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资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】►读后续写重点话题突破03亲情、友情类1精选最新名校试题2话题故事背诵模板3分类话题情节分析4分类话题写作步骤5分类话题高分词汇6分类话题写作高分句型1．（2023·安徽·高三专题练习）阅读下面文章，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整短文，续写词数应为150左右。Baskinwasa20-year-oldsophomoreattheUniversityofSouthCarolinawhoseparentsransmallrestaurant.Ashewastheonlycollegestudentinhisfamily,hisfamilytriedtheirbesttosupporthim.Baskinalwaysworkedasawaiterintherestauranttolightenhisparents'burdens.Hewassohardworkingthatmanycustomerspraisedhishospitableservice.Hisparentsalsoappreciatedandtrustedhimalot.Itwasabusynightattherestaurant.Afterafewguestswalkedinandsatdown,theyorderedabottleoftheChateauPichonLonguevilleComtesse2001-avaluablewineworthalmost€6,000.Havingtoserveanothertable,Baskinthenaskedaworkmatetofetchthebottle.However,sincetheemployeewasnew,sheaccidentallytookthewrongbottleofwine.Insteadofthewinethatwasorderedbythecustomers,sheservedtheChateauPichonLonguevillePomerol2001,whichcostabout€5,000.Asthebottlesandnamesweresimilar,noonenoticedthemistake.Baskindidn'trealizethemistakeuntilthecustomerswantedtoorderasecondbottleafterfinishingthefirstone.Hecheckedtheorderquicklyandunderstoodwhatwaswrong.Hecleverlysuggestedtheyorderadifferentone,withoutlettingthemknowwhathadhappened,whichcouldgivehimtimetothinkabouthowtosolvetheproblem.Everythingseemednormal,butBaskinwaslostinthought.WhatshouldIdotosolvethisproblem?heaskedhimself.Ifhedidn'ttellthecustomersthemistake,hecouldkeeptheextra€1000secretly.Ashewasalsothecashieroftherestaurant,noonewouldknowwhathappened.€1000wasthetuitionfeeforthewholeschoolyearandhisparentsneedn'tworkhardtoearnmoneyforhim.Orhecouldusethemoneytobuyhisfavoritelaptopwhichhisparentscouldn'tafford.Thisextramoneywasreallyahugetemptationtohim.Butinthisway,hewouldlosehishonestyanddignity.Paragraph1:Whilehewasstrugglingwithhisoptions,hisfathercameover.资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Whenthecustomerscametopaythebill,withfather'sadviceinmind.Baskindecidedtodotherightthing.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文模板】Whilehewasstrugglingwithhisoptions,hisfathercameover.Seeinghismixedexpression,hisfatheraskedhimwhatwashappening.Baskincouldn'thelptellinghimthetruth.Hisfatherlistenedattentivelyandgavehisadvice.HetoldBaskinheshouldtellthetruthandadmithismistake.Baskinthoughtthecustomersprobablywouldn'tnoticethemistakeastheywerenotpayingtoomuchattention.Hisfathersaidthatheshouldalwaysbehonestandthatwayhewouldalwaysbetrusted.Baskinnoddedseriously.Whenthecustomerscametopaythebill,withhisfather'sadviceinmind,Baskindecidedtodotherightthing.Heexplainedthesituationtothecustomersandapologizedsincerelyfortheerror.Thecustomersweresurprisedatthisandsaidtheyhadn'tnoticedthemistakeatall.Instead,theysaidthatthewinetheywereservedstilltastedverygoodandfinishedbygivinghimalargetip.ToBaskin'srelief,hisfatheralsoforgavehimforhismistake,sayingthatnoharmhadbeendoneandthecustomersweresatisfiedwiththeserviceThinkingback,Baskinwasgratefultohisfatherforsuchgoodadviceandalsolearnedanimportantlifelesson.【情节分析】本文是一篇记叙文。Baskin是一个为学费在饭店打工的大二学生。一次工作当中的疏忽把6000块的酒误上成了5000块的红酒。由于无人察觉这个失误，他有机会将一千元的红酒差价据为己有，但又无法忍受内心道德的谴责，这时父亲走过来了。【写作步骤】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“正当他苦苦思索如何选择的时候，他的父亲走了过来。”我们得知，父亲指导了Baskin如何处理这件事情。所以第一段建议主要通过语言和动作描述Baskin和父亲之间的互动，即父亲如何劝说他跟客人说出事实。②由第二段首句内容“顾客们来结账时，巴斯金心里想着爸爸的建议，决定做正确的事。”可知，第二段主要资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】描写Baskin在父亲的指导下如何解决这一问题。解决方法可以写向客人说明事实并道歉。升华可以写诚实和自尊拥有任何事物无法比拟的价值。只有诚实才能获得内心的平静。体现人与自我和正确价值观的主题渗透。2.续写线索：困惑——求助——真相——解释——满意【高分词汇】行为类承认错误：admithismistake/accepthismistake道歉：apologizedsincerely/makeasincereapology/saysorryto【高分句型1】Seeinghismixedexpression,hisfatheraskedhimwhatwashappening.（现在分词作时间状语，且句中使用what引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Baskinthoughtthecustomersprobablywouldn'tnoticethemistakeastheywerenotpayingtoomuchattention.（句中使用as引导的原因状语从句）【高分句型2】ToBaskin'srelief,hisfatheralsoforgavehimforhismistake,sayingthatnoharmhadbeendoneandthecustomersweresatisfiedwiththeservice（现在分词作伴随状语，且句中使用that引导的宾语从句）2.（2023·重庆南开中学校考三模）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Patwasthenewkidintown.Herdadgotanewjob,sotheyhadtomovefromtheiroldho