高考英语概要写作技巧讲解

第1页共5页高考英语概要写作技巧讲解一、考点分析提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。二、专题详解1.专题分析①原文材料350词以内，概要写作不少于60词。②原文基本以说明文、议论文为主。③概要，基本上就是段落大意。每段一句话概括，或者两段一个大意，最多用两句话概括就行。④要着重训练自己文章主旨大意和各段段落大意的归纳概括能力。2.注意事项①找关键词和主题句，准确理解、分析原文要点，归纳段落大意。②各要点的表达要相对独立。③各要点之间要有适当的衔接。④句型力求简单，每句话要表意明白，无空泛、笼统、含混之词。⑤尽量使用短句，慎用长难句。例如，尽量少用关系代词which，who等引导的定语从句，而采用­ing形式和­ed形式作定语。⑥多使用概括性词语，少用具体描述性词语。3.模板及句型①表示文章的内容以及研究目的1)Thispaperisaimedat/covers/mainlydealswith...2)Thearticlefocusesonthetopicof...第2页共5页②表示研究的结论1)Theresultshowedthat...2)Theauthorfoundthat...3)Itwasconcludedthat...③表示推荐、观点或建议1)Theauthorsuggests/considersthat...2)Suggestionsaremadefor...4.评分原则①本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。②评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。③词数少于40和多于80的，从总分中减去2分。④评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；(3)上下文的连贯性；(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。⑤拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。⑥如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。训练（一）阅读下面的短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Recently,aprofessorofphilosophyintheUnitedStateshaswrittenabookcalledMoneyandtheMeaningofLife.Hehasdiscoveredthathowwedealwithmoneyinourday-to-daylifehasmoremeaningthanweusuallythink.Oneofthethingsheaskshisstudentstodoistokeeparecordofeverypennytheyspendforaweek.Fromthewaytheyspendtheirmoney,theyoftenseewhattheyreallyvalueinlife.第3页共5页Hesaysourrelationwithothersoftenbecomesclearlydefinedwhenmoneyentersthepicture.Youmighthavewonderfulfriendshipwithsomebodyandyouthinkthatyouareverygoodfriends.Butyouwillknowhimonlywhenyouaskhimtolendyousomemoney.Ifhedoes,itbringssomethingtotherelationshipthatseemsstrongerthaneverbefore.Oritcansuddenlyweakentherelationshipifhedoesn’t.Thispersonmaysaythathehasacertainfeeling,butifitisnotcarriedoutinthemoneyworld,thereissomethinglessrealaboutit.Sincemoneyissoimportanttous,weconsiderthosewhopossessalotofittobeveryimportant.Theauthorinterviewedsomemillionairesinresearchinghisbook.Answer:Themostsurprisingthingiswhypeoplegivemesomuchrespect.Iamnothing.Idon’tknowmuch.AllIamisrich.Peoplejusthaveanideaofmakingmoreandmoremoney,butwhatisitfor?HowmuchdoIneedforantgivenpurposesinmylife?Inhisbook,theprofessoruncoveredanimportantneedinmodernsociety:tobringbacktheideathatmoneyisaninstrumentratherthantheend.Moneyplaysanimportantroleinthematerialworld,butexpectingmoneytogivehappinessmaybemissingthemeaningoflife.Onepossibleversion:AUSprofessorhasfoundouttherelationshipbetweenmoneyandthemeaningoflife.Somepeoplethinkfriendshipandgoodrelationshipdependonwhetheryouhavemoneyandwhetheryouaregenerous.Moneyisgenerallyconsideredveryimportant,butamillionairedoesn’tfeelheisveryimportant,becausehethinksheisnothingexceptthathehasmoney.Theprofessor’sfindingsrevealthatmoneyisatoolratherthanthegoal,andmoneyisnotequaltohappiness.(81words)训练（二）阅读下面的短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Punishingchildrenisacontroversialtopic.Everybodyhasdifferentopinionsabouthowtoacttocorrectachild’sbehavior.Parents,teachers,doctors,andspecialistslikepsychologists,havedisagreementsaboutwhetheritisgoodforachild’seducationtopunishhim.Theword“punish”meansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Punishmentcanbephysicaloremotional.Physicalpunishmentiswhentheparenthits,slapsorspanksthechild.第4页共5页Ontheotherhand,emotionalpunishmentiswhentheparent,inordertoeducatethechild,doesn’tlethimwatchTV,gotoplaywithhisfriends,ordothingslikethat.Theparentsdoesn’tteachhim,butstillhepunishesthechild.Althoughmanysurveysandstudieshavebeenmadeaboutwhatthecorrectwayistoraiseachild,nobodyhastheanswerorthetruth.Ithinkitwillbeverydifficulttofindtheanswerorgetpeopletoagree.Ithinkparentsshouldlovetheirchildandgivehimthebesteducation,butatthesametime,theyshouldpunishthechildifhedeservesit.Ithinkifyouloveyourchild,youshouldberationalwhenyouapplythepunishment.Itshouldbereasonablebutstrict.Theparent’sgoalistohaveinthefutureagoodmanorwomaninsociety,sosometimesyoushoulddowhatisnecessarytogetyourchildtobehavewell.Onepossibleversion:Peoplehavemixedopinionstowardspunishingchildren.Punishmentcanbephysicaloremotional,butthekeyproblemisthewaytheyarepunished.Itisdifficulttofindthecorrectwaytoraiseachild.Properpunishmentcanbeinstructiveandnecessarytochildrenifitisreasonableandstrict.Butloveandeducationarethemostimportantforustomakeourkidsbehavewell.(66words)训练（三）阅读下面的短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。“Hewhobearsthegreatesthardshipbecomesthegreatestman.”ThisidiomshowsChinesepeople’straditionalbeliefinthevitalrolethathardshipplaysinaperson’slifeastheygrowup.Buttoday,asourliveshavegreatlyimproved,dowestillneedthisso­called“hardshipeducation”?“Wedefinitelydo,”saidWangWeiqiong,motherofa15­year­oldgirlinJiangxi,“Manychildrentakeeverythingforgranted,asthey’veneverknownhowdifficultitistomakemoney.”Wangisnotalone.Accordingtoarecentsurveyof2,017peopledonebyChinaYouthDaily.81.8percentoftheintervieweessupportedhardshipeducationincludingexperiencinglifeinpoorareas,outdoortraining,takingpart­timejobs,anddoinghousework.QiaoYu,fromTianjinForeignLanguagesSchool,alsosupportstheidea.第5页共5页“Hardshiphelpsusgrowandbepreparedforthedifficultiesofsociety,”saidthe18­year­old,whoworkedinacakestorethissummer.Butwhileitcontributestostudents’development,“hardshiped