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作文提高方法-1-Brainstormig1.认真看题，确认所给题目为提纲式（withgivenoutline)还是开放式(withoutoutline).2.根据确定的题目类型，从大脑的资料库中选出适合的模板。3.对于开放型的题目，要认真的理解（interpretation/comprehension),抓住讨论的核心，不要仅停留在现象表面。开放型的题目的文章设计：提纲式作文题目的文章设计：对立观点式1．A．点明文章主题2．B．有人认为X是好事，赞成X，为什么？有人认为X是坏事，反对X，为什么？3．C．我的看法。Nobodycoulddenythefact/phenomenonthat…SomepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoingX.Theypointoutthefactthat支持X的第一个原因。Theyalsoarguethat支持X的另一个原因。However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.TheyconsideritharmfultodoX.Theyfirmlypointoutthat反对X的第一个理由。Anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument:一个例子。Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesofXoutweighthedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabove-mentionedpositiveeffectsitmightbringabout,Xalsomay一个好处。社会问题式Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthat________(问题的对象)have1.阐释从现象挖掘到的问题核心（或通过现象向我们传达的道理）↓古今论证2.举例论证：↗中外论证↘正反论证※3.归纳总结（或对自身的启迪）1.指出现象或话题（表述题目）,+举例说明（或产生的意义，影响）↓2.分析原因：主题句+“你”“我”“它”+总结↓3.我的观点+建议或另一个原因作文提高方法-2-beenagraveproblemwithwhichweareconfronted.__________(问题的对象)areboundtogeneratesevereconsequencesifwekeepturningablindeyetothem.Firstandforemost,_______(危害一).What’sworse（危害二）.Lastbutnottheleast,（危害三）Inviewoftheseriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.Ontheonehand,________（措施一）.Ontheotherhand,______（措施二）.Withproperlawsandanalertpublic,itwillonlybeamatteroftimefor…tobecomethingsofthepast.社会现象式1.指出现象然后举例或说明意义，影响2.分析原因3.你的看法Therecentyearshaswitnessed(Inrecentyears,therehasarisen)anewphenomenonthat……,whichhasgraduallydrawnthepublic’sattention.Manyelementsaccountforthisphenomenon.Firstofall,…….What’smore,…….Finally,……AsfarasI’mconcerned,……canbeatrulyadvisablechoicefor……,which……图表式特别注意：1.看清图表，应用数字准确。2.描述时，数字跟着时间走。3.第一段中，首先指出什么在变，（意义或后果，然后描述怎么变…..在上升/增加，(…..在下降/减少）（图表作文的特点体现在第一段，请一定多加注意！！！）第二段的写法同上一模板第三段对未来发展预测，增加一原因Keepinmind:1.长短句交替使用。2.少用“Therebe.....”句型：原因：A)太平淡，没有亮点。B）容易出现连动错误Eg:有几个原因导致（可以解释）这种现象。S:Thereareseveralreasonsexplainthisphenomenon.(×)→Severalreasonsexplainthisphenomenon.Or:Thereareseveralreasonsexplainingthisphenomenon作文提高方法-3-3.句式多样性：1）倒装句：so......that......Only2）一般复合句/长句：关于定语从句:A.一般不用一个定语从句修饰一个词B.用非限定性定语从句来表示结果或意义，使句式更紧凑，句意更丰富4.段落之间争取有连接性的词或句；句群与句群之间应有衔接性的词或短语，使文章更紧凑，更有层次感。★适用于三点的情况1）tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally※2）firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnot(the)least3）mostimportantofall,moreover,finally（注意:如果连接的是危害或不好的结果：第二点用“worsestill/what’sworse）★适用于两点的情况1）ontheonehand,ontheotherhand2）foronething,foranotherthing5.关于词汇的问题：1）多用具体词汇，少用笼统词汇2）避免重复使用单一词汇，可用近义词做替换important:essential,indispensable,significant,momentous，majorcritical,vital,key,core(名,essence(名），3）学习基本构词法，增加理解力和造词能力A.形容词+名词-ed→形容词white/hairempty/mindB.名词+及物动词ing→形容词save/energyhunt/jobC.名词+动词–ed→形容词earthquake/struckhate/fillD.副词+动词-ed→形容词客满的新建的6.要避免出现如下表达不严肃的“口水话”×a.That’sall.b.That’sallIwanttosay.c.What’sthereason?Letmetellyou.d.Wecanknowthereasonofthething.e.Now,let’sseethroughappearance.f.I’llletyouknowthereason作文提高方法-4-7.提高整体质量Wecanusecomputertotalkwitheachother,forexamplesinge-mail,QQ.Wecangoshoppinginourhousebycomputers.Wecanlearnmuchknowledge.→Computersfacilitatethecommunicationbetweenpeople.Peoplecanenjoyon-linetalkorexchangee-mailseasily.What’smore,computersprovideconvenienceforpeopletodoshoppingjustathome.Thelastbutnotleast,computersalsobroadenourviewsandkeepuswell-informed.需记忆的抢分句型1.Nothingis+more+形容词+thanto+V例句：Nothingismoresignificantthantoreceiveeducation.没有比接受教育更重要的事。2.So+形容词+be+主词+that+句子（如此...以致于...）例句：Sopreciousistimethatwecan‘taffordtowasteit.时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。3.Adj+as+Subject（主词）+be,S+V~~~（虽然...）例句：Richasourcountryis,thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.{bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一点也不}虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。4.Itpaysto+V~~~（...是值得的。）例句：Itpaystohelpothers.帮助别人是值得的。5.~enable+Object（受词）+to+V（..使..能够..）例句：Listeningtomusicenablesustofeelrelaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。6.~~~cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~~~toomuch.（再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。）例句：Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。7.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~（全世界都知道...）well-accepted例句：Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。8.Thereisnoonebut~~~does～（没有人不...）例句：Thereisnoonebutlongstogotocollege.没有人不渴望上大学。作文提高方法-5-考试作文实用替换词1、individuals,characters,folks替换(people,persons)2、positive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good3、dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替换bad4、(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,)替换many.5、harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替换think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)6、affair,business，matter替换thing7、formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion8、Increasing(ly),growing替换moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.9、beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,10、customer,client,consumer,purchaser,替换shopper11、exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very12、hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable13、captureone'sattention替换attrac