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资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。Itookmycamera-thefirsttimeI'dtakenmycameraoutsincewecametothecountry-andwent,dressedinmydownjacketandwearingheavyboots.IwalkedtowardtheseeminglyabandonedhousethatIcouldseeacrossthefieldsfromtheupstairswindow.Atruckwasparkedattheendoftheroad,besideatiny.weather-beatenhouse.Therewassmokecomingoutofthechimney,andcurtainsinthetwolittlewindowsoneithersideofthedoor.Adogwasintheyard,whobarkedwhenhesawmecoming.Andbesidethetruck-no,actuallyinthetruck,oratleastwithhisheadinsideit,wasaman.“Hi,Icalled.Itwouldhavebeensillytoturnaroundandstartwalkinghomewithoutsayinganything,eventhoughI'vepromisedmyparentsallmylifethatIwouldnevertalktostrangemen.Heliftedouthishead,agrayhead,smiled-anicesmile-andsaid,MissChalmers.I'mgladyou'vecometovisit.“Meg,Isaid.Iwaspuzzled.HowdidheknowwhoIwas?＂ForMargaret?heasked,comingoverandshakingmyhand.Forgiveme.Myhandsareverydirty.Mybatterydiesinthiscoldweather.＂HowdidyouknowmynamewasChalmers?Hewipedhishandsonatowelthatwashangingfromthedoorhandleofthetruck.Mydear,Iapologize.Ihavenotevenintroducedmyself.MynameisWillBanks.Andit'smuchtoocoldtostandouthere.Yourfeetmustbefrozen,eveninthoseboots.Comeinside,andI'llmakeuseachacupoftea.AndI'lltellyouhowIknowyourname.”Istoodunmoved.Hesawmehesitate,andsmiled.Meg,hesaid,“I'mseventyyearsold.Completelyharmless,eventoabeautifulyounggirllikeyou.Comeoninandkeepmecompanyforabit,andgetwarm.Ilaughed,becauseheknewwhatIwasthinking,andveryfewpeopleeverknowwhatI'mthinking.ThenIwentinhishouse.Paragraph1:Hetookmyjacketandhungitupwithhis,andpouredteaintotwothickpotterymugs.Paragraph2:It'snicetohaveanewfriend,likeWill..资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【文章概要】作者搬家后第一次出去散步，在一个小木屋遇见了70多岁的WillBanks，WillBanks在打招呼时喊出了作者的名字，但是作者却不认识他，WillBanks邀请作者进屋喝杯茶，顺便讲述他为什么知道作者的名字。【参考范文】Paragraph1：Hetookmyjacketandhungitupwithhis,andpouredteaintotwothickpotterymugs.Afterwesatatthetable,Willtoldmethewholestory.Thehousemyfamilywaslivinginwasactuallybuiltbyhisgrandfather.Hewasborn,raisedandmarriedinthathouse.AlterhisMargaretdied,hemovedtothissmallhouse.Whenheheardmyparentswerelookingforaplace,heofferedthehousetothem.Hethoughtitwasaperfectplaceforawriterlikemyfather-thepeacetherestimulatedimagination.HesaidagainthathewasgladI'dcometovisit.Paragraph2：It'snicetohaveanewfriend,likeWill..Isuggestedtakingpicturesofhim.Mydear,hesaid,straighteninghisshouldersandbuttoningthetopbuttonofhisshirt.Iwouldbehonored.Thesoftlightwascominginthroughthekitchenwindowontohisface.Hesatrightthere,smilingandtalking.Ijustshotquickly.Yearslater,thosepicturesstillbroughtbackthewarmmemoriesofthatday.【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他拿着我的夹克衫和他的挂在一起，向两个厚陶杯里倒茶……，所以应该写进屋后的情况，即WillBanks向作者讲述是如何得知作者的名字的；第二段开头是：有一个像Will这样的朋友还不错……，本段应该作者听了Will讲述的故事后，把Will当成在这个陌生国家的朋友，提议给他拍些照片，多年后，这些照片仍能让作者想起那些温暖的回忆。高级词汇lookfor，suggestdoingsth.，bringback从句使用Afterwesatatthetable,Willtoldmethewholestory.After引导的时间状语从句HesaidagainthathewasgladI'dcometovisit.中that引导的宾语从句资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。In1989,freshoutofhighschool,Ihadthedifficulttaskofchoosingacareerpathbeforecollegestartedinthreemonths.InthosedaysinPakistan,therewerelimitedoptions:becomingadoctororanengineer,orenteringthefinancialworldaftergettingabusinessdegree.Iwasn'tinterestedInengineering,sothatIwasleftwithmedicineorbusiness.Icouldn'tdecide.Myuncle,aninfluentialpersoninthefamily,suggestedthatIdoaworkplacementtoexperienceitforamonthinaninternationalcompanyfollowedbyamonthinahospital.Afterthat,Icouldmakeadecision.Itseemedlikeabrilliantidea.Iwasacceptedforamonth'splacementataforeignbankinKarachi.Igotafeelforhowtheworldoffinancefunctioned,madenewfriends,andgenerallyenjoyedthemostlyeasy-goingworksurroundings.Themonthpassedrapidly,andsoonIbeganworkingataleadinghospitalinKarachi.Theexperiencecouldn'thavebeenmoredifferent.Thehospitalhadanintenseenvironment.Thedaysstartedearly(at7am,comparedto9amatthebank),andwerefilledwithendlessduties.Andthenightcalls!Thiswascrazy,workingallday,throughthenight,andagainthenextday.Ibeganthinkingaboutmytwoexperiences.Thebankhadofferedamorerelaxingatmosphere,betterworkinghoursandlessstress.Thehospitalwasfullofexcitementandunpredictability,butthestudyingandtrainingwasdifficult.Itseemedthatthebusinessoptionwasgoingtowinout.Neartheendofmymonthatthehospital,Iwasdrivinghomeafteranespeciallybusynightcall.Infrontofmewasapublicbus,withcollegestudentssittingonthetop.Asthedriverweavedthrough(穿梭)traffic,Icouldseetheboysshakingfromsidetoside.Paragraph1:Suddenly,aboyfelloffthebackofthebus.Paragraph2:Thenextday,whenIwenttohospitaltoseetheboy,allhisfamilygotup,withgratefulsmilesontheirfaces.资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【文章概要】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在毕业后，在叔叔的帮助下分别体验了银行和医院的工作。作者认为银行的工作相对轻松，而医院的工作繁忙且不可预知，因此，他在这两个工作中摇摆不定。有一天，他在一场交通事故中救助了一个受伤的男孩并及时将他送进了医院。在他第二天去看望男孩的时候，男孩的家人非常感激。最后，他明白了自己之后的工作方向。续写线索：(男孩的)危机——营救——看望男孩——男孩家人的反应——感悟【参考范文】Paragraph1：Suddenly,aboyfelloffthebackofthebus.Hehittheroadfacedownandrollerover.Helaymotionlessinthemiddleoftheroadasthebusdroveawayquickly.Thecarsdirectlybehindthebusbrakedtoavoi