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1高三一轮复习话题写作四感谢信出题人袁兵艳审题人邓翠焕写作五步走：1.审题-----忌跑题2.列提纲/要点----忌漏点3.造句-----句型结构成分要完整,忌表达单一,忌冗言或逐句硬译，字词堆砌4.连句成文------添加过渡词,忌句子松散5.检查---查主谓、查搭配、查拼写感谢信：是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。【感谢信三要素】1.提出感谢，感谢原因（别人做了什么事让你感谢）；2.细述并赞赏对方给予的帮助；3.再次感谢，如何回报（好好学习，继续努力等）【感谢信注意事项】灵活把握时态：通常，在提到对方曾给予帮助时，用过去时态；在提到对方的帮助所产生的实际效果时，可用现在完成时；涉及到现状，可用一般现在时；在表达祝愿或希望时，可用将来时。常用词汇和写作模式动词thank,appreciate;owe(欠债，感激)名词thanks,gratitude,appreciation;形容词thankful,grateful,appreciative第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因1.Iamwritingtoexpressmysincerethanks(toyou)for…2.Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitude(toyou)for3.Iwouldliketoconveyinthislettermyheartfelt(衷心的)thankstoyoufor…4.Iwouldliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmygreatappreciationforyourtimelysupportandassistance.第二段：细述并赞赏对方给予的帮助1.Itwasnice/kind/thoughtfulofyouto….2.Thankyouverymuchforyourkindhospitality(好客)andthehonoryoushowedmeduringmyvisit…3.Itwasyourkindhelpthat….（强调句）4.Butfor/Withoutyourhelp,Iwouldn’t/couldn’thavedone…（含蓄虚拟）5.Ifithadnotbeenforyourhelp/assistance,Iwouldn't/couldn’thave…（虚拟语气）第三段：再次感谢，如何回报。1.Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.2.IappreciateitmorethanIcansay.3.Pleaseacceptmysincerethanksforyourhelp,whichIwillneverforget.句式操练1.我写这封信是为了表达我对你帮我提高英语口语的谢意，你的帮助对我而言意义重大。2.你太好了，假期照顾我弟弟。3.正是你的善良和热心帮助我克服了我的思乡之情。(强调句/虚拟语气)2感谢信模板dear________，①Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudefor________(感谢的原因)．②ifithadnotbeenfor/haditnotbeenfor/withoutyourassistancein________(对方给你的具体帮助)，Iwould(not)havebeen________(没有对方帮助的后果).③everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwho________(给出细节)．④Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!⑤pleaseacceptmygratitude.yourssincerely,LiHuadear____,①Iamnowwritingtoexpressmysincerethanksfor____.②Iwouldlikeyoutoknowhowmuchyour_____meanttome.③youhaveapositivegeniusfor______.④Inotonlyenjoyed_____,butalso___.⑤Ishalleverremember_____asoneofthemost_____inmylife.⑥I_____.⑦Ihopetohavetheopportunityofreciprocating.⑧wouldyoukindlyletmeknow_____.⑨Iwillfeelveryhonoredandpleasedifyouhavetimeto_____.⑩howniceitwouldbetoseeyouagainandIamlookingforwardstoseeingyounexttime!Irepeatmythanksagainforyour_____.pleasegivemykindregardstoyour_____.yourstruly,LiHua小小建议：基础薄弱或者表达能力有限的同学，不妨每一类作文背诵一个模板和几个常用短语与句型，然后灵活套用。欣赏范文技巧1.列出优美的可用于自己写作中的词和短语，加深记忆；2.列出优美的可用于自己写作中的句型结构，从中挑选三个就某一写作话题模仿写作，争取写出和例句一样正确且优美的句子；3.列出范文的篇章结构，掌握篇章布局技巧。根据范文欣赏技巧完成任务。Iamaseniorstudentthathasexperiencedagreatearthquake.Iwrotetoyoutoexpressmythankstothosewhohelpeduswhenwesufferedthedisaster.Duringthattime,Iwitnessedmanystrangersdevotedtheireffortstosavinglives,providingfoodandclothesregardlessoftheirownsafety.Withouttheirhelp,Icouldn’thavefoundmyparentsinsuchashorttime,whichmakesmeexcited.Besides,onlyfewdayspassedbeforethestudentsreturnedtoclassroomstohaveclasses.Asaresult,wealltreasuretheopportunityofstudyingintheclassroom.Thehelpfromotherstaughtushowtorespectothersandtakeothersintoconsideration.Itwasalsothehelpfromstrangersthatmadeusrealizetheimportanceofhelpingandcaringforeachotherwhenfacingdisaster.Now,Ithinkwhatweshoulddoistostudyharderandhelpmorepeopleinreturn.优美的词和短语：优美的句型：3请挑选三个优美句型以感谢信为话题造句。1.______________________________________________________________________________2.______________________________________________________________________________3.______________________________________________________________________________在空格内填入适当的词句。假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr.Brown的资助，可以重返校园。你给Mr.Brown写了一封信，内容如下：★收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；★在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励；★决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；★盼望见到Mr.Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。注意：1.书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数：100左右DearMr.Brown，Iamwritingto_______________________________(表达我最深的谢意)themoneyandbooksyousentme.I__________________________________________(我不可能重返校园)withoutyourhelp.Thankyousomuch.I______________________(一直努力学习)sinceIwentbacktoschool.I_________________________________(我已经取得很大的进步)mystudieswiththehelpofmyteachers.Theyoftenpraisemeandencourageme.______________________(要不是你的帮助),Imighthaveleftschooland_________________________________(不可能获得这样好的教育).Ihavemadeupmymindto___________________________________________(更加勤奋并取得更大进步).Howareyougettingonwithyourlifeandwork?Iwouldliketomeetyou__________(亲自),butI______________________(没有机会)doso.Wouldyoupleasesendmeaphotoofyourself?________________________________________(再次感谢你慷慨的帮助)andbestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua巩固与提高假如你是李华，暑假你参加了澳大利亚游学活动，回国后给hostfamily写一封信表示感谢。要点如下：1.感谢他们一家的照顾；2.分享游学体会；3.询问你寄的礼物（汉语词典）是否收到；4.邀请他们一家来中国游览。注意：1.次数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearHelen,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.内容：题材(跑题与否)与体裁(文体);要点(齐全与否)2.语言：地道、标准；高级词汇和丰富句式；拼写和语法错误3.段落层次(清晰与否)；内在逻辑与过渡总分______________请把字写工整5参考答案句式操练1.我写这封信是为了表达我对你帮我提高英语口语的谢意，你的帮助对我而言意义重大。Iamwritingtoe