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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。ThebigTownHallclockwasstrikingmidnightwhenFrankbegantocrossthebridge.Thedarknightairwascoldandwet,andthestreetlampsgavelittlelight.Frankwasanxiousgethandandhisfootstepsrangloudlyonthesilentnight.Whenhereachedthemiddleofthebridge,hethoughthecouldhearsomeonecomingnearbehindhim.Helookedbackbutcouldseenoone.Howeverthesoundcontinued,andFrankbeganwalkingmorequickly.Thenhesloweddownagain,thinkingtherewasnothingtofearinatownasquietasthis.Theshort,quickstepsgrewlouderuntiltheyseemedverynear.Frankfounditimpossiblenottoturnround.Ashedidso,hecaughtsightofahumanformcomingtowardhim.Afterreachingtheothersideofthebridge,Frankstoppedandpretendedtolookdownatthewater.Fromthecornerofhiseyeshecouldnowmakeouttheformofamandressedinalargeovercoat.Ahatwaspulleddownoverhiseyesandverylittleofhisfacecouldbeseen.Asthemancamenear,Frankturnedtowardshimandsaidsomethingabouttheweatherinanefforttobefriendly.ThemandidnotanswerbutaskedroughlywhereOakfieldHousewas.Frankpointedtoabighouseinthedistanceandthestrangercontinuedhisway.ThenFrankwonderedwhythestrangerhadwantedtofindOakfieldHouseatsuchanhour.Heknewthatthepersonwholivedtherewasveryrich.Almostwithoutrealizingwhathewasdoing,Frankbeganfollowingthestrangerquietly.ThemanwassoonoutsidethehouseandFranksawhimlookupatthewindows.Alightwasstillon,andthemanwaiteduntilitwentout.Whenabouthalfanhourhadpassed,Franksawhimclimbnoiselesslyoverthewallandheardhimdropontothegroundattheotherside.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:NowFrankknewwhatthemanwantedtodo.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph1:Frankcouldn’tjuststandinthedarkandwait.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案及解析:LikeeveryotherSundaymorning,mybestfriend,Patty,droppedmygodchildren,JeremiahandRachel,offatmyapartmentaround6:30a.m.beforeshewentonherwaytowork.And,justlikeeveryotherSundaymorning,weallwentbacktosleepforacoupleofhours.WheneveryoneawokeImadeaquickbreakfastandthenthefourofus,myhusband,Larry,thekidsandmyself,hurriedandgotourselvesoutthedoorforchurch,justlikeeveryotherSundaymorning.Itwasn’tuntilwewalkedthroughthechurchdoorsandIsawthegirlstandingtherepassingoutflowersthatIrememberedthiswasn’tlikeeveryotherSundaymorning,itwasMother’sDay.BeforeIcouldstophim,Jeremiah,alwaysthecuriouschild,wentuptothegirlandtuggedonherarm.“Linda,whatareyoudoing?”Heasked.Lindasmiledathimandsaidbrightly“I’mgivingaflowertoeverymotherinchurchtodaybecauseit’sMother’sday.”Jeremiah’seyesgrewbright.“Mymomhadtoworktoday.CanIhaveaflowertotakehometogiveher?”Iwassoproudofhimatthatmoment.Jeremiahwasoften1)hyper,anditwassometimeshardforhimtoremembertospeakslowlyandaskforthingspolitelywhenhewasexcited.Buthehadbeentheperfectlittlegentlemanwhenheaskedforthatflower.“Ofcourse.”Lindaanswered,andloweredtheboxshewasholdingsothatJeremiahcouldpickoutaflowerforPatty.Jeremiahturnedtowardsme,proudlyholdingapinkcarnationinhishand.Hesmiledatme.Hisdarkeyesdancedwithprideandloveandexcitement.Ismiledathimandmotionedforhimtocomewithmesowecouldgotakeourseatsinchurch,butinstead,heturnedbacktowardsLinda.“CanIpleasehaveaflowerforAuntKimmietoo?”Ifeltmybreathcatchsomewhereinmychest.ThatwasthelastthingIhadexpectedJeremiahtodo.ItwasoneofthesweetestandmostsincerethingsIhadeverheardhimsay.Butneitherofuswasreadyforwhathappenednext.“Oh,no,Jeremiah.Shecan’thaveaflower.Sheisn’tamom.”Lindareplied.IwatchedasallthejoyJeremiahhadbeenfeelinglefthisface.Gonewashisbrightsmile.Thosesparklingeyesofhisturnedtroubled.Therewasnowaconfused,pain-filledlittleboystandingwhere,justsecondsago,averyhappychildhadstood.Myheartbrokeinaboutamillionpieces,butnotformyself,forJeremiah.Hisheartwasbroken,andmyheartachedforhim.Butmyheartwasalsofullbecause,inthatincredibly2)insensitivemoment,IfoundouthowmuchJeremiahlovedmeandhowmuchImeanttohim.Imaynothavebeenhismom,butitwasmyapartmenthecametoafterschoolseveraldaysaweekwhilePattyworked.Iwastheonethatfixedhismealsandgavehimhisfavorite3)Popsicles.Ialwaysreadhimstoriesandsangsongstohim.Icalmedhisfearsand4)chasedawaythemonsterswhenhehadabaddream,and,Iwasthekeeperoftheband-aidswhenhewashurt.IwastheonethatwastherewhenPattycouldn’tbe.InJeremiah’seyes,Imightnothavebeenhismom,butIwasjustasimportantashisownmotherwas.And,healways5)affectionatelycalledme,“AuntKimmie”,eventhoughIwasn’t.IshotLindaalookasItookJeremiahbythehandandurgedhimtocomewithme.Shestartedtosaysomething,butatthatpointIdidn’ttrustmyselftorespondkindlytoher,soIturnedmybackandwalkedaway.Perhapsitwasn’ttheChristianthingtodo,butwalkingawaybeatthefewchoiceun-ChristianwordsIwantedtosaytoherinstead.TherestofthatmorningJeremiahwasquietand6)withdrawn.WhenwegotbackhomefromchurchIgotoutmyprettiestvasesohecouldkeepthatpinkcarnationinitandgiveittoPattywhenshecameforhim.Buthisenthusiasmhadbeencrushed;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