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资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。WhentheemployeesattheDomino’spizzaplaceinSalem,Oregon,hadn’treceivedanyorderfromKirkAlexanderformorethan2weeks,theyknewsomethingwasn’tright.Kirkwasaloyalcustomerandthestaffallknewhim.Soitwasnaturalthattheygotworriedwhentheyhadnonewsabouthim.Theirconcernsavedhislife.SarahFuller,thegeneralmanagerattheDomino’sbranch,saidthatKirk,whowas48yearsold,hadbeenaloyalcustomersince2009.“Heorderseveryday,oreveryotherday,”Sarahsaid.Normally,hisordercameuponthescreenbecauseheorderedonline.Sowesawitcameacrossthescreenandwewerethinking,“Oh,Kirk’sorder.”Afterafewdayswithoutasingleorder,Sarahandthestaffstartedtoworry.AfewDomino’sdrivershadmentionedthattheyhadn’tseenhisordercomeacrosstheirscreeninawhile.Sarahcheckedthesystemandsawthatnoorderhadcomein11days.Sotheydecidedtoinvestigate.SarahdecidedtosendTracyHamblen,adeliverdriver,toKirk’splace.Whenhegotthere,heimmediatelyknewsomethingwaswrong.WhilethelightsandTVwereon,Kirkdidnotcometothedoor.Additionally,hisphonewentdirectlytovoicemail.SoTracyimmediatelycalled911.Paragraph1:Whenthepolicearrivedattheplace,Paragraph2:Afewdayslater,Kirkwasreleasedfromthehospital.资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【文章概要】本文讲述了一个披萨店的员工，细心地发现近期没有收到来自老顾客Kirk的订单，于是派人前去查看，发现Kirk生病并及时报警就医，确保了Kirk的安全。员工的善举为披萨店赢得了更多的称赞和订单。资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【参考范文】Paragraph1：Whenthepolicearrivedattheplace,theyheardacryforhelpfromtheinsideofthehouse.Inside,theyfoundKirk,whowasinneedofimmediatemedicalhelp.DuetothequickactionsofTracy,KirkisinstableconditionattheSalemHospital.TheDomino’semployeesreceivedalotofpraiseonlinefortheirunbelievablethoughtfulness.Buttheysaidthatitwasjustpartoftheirjobandtheywerejustdoingtheirjob.Paragraph2：Afewdayslater,Kirkwasreleasedfromthehospital.HecametotheDomino’spersonallywithsomehomemadecookiestosaythank--youtoSarahandtheDomino’sstaff.TheDomino’smentionedthat“Caringforcustomersshouldnotbetakenatfacevalue.Weshouldrememberthatthecustomersdeterminethesuccessofourcompanyandinturnwecanalsohaveanimpactontheirlives,smallorbig.”Kirk’sstoryhasmadethispizzashopevenmorepopularinthecommunity,andithasreceivedmoreorderseversince.【详解】续写部分分为两段，续写线索：呼救——成功被救助——感谢——店员表达观点——披萨店更受欢迎第一段：由第一段首句内容“当警察赶到现场时，”可知，第一段可描写警察将Kirk送到医院的经过。第二段：首句内容“几天后，Kirk出院了。”可知，第二段可描写Kirk出院后去披萨店感谢员工们拯救了他的生命以及该披萨店因为善意举动而为自己赢得更多的订单和顾客。词汇运用行为类①大声求救：cryforhelp/shoutforhelp/screamforhelp②受到赞扬：receivedalotofpraise/bepraisedgreatly③照顾，护理：caringfor/takingcareof/情绪类①.感谢：saythank--you/expressappreciation/showappreciation/showhisgratitude/begrateful②.体贴：thoughtfulness/beingconsiderate高分句式Inside,theyfoundKirk,whowasinneedofimmediatemedicalhelp.(由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词Kirk。)Weshouldrememberthatthecustomersdeterminethesuccessofourcompanyandinturnwecanalsohaveanimpactontheirlives,smallorbig.(that引导宾语从句作remember的宾语。)资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。Twentyyearsago,Iwasataparty,talkingtoamanwhosenameIhavelongsinceforgotten.SometimesIthinkthismancameintomylifefortheuniquepurposeoftellingmethisstory,oneabouthowbrave,creativeandtrustinghisbrotherwas,whichhasdelightedandinspiredmeeversince.Forthepurposeofthisstory,let'scallthelittlebrotherLittleBrother.LittleBrother,ayoungpainter,wenttoFrancetosurroundhimselfwithbeautyandinspiration.Helivedonthecheap,paintedeveryday,visitedmuseums,traveledtopicturesqueplaces,bravelyspoketoeveryonehemet,andshowedhisworktoanyonewhowouldlookatit.Oneafternoon,hestruckupaconversationatacafewithagroupofcharmingyoungpeoplewhoturnedouttobesomefancynobles.TheytookalikingtoLittleBrotherandinvitedhimtoapartythatweekendinacastleintheLoireValley.Theysaidthiswasgoingtobethepartyoftheyear.ItwouldbeattendedbytherichandfamousandbyseveralcrownedheadsofEurope.Bestofallitwasamasqueradeball(化妆舞会)wherenobodywouldhesitateintheirspendingonthecostumes.“Dressup,”theysaid,“andjoinus!”Excited,LittleBrotherworkedallweekonacostumethathewascertainwouldbehighlyimpressive.Heheldbackonneitherthedetailsnortheimaginationofthiscreation.Thenherentedacaranddrovethreehourstothecastle.Hechangedintohiscostumeinthecarandwentupthecastlesteps.LittleBrotherenteredtheballroom,headheldhigh.Uponarrival,heimmediatelyrealizedhismistake.Thiswasindeedacostumeparty—hisnewfriendshadnotmisledhimthere—buthehadmissedonedetailintranslation:Thiswasathemedcostumeparty.Thethemewas“amedieval(中世纪的)court”.AndLittleBrotherwasdressedasalobster(龙虾).Allaroundhim,thewealthyandbeautifulweredressedinfancyclothes,wearingsparklingjewels.Paragraph1:Allaroundhim,thewealthyandbeautifulweredressedinfancyclothes,earingsparklingjewels.Paragraph2:Hetookadeepbreathandwalkedontothedancefloor.资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【文章概要】作者从朋友口中得知LittleBrother的一次舞会经历。LittleBrothe,一位年轻画家不怕出丑，扮成搞笑龙虾，参加富人的化妆舞会，勇敢地调侃幽默，化尴尬为快乐的故事。【参考范文】Paragraph1：Allaroundhim,thewealthyandbeautifulweredressedinfancyclothes,earingsparklingjewels.LittleBrother,ontheotherhand,waswearingaredcoat,redtights,redballetslippers,andgiantredclaws.Also,hisfacewaspaintedred.Hestoodatthetopofthestepsforonelong,frightfulmoment.Runningawayinshameseemedliketheeasiestresponse.Buthedidn'trun.S