重点话题突破 02 助人、善行、义举类(读后续写高频主题分类)(讲义)(解析版)

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资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】►读后续写重点话题突破02助人、善行、义举1精选最新名校试题2话题故事背诵模板3分类话题情节分析4分类话题写作步骤5分类话题高分词汇6分类话题写作高分句型1.(2023·湖南师大附中校考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。ThechainofkindnessTherainwascomingdownsohardthateachdropseemedtoexplodeasithittheroofofthecar.Tomlookedoutintothecoal-blacknight,strugglingdesperatelytokeephiscarontheroad.TherainbeatdowncontinuouslyandtheroadwasdesertedexceptforTomandhiscar.Tomcouldseehiswheelchairinthebackseatfromtherear-viewmirrorandquicklylookeddownathisthin,brokenlegs.Hecouldfeelafamiliarwaveofdespairstarttowashoverhim.Suddenly,aloudnoiseshookhimoutofhismomentofhopelessnessasthecarbegantobumpdowntheroad.“Great,”hethought,“aflattyre.”Withaheavysigh,Tombroughtthecartoastop,restinghisheadonthesteeringwheel,defeated!Afterafewseconds,helookedupandpeeredoutofthewindow.Inthedistance,hecouldseealighttwinklingintheblackness.WhenTomapproachedthehouse,ayounggirlaroundtenyearsoldwasstandinginthedoorway.Hepulledupandrolleddownthewindow.“Areyourparentsathome?”heshoutedoverthewindandrain.“IhaveaflattyreandIneedhelp.”“Waitaminute,”thegirlrepliedandwentintothehouse.Afewminuteslater,shereturnedwithanoldman.Thegirlheldhisarmandsmiledlovinglyupathim.Tomexplainedtheproblemtotheoldmanandadded,“Ineedhelpbecausemylegsareparalyzed.”Thewordscameoutflat.Buthedidnotknowhowelsehecouldconveythefactthatheneededhelpfromthisweakoldmaninthemiddleoftherainstorm.Theoldmansimplynodded.Theoldmanandthelittlegirlconcentratedontheirworkandtherainwassoakingthem.Onceagain,Tomcouldn’thelpbutfeelhewasuseless.Soontheoldmansteppedtothewindow.“You’reallset,”hesaid.Tomhandedsomemoneytotheoldman,buthemadenomovetotakeit.Finally,theyounggirlsaid,“Grandfatherisblind.”资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Tomdidnotknowwhattosay.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inspiredbythechanceencounter,Tomstartedtoseeeverythingdifferently.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文模板】Tomdidnotknowwhattosay.Hejustgesturedtowardsthegirlandtheoldmanhelplesslyashestumbledthroughanexplanationthathewouldliketopaythemfortheirhelp.Thegrandfatherwavedahandandsaid,“Thereisnoneed.Justbecarefulaboutgettinghomeandcontinuethechainofkindness.”Tomgotbackontotheroad.Therainwasnowonlyalightmist,revealingtheroadahead.Ashedrovethroughthenight,hefoundhimselflookingforwardtothejourneyahead.Inspiredbythechanceencounter,Tomstartedtoseeeverythingdifferently.Hecontactedhisdoctorthenextdaytoseeifhecoulddosomethingtoincreasehismobility.Later,hepursuedhislong-lostdreamofbecomingateacherandreconnectedwithhisfamily.PerhapsTomwasdisabledinoneway,buthedecidedthathewouldnotletthisdefinewhohewasorwhathecouldaccomplish.Mostimportantly,hebegantolookforwardtoeachnewdayandviewitasanopportunitytohelpotherssothathecouldcontinuethechainofkindness.【情节分析】文章以人物为线索展开,讲述一天夜里双腿残疾的Tom独自一人驾车行驶在倾盆大雨之中,突然他发现他的车子爆胎了。Tom将车开到路边的一幢小屋求助。在那里,一个小女孩和她的爷爷冒雨为Tom修好了车。当Tom准备给这对爷孙钱以示感谢时,他发现爷爷竟然是一位盲人。【写作步骤】1.段落续写:①根据第一段首句“Tom吃惊得说不出话来”可知,下文可描写Tom付钱给老人,但被拒绝,老人告诉他可以把这份传递下去。②根据第二段首句“这件事让Tom大受鼓舞,他决定联系医生来改善自己的行动能力”可知,下文可描写Tom资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】不再颓废,重拾自己的梦想,并努力将这份信念转化为有益于他人的行动。2.续写线索:吃惊——付钱——拒绝并叮嘱将爱心传递下去——受到鼓舞——不再颓废,重拾梦想——帮助他人【高分词汇】行为类①发现:find/feel/realize②联系:contact/getintouchwith③决定:decide/determine/makeupone’smind情绪类①善良:kindness/goodness②无助地:helplessly/hopelessly【高分句型1】Ashedrovethroughthenight,hefoundhimselflookingforwardtothejourneyahead.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型2】Hecontactedhisdoctorthenextdaytoseeifhecoulddosomethingtoincreasehismobility.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)【高分句型3】Mostimportantly,hebegantolookforwardtoeachnewdayandviewitasanopportunitytohelpotherssothathecouldcontinuethechainofkindness.(运用了sothat引导的目的状语从句)2.(2023·湖北·开滦第二中学模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完善的短文。Markgrabbedhiskeys.Heneededtogetoutofthehousequickly.Hehadbeentryingtosaveasmuchmoneyaspossiblefromthegovernmentassistancehereceivedduetohisdisability,butitwasharderandharderwithpricesrisingdaily.Unfortunately,helosthalfhisrightarminacaraccidentseveralyearsago,anditwashardtofindanewjobinhistowninTampa,Florida.Helosthispreviousjobrecentlywhenthecompanywentbankrupt(破产).Fornow,heonlyhadthosegovernmentcheckskeepinghimfed,buthewastappingintohissavingsforeverythingelse,andtheywererunningoutfast.Oneofhisfrie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