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资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】►读后续写重点话题突破01人与动物1精选最新名校试题2话题故事背诵模板3分类话题情节分析4分类话题写作步骤5分类话题高分词汇6分类话题写作高分句型1．（2023·高三重庆八中校考练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AnabandoneddogstoppedatthefrontdooroftheLaceys’smallhouse,waggingitstail,tremblingwithshynessandcold.DorisLacey,whoseschoolhadbeencalledoffbecauseofthesnow,spottedthecreatureandimmediatelywentuptomeetit.“Wheredidthatcomefrom?”Mrs.LaceyaskedassoonasDorisputthedogdowninthekitchen.Mr.Laceywasatthetable,cleaninghisfingernails.“Idon’tknowwhereitcamefrom,”hesaidmildly,“butIknowforsurewhereit’sgoing.”Dorishuggedthedoghardagainsther.Shesaidnothing.Becauseofthesnow,theroadswouldbetoobadfortravelformanydays.Mr.Laceycouldn’tgetouttotakethedogtotheanimalshelterinthecityrightaway.HeagreedtoletitsleepinthebasementwhileMrs.LaceyunwillinglyletDorisfeeditleftoverfood.Fourdayspassedandthedogdidnotcomplain.Itnevercriedinthenightorbarkedatthewind.Itdidn’ttearupeverythinginthebasement.Itwouldn’tevenfollowDorisupthebasementstepsunlessitwasinvited.Itwasagooddog.SeveraltimesDorishadopenedthedoorinthekitchenthatledtothebasementandthepuppyhadbeenthere,allstretchedout,onthetopstep.Dorisknewithadwantedsomecompanyandthatithadlainagainstthedoor,listeningtothetalkinthekitchen,smellingthefood,beingapartofthings.Italwayswaggeditstail,eyesallsleepy,whenshefounditthere.Evenafteraweekhadgoneby,Dorisdidn’tnamethedog.Sheknewherparentswouldn’tletherkeepit,thatherfathermadesolittlemoneyandanypetswereoutofthequestion,andthatthedogwoulddefinitelygototheshelterwhentheweathercleared.Still,shetriedtalkingtothemaboutthedogatdinneronenight.“She’sagooddogandnotmuchtrouble,right?”Dorissaid,hopingoneofthemwouldagreewithher.ButMr.Laceyshookhishead,“Youknowwecan’taffordadog,Doris.Youtrytoactmoregrown-upaboutthis.”Dorisfellsilent,praying资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】theweatherwouldneverclear.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。However,thesunwasshiningthenextmorning.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Laterthatafternoon,Mr.Laceycamebackwiththesamedog.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文模板】However,thesunwasshiningthenextmorning.Doriswassittingaloneinthelivingroomtryingnottocry,butshewasnotstrongenough.Herfacewaswetandred,hereyesfullofdepression.Outside,sheheardthetrunkofthecarslamshut,oneofthedoorsopenandclose,theoldenginecoughandchokeandfinallystartup.Hearingthecartraveldowntheroad,shecoulddonothingbutcryherselftosleep,andherdreamswerefullofsearchingandsearchingforthingslost.Laterthatafternoon,Mr.Laceycamebackwiththesamedog.Dorisputherhandtohermouth.Shecouldn’tbelievehereyes.“Youdidn’ttakeheraway?”sheasked.“Idid,”herfatheranswered.“TheworstlookingplaceI’veeverseen.Tendogsinacage.Smellwasenoughtoknockyoudown.Andtheygiveananimalsixdaystolive.Thentheykillitwithsomekindofashot.Iwouldn’tleaveanantinthatplace,soIbroughtthedogback.”Dorisexcitedlyrantoherfatherandgavehimasuperbighug.Whatanunexpectedsurpriseitis!【情节分析】本文是一篇记叙文。DorisLacey在家门口捡到一只流浪狗，父母都不同意在家里养它，但因为下雪路滑，爸爸同意小狗住在地下室。小狗在地下室很乖，DorisLacey对它产生了感情，想要养它，但是她知道她家里的经济条件无法养它。天气好的时候，爸爸把小狗送收容所了，DorisLacey很伤心，但没想到后来爸爸又带着小狗回来了。【写作步骤】1.段落续写：由续写第一段首句内容“然而，第二天早上阳光明媚。”可知，第一段可以描写爸爸要把小狗送走了，Doris虽然不舍但也没办法留下它，只能独自伤心。资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】由续写第二段首句内容“当天下午晚些时候，Lacey先生带着同一只狗回来了。”可知，第二段可以描写爸爸带小狗回来后Doris的惊喜，以及爸爸解释没把小狗留在收容所的原因。2.续写线索：天气转晴——Doris因无法留下小狗而努力压抑自己的情绪——爸爸开车带小狗离开——Doris终于忍不住哭了起来——爸爸带着小狗回来——爸爸解释了原因——Doris感到惊喜【高分词汇】行为类①除了做……外无能为力：coulddonothingbutdo…/couldn’tdoanythingbutdo…②搜寻：searchfor/insearchof③把……带走：takeaway/sendaway④击倒：knockdown/knockover情绪类①沮丧：depression/frustration/gloom②兴奋地：excitedly/inexcitement/thrilledly【高分句型1】Herfacewaswetandred,hereyesfullofdepression.(使用了“名词+形容词短语”独立主格结构)【高分句型2】Hearingthecartraveldowntheroad,shecoulddonothingbutcryherselftosleep,andherdreamswerefullofsearchingandsearchingforthingslost.(使用了现在分词短语作时间状语、省略不定式符号to的结构coulddonothingbutdo和动名词作宾语)2．（2023·江苏·统考二模）WehaveaNorwegianelkhound(柴犬)namedTorgy.Elkhoundsarebeautiful.Theyaremedium-sized,strong,square-lookingdogs.Theirthick,silver-grayfur(皮毛)hasapurewhiteundercoat,makingakindofflagthatmovesupanddownwhentheyrun.Theyruneverywhere.Infact,theyaregoodatroaming(闲逛),andTorgyisbetterthanmostofhisbreed.InAugust,theheatwavestarted.Forquiteafewdays,Torgystarteddisappearin