第07讲 读后续写之“成长类”主题(练)(解析版)

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1►第07讲成长类(练)目录模拟12023·湖北·校联考模拟预测模拟22023·辽宁沈阳·沈阳二中模拟预测模拟32023·山东济宁·统考模拟测试模拟42023·辽宁葫芦岛·高三统考期末模拟52023·河北·高三校联考阶段练习模拟62023·安徽·高三校联考开学考试模拟72023·河南新乡·高三测试模拟82023·山东枣庄·统考一模模拟92022·重庆·高三统考阶段练习模拟102022·重庆·高三重庆八中校考阶段练习模拟112023·湖北武汉·高三统考阶段练习模拟122023·重庆·高三重庆一中校考阶段练习模拟132023·广东佛山·统考模拟预测模拟142023·广东揭阳·校联考三模模拟15湖北省武汉市硚口区2023年高三质量检测_____________________________________________________________________1.(2023·湖北·校联考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之成为一篇完整的短文。Initially,ItotallybelievedthatDaddywantedaboy.IcouldjustimaginehisdisappointmentwhenIwasborn.Whatalwaysfrustratedmewasthathenevertriedhidinghisfeelingsfromme.Hehadhopedaboywhowouldhelphimwiththefarmandfinallystepintohisshoes.Butagirl…ItriedtodoeverythingjusttopleaseDaddy.NotonlydidIgetupearlytohelpwiththehousework,butalsosometidyworkonthefarm.What’smore,Iwenthomestraightfromschool,expectingthatIwasneeded.Buthedidn’tseemtobemovedbythoseatall,letaloneputtingonasmile.TheyearIturnedthirteenwasthe100thbirthdayofourtown.Thetowncouncildecidedtoholdaparade(游行),andtheywantedayoungladywhocouldleadtheparade.Thefamiliesintheareawereaskedtosendpicturesoftheirchildren.Everyparentintheareahopedthattheirdaughterwouldbechosen,everyparentexceptDaddy.Mommysentinapictureofmewithouttellingme.IwasalwayssobusybeingtheboyDaddywanted,andI2neverconsideredhavingthechancetoleadtheparade.SoitwasquiteasurprisewhenthetowncouncilstoppedbyoneeveningtotellusIhadbeenchosen.Mommywasexcited.AsIanticipated,Daddyshowednointerestinthematter.Thedayofthebigparadefinallyarrived.Iwasdressedinabeautifulwhitedress.AtfirstIfeltshy-I’dhardlyeverworndresses.ButsoonIfeltlikeaprincessinafairytale.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Paragraph1:Astheparadepasseddownthemainstreetofourtown,IsawMommyandDaddyontheside.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:AsIwentbackfromtheparade,Daddystoodinfrontofthegate,smiling.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Astheparadepasseddownthemainstreetofourtown,IsawMommyandDaddyontheside.ComparedtoMumwhorejoicedwithwildexcitementthemomentshesawme,Daddyjustremainedcold,poker-faced.Theignitedhappinessinsidemesuddenlyvanishedintothinair.“Hey,youlooksogorgeous!”Iwasgrabbedbacktotheparadebythosecomplimentsshoutedoutfromthecrowd.Istraightenedupmybody,andresumedmydutyofleadingtheparade.Lookingatthosesmilingfacesontheside,Isurprisinglynoticedthatmymoodwasimproving,especiallywhenIsuddenlycaughtsightofafamiliarfigure,myfather,movingtotheendoftheparadetogetherwithmyproceeding.MaybeIwasexpectingsomething.Butwhatwasit?AsIwentbackfromtheparade,Daddystoodinfrontofthegate,smiling.AsifbeingkissedbyGod,Ileaptthreefeethigh,orevenpinchedmyself.Imurmured,“WasDaddysmilingtome?Wasthatadream?”WhatconfirmedmyideawasDaddy’swarmhand.Hestrokedmyhead,praisingthatIdidquiteagoodjob,andIwasthebestgirlhehadeverknown.NeverinmywildestdreamhadIimaginedthatthosewordscameoutfromhismouth.Ifinallyprovedmyself!Iwasfinallyacceptedasagirl!WhenIwasbaskingintheafterglowofmyfather’srecognition,itsuddenlydawnedonmethatweallhaveourownglitteringmerits,andbeingatrueandconfidentselfisalwaysawayout.【导语】本文以父亲为线索,讲述了作者觉得父亲因为自己是个女儿而感到非常失望,因为为了得到父亲3的爱,作者尽量让自己做男孩能为家里分担的事情。小镇举行游行,作者在妈妈的帮助下获得了领队的角色。这一次,作者终于获得了父亲的表扬。作为女孩,作者终于被父亲接受了!在作者看来,每个人都有缺点,但一定要做真实的、自信的自己。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“当游行队伍经过小镇的主街道时,我看到了父亲和母亲。”可知,本段可以写父母的反应,以及人群的反应,这让作者充满了自信。在游行的结尾,作者看到了父亲。②由第二段首句内容“当我结束游行回到家时,父亲站在门口,微笑着。”可知,本段可以写作者回到家后,父亲的感到骄傲和自豪,并夸奖了作者,作为女孩,作者终于被接受了,这让作者感到非常高兴,并认为只有做真实的、充满信心的自我,才可以获得别人的肯定。2.续写线索:在游行时看到父母→母亲很激动,父亲却依然很冷淡→周围人夸奖作者,作则提升了自信→回到家看到父亲→父亲夸奖了作者→作者感觉自己终于被接受了→作者的感悟。3.词汇激活:行为类:看到:sb.catchsightofsth./sth.comeintoone'sview/sth.greetsb表扬:praise/makeapraise/patontheback微笑:smile/beamasmile情绪类:高兴:happiness/delight/pleasure自信的:confident/befullofconfidence/self-assurance激动:excitement/thrill/agitation【高分句型1】Lookingatthosesmilingfacesontheside,Isurprisinglynoticedthatmymoodwasimproving,especiallywhenIsuddenlycaughtsightofafamiliarfigure,myfather,movingtotheendoftheparadetogetherwithmyproceeding.(运用了现在分词作状语。)【高分句型2】NeverinmywildestdreamhadIimaginedthatthosewordscameoutfromhismouth.(运用了部分倒装。)2.(2023·辽宁沈阳·沈阳二中校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。IlikestayingovernightatmyGramma’shouse—thatis,untilGrammastartstellingmehowwonderfulmycousinMayais.Thenit’sMayathisandMay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