高三一轮复习话题写作一---建议信

1高三一轮复习话题写作一建议信朗读、背诵和默写1.havetrouble/difficulty(in)doingsth.在做……方面有困难2.adaptto(doing)sth.=fitinwithsth.适应……3.take/followone’sadvice接受某人的建议4.give/offersb.someadvice/suggestions给某人提供一些建议5.askforone’sadvice向某人寻求建议6.begoodatsth./dowellinsth.擅长……\7.buildup树立，建立8.benefitfromsth.从…..中受益9.turntosb.forhelp向某人求助10.ifnecessary如果有必要的话11.broadenone’shorizons开拓某人的视野12.workhardatsth.在……方面努力13.beofhelptosb.对……有帮助14.inaddition/besides/what’smore此外，而且15.lastbutnotleast/atlast最后16.tobeginwith第一，首先写作模式一、篇章结构---遵循“三段式”第一段：开门见山表明写作意图。陈述事由，语气要委婉真诚。“悲剧”式：1.I’mterriblysorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroubleinadaptingtoyournewschoollifeinAmerica,butthesituationcanbeeasilychangedifyoutakemyadvice.2.Havinglearnedthatyouarenotgoodatmath,Iwouldliketoofferyousomeadvice,whichIhopecanbehelpfultoyou.“喜剧”式：1.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.2.I’mgladtoknowthatyouaregoingtoentercollegeanditismygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestionsofchoosingyourmajor.第二段：委婉提出具体的建议或忠告，附带说说这样做的理由/原因/好处。对同辈或晚辈可使用祈使句:1.Buildupyourconfidenceandyou’llbenefitfromit.2.Turntoyourteacherforhelpifnecessary.尽量使用委婉的语言表达自己的建议：1.Youhadbettertakepartinmoreactivities,whichcannotonlyimproveyourabilitybutalsocanbroadenyourhorizons.2.ItwouldbeagoodideaifyoupracticespeakingChinesewithyourChinesefriends.Themoreyoupractice,theearlieryouwillbenefitfromit.3.Whynotmakesomefriends?4.YoushouldworkhardatEnglish,whichcangiveyoumoreopportunitiestocommunicatewithothers.表达建议常用的句型：It’sagoodideatodosth.Itwouldbebetterifyoucould…Isuggestthatyoushould…第三段：安抚对方，希望对方接受意见，并且祝愿建议有效。1.Idohopemyadvice/suggestionscanbeofhelptoyou.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful/practical.3.Goodluckwithyou.4.MayyouhaveagoodtimeinChina.祝愿你在中国玩的开心！（may用于祝福语。如：Mayyousucceed!祝你取得成功！Mayyoubehappy!祝你幸福快乐！）巧用过渡词，善用“一二三”顺序型：First,…Second,…Finally…副词型：Firstly,…Besides,…Moreover,…短语型：Firstofall,…Inaddition,…Lastbutnotleast,…2模仿与背诵（2008年全国卷Ⅱ）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信咨询如何才能学好中文。请根据下列要点写封回信。要点：1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.(开门见山点题)Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourreference.(过渡句承上启下)First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.(建议一，解释理由)Then,italsohelpsifyouwatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.(建议二，细节补充)Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.(建议三，细节支撑)Inaddition,youcanmakemoreChinesefriends.(建议四)IamquitesurethattheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.(补充理由)WhynottryandwritemeinChinesenexttime?(鼓励尝试)LiHua模仿与演练假定你是编辑李华，收到高中生Lora的来信，请给Lora写一封回信。Deareditor,Iamaseniorhighschoolstudent,andIwanttoworkpart-timethissummer.Ithinkitisgoodtodoso,butmyparentsdon’tagreewithme.Ijustcan’tunderstandthem.Ineedyouradvice.Lora注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。DearLora,Ihavejustreadyourletterinthemagazine.Iknowthatyouwanttoworkpart-timethissummer.But____________________________________________(你的父母亲不允许你这样做).Iunderstandyoursituation.Ithinkyourparentsmayhavetheirreasons.Theymay____________________________________(把学习当作首要任务)foryou.Perhapsthey’dlikeyou______________________________________(充分利用这个暑假的时间好好学习).____________(而且),theymaythinkyouaretooyoungtowork.Ithinkyou_____________________________________(最好和父母亲谈谈).Iftheyagree,youshould________________________________________________(为学习和工作做一个详细的计划),askyourfriendstoworktogetherwithyou,andtellyourparentsnottoworryaboutyoubecauseyouare______________________(足够大)managethingsproperly.Anyway,Iwouldbemorethanhappytowishyouapleasantsummer.Yourstruly,LiHua巩固与拓展(2017银川二中模拟)假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John来信说，他的同桌经常打断他，向他请教问题，他担心这会影响自己的学习。请你用英语回信。内容包括：1.给别人讲解问题也会提升自己；2.人人都有长处和不足，可以互相学习；3.帮助别人学习可以使他们树立自信，从而增进友谊。3其它建议信1.2017河南中原名校联考---《优化方案》1312.2017郑州高三一模---《优化方案》2263.提高英语写作能力演讲《南方凤凰台》84.2016湖北5月仿真试题《一年好卷》136参考答案DearJohn,Howarethingsgoing?Inyourlastletteryoutalkedaboutyourrecentworryaboutyourstudies,mentioningthatyourdeskmateofteninterruptedyoubyaskingquestions.NowIwouldliketosharemyopinionwithyou.Firstofall,thereisnoneedtoworryaboutyourstudies.Whenyouexplainsomethingtoothers,youcangetabetterunderstandingofit,whichcanimproveyourselfgreatly.Secondly,asweallknow,everyonehasstrengthsandweaknesses.Thoughyourdeskmateisbadatlessons,hemightdowellinotherfieldslikesportsorart.Therefore,youcanlearnfromeachother.Inaddition,topstudentscanhelpothersgainconfidencebyhelpingthemwiththeirlessons,whichmayhelpdevelopafriendshipthatbothofyouwilltreasureallyourlife.Ihopemyadvicecanhelp.Andbestluckwithyourlearning.Yourstruly,LiHua假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：1、帮他分析原因；2、给他提出建议；3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案巩固与拓展：DearLiMing,Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothersandmayoftenfeellonely.That’sbecauseyouaren