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建议信(1)-----阐释原因；提出建议类请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。注意：1.词数不少于120；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:食堂canteenDearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua作文范文：DearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.Theproblemsareasfollows.Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.AsfarasI’mconcerned,measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.Firstofall,it’ssuggestedthatthepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious.Inaddition,it’sbettertoopenmoreservicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!需注意的词汇、表达：1.deliciouswaitingtaste(n.味道)tasty(adj.可口的)cook(n.厨师)cooker(n.炊具)price价格2.lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格3.atalower/reasonableprice以较低的价格4.varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品5.Foronething,…….Foranother,……6.makesb(not)dosth7.wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime8.Thekindsoffoodarefew.表达食堂出现的问题：9.Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan’taffordthem.10.Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./whichcan’tsatisfyourneeds.11.Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.12.Thefoodinthecanteendoesn’ttastegood./nice.Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn’tgood.13.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwasted14.It’sawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.15.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.16.Inthelongrun,it’sbadforourhealthandstudy.17.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表达提出的建议：18.Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.19.Ithinkit’snecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.20.It’shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.Soit’shightimeforustotakemeasures21.Tosolvetheproblems,Ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure(形象)andimprovethepresentconditiontosatisfythestudents’needs.22.Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.23.Thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedn’twaitsolong.24.AsfarasI’mconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality.What’smore,differentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.25.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.建议模板：Dear….,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…….(引出话题).Hereareafewsuggestions.Firstofall,itisimportanttodosth.Then,italsohelpstodosth.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatodosth.建议句型积累：1.Manywayscancontributetosolvingtheproblem,butIthinkthefollowingmaybethemosteffectiveones.2.I’dliketomakesomesuggestionson…….3.It’sofgreatimportanceforsbtodosth.It’snecessaryforsbtodosth4.Itwouldbeagoodideaforsbtodosth./Itwouldbeabetterideaif…….5.Itcontributes/helpsalotif………6.Isuggestthat…../Mysuggestionisthat…It’ssuggested/advised/recommendedthat……7.You’dbetterdosth./We’dbetterdosthIt’sbettertodosth8.MeasuresaresupposedtobetakentodosthWearesupposedtotakeeffectivemeasurestodosth9.It’shightimethatsbdidsth./It’shightimeforsbtodosth建议信(2)-----阐释原因；提出建议类假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫SadMother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。I’mthemotherofafourteen-year-old.RecentlyIhavefoundthatmydaughtertoldliestome.Theotherdayshetoldmethatshedidwellinthefinalexam.HoweverIfoundoutshefailedinmathandEnglish.WhatshouldIdo?写作要点：1.表明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；3.提出至少两条建议要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。Hi，SadMother，Ihavelearnedthat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________作文范文：Hi,SadMother,Ihavelearnedthatyourdaughtertoldliestoyou.Asapeerofyourdaughter,Ithinkthereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,maybethereasonwhyyourdaughtertoldalieisthatyouaretoostrictwithherandsheisafraidyouwillpunishherifshetellsyouthetruth.Besides,nowadays,parentsputtoomuchpressureontheirkids.Inordernottoletyoudown,shehasnochoicebuttolie.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstofall,you’dbetterhaveaheart-to–hearttalkwithher,makingherknowbeinghonestismoreimportantthanscores.Inaddition,don’tbetoostrict.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldallowhertomakesome