高考英语写作---扩充细节四招

1高考英语写作---扩充细节四招方法一列举具体的实例来补充说明1．我喜欢体育运动。Ilikesportsverymuch.→Ilikesportsverymuch，suchasbasketballandfootball.2．我们青少年应尽力保护环境、拯救地球。Weteenagersshouldtrytoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.→Weteenagersshouldtrytoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample，wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags，refusetousesingle－useproducts，plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.方法二添加与所给信息有关的神态、动作、心理描写及背景渲染等内容1．晚饭后，这个男的走向卧室。Aftersupper，themanwenttohisbedroom.→Afterarichmeal，thefatmanslowlymadehiswaytohisbedroom.(神态、动作)2．我有时去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverwestofthevillagenowandthen.→Iwentswimmingintheriverwestofthevillagenowandthen.Thewaterintheriverwasveryclear.(背景渲染)3．我看到了一些不良行为。Ifoundsomebadbehavior.→Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Iwasquitedisappointedtofindsomebadbehavior.(心理)方法三添加与所给信息有关的原因，结果，条件，让步，手段，目的等内容1．Tracy来电话留言：咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)见面取消。拓展：因为她有重要的事情处理。(原因)Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn'tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.→Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn'tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee，asshehassomethingimportanttoattendto.2．帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。拓展：孩子们进步很快，我也受到他们父母的称赞。(结果)IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.→IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy，theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme.方法四结尾发挥，写你的感受，评价，愿望，倡议等1．AlthoughIstoodallthewayhome，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.2．Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.23．Inaddition，ifshewouldliketolearnChinese，Iwillbehappytohelpher.4．Witheveryone'scontribution，wecanmakeourschoolacomfortablelearningenvironment.【巩固练习】一、翻译下列句子，请扩充细节1．有时去村西的小河游泳。(增加条件状语)2．我帮助祖父母干农活。(增加让步、目的状语)二、运用所学知识，描述下列情景1．爱好旅游2．爱好运动3．喜欢养宠物________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________