermetclearingthedriveway.ThenoiseIheardwashimtryingtobreakthroughtheicewithnothingmorethanaclearingtool.Whowasthisman?Whywasheclearingthedriveway?Althoughthemanworeathickcoatandascarf,hestillfeltbitterlycold.Paragraph2:AsIstoodtherewatching,IrealizedthatImighthaveaslimchancethatIwouldgetout.Thrilled,Iputonmycoatandbootsandwentouttohelphim.Ittookusfourhourstoclearthatdriveway.Hedidmostoftheheavywork.Itturnedoutthathewasmyin-laws'closestneighbourandbeforetheyleft,Momhadaskedhimtotakegoodcareofme.Shealsoexplainedtohimhowimportantitwasformetogobacktothecityontheweekend.Myheartwasfilledwiththankfulnesstomyin-lawsandthiskindman.【详解】续写部分分为两段,第一段开头:突然我听到一个声音,我迅速跑过房间到窗户那儿。所以后文应该是讲述作者去窗户那里看是谁发出的声音,是一个素未谋面的人正在清扫车道,作者感到疑惑。尽管这个人穿着厚厚的外套,围着围巾,他仍然感到刺骨的寒冷。第二段开头:我站在那里看着,我意识到我出去的机会可能很小。本段应该写作者和那个一起花了四个小时清理完了车道,最后发现他是作者公公婆婆的邻居,在他们离开之前,作者的公公婆婆让他好好照顾作者。她还向他解释周末回城里对我有多重要。作者的心里充满了对公公婆婆和这个善良的男人的感激。词汇词组:freezingcold;breakthrough;turnout;puton;befilledwith;thankfulness从句使用IsawamanthatIhadnevermetclearingthedriveway.定语从句Althoughthemanworeathickcoatandascarf,hestillfeltbitterlycold.让步状语从句资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已经为你写好。Thedarknesswasgatheringasshewobbled(颤颤巍巍)inhighheelsalongthesideofthehighway.Thecarhadcometoanunexpectedstop,andlikeateenagershedidtheonlythingshecouldthinkof...getoutandwalk.Itwascoldandlate,andhomewasfaraway.Thiscouldbealongnight.Ifonlysomeonewouldstopandofferheraride.Sheprayedforhelpanddraggedherselfforward.Thelightsofatruckshonefrombehindasitapproached.“Maybehewillstop,shehoped.Thebrakelightsflashedonasitstopped.Nextinstant,thecabdooropened.Awordlessinvitationwasextendedandsheunderstood.Withouthesitationthegirlclimbedupintothecabandclosedthedoor.Slowlythetruckpulledbackontotheroadanddisappearedintothenight,nevertobeseenagain.Iwokeupinacoldsweat,alarmed.Wasthatadreamorwasitavision?Itwasunbelievablyreal,andthegirlwasmydaughter!Ijumpedfrommybedandrantoherroom.Herbedwasempty.Istoodinhorrortryingtothinkwhyshehadnotcomehome.Asthementalfogbegantolift,Irememberedshewasvisitingherfriendthatevening.Perhapsshestayedthereforthenight.Itwas1:30a.m.,butIracedtothephoneanddialedanumber.“Hello?”Thevoicewasheavywithsleep.“Hey.Sorrytowakeyou.Beckididn'tcomehometonightandIwaswonderingifshestayedatyourplace?“No,shelefthereafewhoursago.Sheshouldhavebeenhomeatleastbymidnight!”Thevoiceontheotherendbegantoreflectmyownpanic.Overthenextforty-fiveminutesIalternatedbetweenlyinginprayandpacingthefloorinanxiety.At2:15a.m.lightsappearedasacarturneduponourlongdriveway.Icouldtellimmediatelythatitwasnotmydaughter'scar.Paragraph1:MyfacepressedagainstthewindowandIfoundithardtobreathe.Paragraph2:“Mom,shegavemearidehome.Beckisaid.资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】【文章概要】文章讲述了作者梦到自己的女儿在高速路上打车的场景。醒来后发现女儿真的不在家,而且作者从女儿的朋友处确认她已经离开,本该最迟在午夜回到家。作者很担心,在家里焦急地踱步。后来发现有车停靠近家的方向,但不是女儿的车。【参考范文】Paragraph1:MyfacepressedagainstthewindowandIfoundithardtobreathe.Thecarpulledinfrontofthehouse,andoutofi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