2019高考英语写作指导课件-倒装和省略在写作中的应用

栏目索引2019高考英语倒装和省略在写作中的应用栏目索引一、魔法导航倒装和省略是强调句意、丰富句式、增加语言表现形式的重要手段。(一)倒装在写作中常用的倒装形式主要有以下几种。1.含有否定意义的词no,not,never,seldom,rarely,little,hardly或短语notonly,nosooner,notuntil,atnotime,innoway,bynomeans,onnocondition,undernocircumstances等置于句首时,句子用部分倒装。 典句引领Notonlycantravelingrelaxus,butitcanalsobroadenourhorizons.旅游不仅能使我们得到放松,而且可以开阔我们的眼界。Hardlyhadhefinishedhistalkwhenhewassurroundedbytheexcitedfans.——倒装省略,风景独好栏目索引他刚一结束讲话就被兴奋的粉丝们围了起来。 雕词琢句(1)AsfarasI'mconcerned,(她的慷慨不仅能够帮助那些生活困难的人实现梦想),butalsoitwillmotivatemorepeopletoparticipateinsuchagooddeed.(2018广东模拟) 答案notonlywillhergenerosityhelpthoseinneedrealizetheirdreams(2)直到父亲回来,我才上床睡觉。 答案NotuntilmyfathercamebackdidIwenttobed.(3)这种测试不仅能预测严重的疾病和食物偏好,而且也能为人们提供恰当的运动方式。(2018广东模拟)栏目索引 答案Notonlycanthetestpredictseriousillnessesandfoodpreference,butal-soitcanpresentpeoplewithproperwaystoexercise.2.only修饰副词、介词短语或状语从句置于句首时,句子/主句使用部分倒装。 典句引领Onlyafterallthefishdieddidthevillagersrealizetheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.直到所有的鱼都死光后,村民们才意识到保护环境的重要性。 雕词琢句(1)(只有你意识到英语的重要性)canyouputyourheartintoit. 答案OnlywhenyourealizetheimportanceofEnglish栏目索引(2)只有努力学习,我们才能不断取得进步。(2018福建模拟) 答案Onlyifwestudyhardcanwemakecontinuousprogress.3.在so...that和such...that句型中,so或such置于句首时,主句使用部分倒装。 典句引领Socharmingismyhometownthatitattractsvisitorsfromalloverthecountryev-eryyear.我的家乡如此迷人,每年都吸引着全国各地的游客。 雕词琢句(1)Besides,(我英语掌握得非常好)thatIamelectedasmyEnglishteacher'sassistant.(2018陕西模拟)栏目索引 答案suchagoodcommandofEnglishdoIhave(2)这个栏目非常受欢迎,我们在空闲时间都喜欢阅读。(2018课标全国Ⅰ模拟) 答案Sopopularisthesectionthatallofuslikereadingitinthefreetime.4.as作“尽管/虽然”讲时,引导让步状语从句,从句用倒装。 典句引领Childasheis,heknowsalot.尽管他是个孩子,却懂很多。Tiredaswewere,wecontinuedworking.尽管我们很累,但我们继续工作。 雕词琢句栏目索引(1)(尽管我感到失望)attheshabbycampusandthepoorly-e-quippedclassroom,Ifoundtheteacherspatientandconsiderate. 答案DisappointedasIfelt(2)尽管这个小男孩非常贫穷,但他想办法努力学习。(2018福建) 答案Poorasthelittleboywas,hetriedtofindwaystostudyhard.5.当副词here,now,off,up,in,out,down,away,there,then等或表方位的介词短语置于句首且主语是名词时,句子使用完全倒装。 典句引领Ontheleftsideoftheroadstandsourlibrary,wheretherearevariouskindsofbooks.路的左侧是我们的图书馆,里面有各种各样的书。栏目索引OutrushedtheboybeforeIcouldsayaword.我还没来得及说句话,男孩就冲了出去。 雕词琢句(1)JusttothesouthofTian'anmenSquare(是前门大街),whichisafamousstreet. 答案isQianmenStreet(2)这是给你的两条建议。(2018四川模拟) 答案Herearetwosuggestionsforyou.栏目索引1.当状语从句的主语和主句的主语一致,且从句谓语中含有be动词时,可以省略状语从句中的主语和be动词。 典句引领Oncelost,timecanneverbemadeupfor.一旦失去,时间不可弥补。Whenwalkinginthestreet,Imetmygoodfriend.在大街上散步的时候,我遇到了我的好朋友。 雕词琢句(面临困难的时候),thechilddidn'tgiveupbutmanagedtoover-comethem. 答案Whenfacedwithdifficulties/Whenfacingdifficulties(二)省略栏目索引2.当状语从句中的主语是it,谓语中又含有be动词时,可以把it和be动词同时省略。 典句引领Iwanttosmilewheneverandwherever(itis)possible.我想随时随地地笑。 雕词琢句有可能的时候,你就可以练习说普通话。(2018四川模拟) 答案Wheneverpossible,youcanpracticespeakingMandarin.栏目索引二、学以致用1.完美文章结合括号中的提示,用合适的倒装或省略形式完成下面的文章。(1)(如此美丽)JiuzhaigouValleythatIhaddreamedabouttravelingthere.Lastyear,Irealizedmydream,spendingthreedaysinJiuzhaigouValley,wherethecharmingsightsmadeadeepimpressiononme.Onlythen(2)(我才意识到)thattravelingwasquitenecessaryforimprovinglifequality.However,(3)(当看到一些游客丢垃圾时)hereandthere,Ifeltveryangry.Ithoughtitwashightimethatsomeeffectivemeasuresweretakentomaketravelersawareoftheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Onlyinthisway(4)(九寨沟才能变得越来越美丽).栏目索引 答案(1)Sobeautifulwas(2)didIcometorealize(3)whenseeingsomevisitorsthrowingrubbish(4)couldJiuzhaigouValleybecomemoreandmorebeautiful2.话题写作[本期话题]兴趣爱好[写作要求]至少运用三种倒装或省略形式。根据下面的信息提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。1.说到个人兴趣,我非常喜欢音乐。2.它不仅能丰富我们的生活,还可以使我们得到放松;栏目索引3.在高中学习的时候,我选学了音乐欣赏这门课;4.我非常喜欢音乐,一有时间就唱各种各样的歌曲并欣赏它们;5.尽管在无休止的考试后我感到非常累,但仍然没有停止;6.直到那时我才真正意识到我是多么喜欢音乐。栏目索引Whenitcomestomyinterest,Idolikemusicverymuch.Notonlycanitenrichourlife,butalsoitcanrelaxusespeciallywhenwearetired.Whenstudyinginhighschool,ItookonecoursecalledMusicAppreciation.SomuchdidIlikeitthatwheneverpossibleIwouldsingallkindsofsongsandappreciatethem.TiredasIwasafterendlessexams,Ididn'tstopdoingthat.OnlythendidIrealizehowmuchIlovemusic. 答案Onepossibleversion:栏目索引三、美文赏读假设你是李华,上周你所在的研究性学习小组对你校中学生的健康状况进行了一次调查。请根据下面的相关信息写一篇英语短文,刊登在你校的英文校报上。注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.参考词汇:肥胖obesity近视shortsight现状肥胖、近视等健康问题逐年增多原因作业负担重;体育锻炼少;睡眠不足;饮食不均衡建议减轻学生负担;加强锻炼;多吃果蔬,拒绝垃圾食品栏目索引[我来试写] 答案Onepossibleversion:Ourresearchgroupmadeasurveyaboutthehealthconditionofthestudentsstudyinginourschool.Itshowshealthproblemsarecommonamongstudents,suchasobesity,shortsightandsoon.栏目索引Therearevariousreasonsforthephenomenon.①Whenfacedwithendlesshomeworkandexams,manystudentshavelittletimetodoexercise.②Sobusyaretheythattheyfinditdifficulttohaveenoughsleep.What'sworse,agreatmanystudentsdon'thaveabalanceddiet.Inordertosolvetheproblems,it'ssuggestedthat③notonlyshouldtheschoolreducestudents'learningload,butalsosomeeffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoencouragestudentstoexerciseregularly.Inaddition,studentsaresupposedtoeatmorefruitsandvegetablesandrefusejunkfood④ifpossible.⑤Onlyinthiswaycanthehealthofstudentsbegreatlyimproved.文中①—⑤处作者巧妙运用倒装或省略形式,不仅突出了句意的表达而且丰富了句式,增强了语言的感染力,出色完成了写作任务,值得学习。【写作点评】