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1第30讲感谢信（模拟精练+真题演练）书面表达1．（2023·广东佛山·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Alex已被香港大学录取。请你写邮件祝贺Alex，并请教如何申请入读香港大学。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearAlex,I’mthrilledtohearthatyou’vebeenacceptedintotheUniversityofHongKong!Congratulationsonthiswonderfulachievement!IamsoproudofyouandIknowhowhardyouhaveworkedtomakeithappen.Meanwhile,Iwaswonderingifyoucouldsharesomeinsightsonhowyouwentaboutapplyingtotheuniversity.I’minterestedinknowingmoreabouttheprocesssinceI’mthinkingaboutthepossibilityofstudyingthere.Anytipsoradviceyoucouldofferwouldbegreatlyappreciated.Ihopethatyou’reexcitedforthisnewadventureandIwishyouallthebestforyourstudiesinHongKong.Pleasekeepintouchandletmeknowhoweverythingisgoing.Bestregards,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Alex写封邮件，祝贺他被香港大学录取，并请教如何申请入读香港大学。【详解】1.词汇积累激动的：thrilled→excited与此同时：meanwhile→inthemeantime提供：offer→provide2为……感到骄傲：beproudof→takepridein2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Anytipsoradviceyoucouldofferwouldbegreatlyappreciated.拓展句：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermesometipsoradvice.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’mthrilledtohearthatyou’vebeenacceptedintotheUniversityofHongKong!(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Meanwhile,Iwaswonderingifyoucouldsharesomeinsightsonhowyouwentaboutapplyingtotheuniversity.(运用了if引导的宾语从句和how引导的宾语从句)2．（2023年四川成都·高三石室中学测试）假定你是李华，得知你的朋友Frank被牛津大学(UniversityofOxford)录取，请给他写一封英文邮件，内容包括：1.表示祝贺;2.赞扬他的努力及对你的鼓舞;3.美好祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearFrank,Goodnewstravelsfast!PleaseacceptmyheartycongratulationonyourgraduationfromseniorschoolandadmissiontoUniversityofOxford.IknowhowhardyouhavebeenworkingtheseyearsandIamveryproudofyouforyoursuccess.Iamfirmlyconvincedthatitisyourhardworkthatcontributestoyoursuccesstoday.Justastheoldsayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Itisarewardforyourdiligenceandpersistence.YoursuccessisalsoagreatencouragementtometostudyharderandIhopethatonedayIwillenterafamousuniversityjustlikeyou.Ibelieveitwillbeanewbeginningandachanceforyoutoembraceafullerlifeandpavethewayforabrilliantfuture.Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture!Yours,LiHua3．（2023·重庆市万州二高高三校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，外教Smith邀请你本周日陪他去大明湖游玩，但你因故不能前往。请你写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1．感谢邀请;2．说明原因;3．另约时间。3注意：1．写作词数应为80左右;2．请按格式在相应位置作答。DearSmith,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】DearSmith,ThankyouforinvitingmetogotoDamingLakewithyouthisSunday.However,IamafraidthatIcouldnotmanageit,becausetherewillbeanimportanttestnextMonday.Withtonsofnotestogothrough,Icanhardlysqueezeanytimeforthetripthisweekend.Iwonderifitispossiblethatwerescheduleitforanothertime.WillnextSundaysuityou?Pleaseletmeknowwhetheryouareavailable.Ihopethiswillnotbringyoutoomuchinconvenience.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.4．（2023·四川绵阳·绵阳中学校考三模）假定你是李华，上周末你受本校交换生David邀请一起外出骑行，请你给David发一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.感谢邀请；2.骑行感想；3.下周末安排。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearDavid,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearDavid,Whatanunforgettablerideitwas!NowI’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforinvitingmeandproposeaplanfornextweek.Tobefrank,what’sreallyremarkablewaspeople’sactiveinvolvementinbicycleriding,fromtheyoungpedalingwithplaymatestowell-equippedcyclistsracingonpavedlanes.Besides,itwasyourencouragingwordsthatinspiredmetoholdontothelast,withoutwhichIwouldhavesurrenderedhalfwayuptheslopes.Astoour4nexttrip,howaboutcampingatthenearbylakenextSaturdayifweatherpermits?Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Yours,LiHua5．（2023·四川成都·成都外国语学校校考模拟预测）假如你是李津。你校最近要为高三毕业生举行成人典礼，你作为学生代表，被要求在典礼上发言。请根据下列要点，写一个发言稿。1、感谢父母的养育之恩、感谢老师的培养之情；2、表达努力学习，争取好成绩的决心；3、表达为社会、为国家承担责任的意志。注意：1，词数不少于100；2、可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3、信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen,Iamgreatlyhonoredtospeak