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TEM4新题型写作题型变化：Previously：陈述观点——论证观点——得出结论Now：概括材料——提出观点并论证观点——得出结论（重申观点或提出建议）材料作文Tactics：1.仔细审题，分析材料（2-3mins）2.列出提纲，确定布局（3-4mins）Para.1.引出话题，概括材料（summarize，paraphrase）Para.2.提出自身观点，列出理由论证Para.3.重申观点或提出建议3.正式写作（30-35mins）4.检查并优化（2-3mins）评分标准如何总结材料第一段：Describethephenomenon/introducethediscussedtopic+opinionsfrombothsides/summarizeorparaphrasethetopicsentencesintheexcerpt.参考范文WithIntelligentMachinestoDotheThinking,WillOurBrainsGetLazy?Nowadays,manyaspectsofpeople’sdailylifehaveundergoneconsiderablechangesbecauseoftherecentdevelopmentinartificialintelligence.Obviously,artificialintelligencehasalreadycompletelyrenovatedpeople’slifestyle.Ontheonehand,thecontributionofartificialintelligencetothesocietyisprominentandpeople’sdependenceonitisanirreversibletrend.Peopleenjoythebenefitsandconveniencebroughtbyintelligentmachines.Ontheotherhand,peoplearestillconcernedaboutitsnegativeimpact,forexample,whetherourbrainswillregresswithintelligentmachinestodothethinking.第二段：先表明自己观点Stance:asfarasI’mconcerned,astome,frommyperspective,inmyview,personallyspeaking,frommypointofview再分条论证（灵活运用连接词）1.Firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast2.First,second,third3.Inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,lastbutnotleast4.Initially,besides,furthermore,lastbutnotleast范文：Inmyopinion,artificialintelligencewillenableourbrainstogetmorecreative.Admittedly,alotofworkhasbeendonebyintelligentmachines.Itseemsthatthefunctionofpeoplehasbeenweakenedandpeople‘sbrainshavebeenreplaced.Asamatteroffact,thankstointelligentmachines,peoplecanexpandtheircreativeenergyandaddnewvarieties.Simplyspeaking,whenpeoplearefreefromtedious,repetitive,sometimesevendangerouswork,workefficiencywillundoubtedlybeimproved.Asaresult,peoplecansparemoretimetodowhattheywantandpursuewhattheydreamof,whichisthepremiseofcreativity.Moreover,creativitystemsprimarilyfromknowledgeandthinking.Oncepeoplehavetheopportunitytodomorethinkingandlearning,theirintelligencewouldbeenhancedratherthanweakened.第三段：enrichyourrestatement/expressyourhopes/givesuggestionsAllinall,inanutshell,tosumup,inbrief,inshort,insummary,inconclusion…Basedontheaboveexhaustiveelaboration,it’squitenaturaltocometotheconclusionthat…范文：Althoughartificialintelligenceistheexhibitionofpeople’shighdegreeofcreativepower,itshouldbenotedthatitislikeadouble-edgedsword.Thesensiblechoiceistoembraceitsadvantagesandcopewiththeproblemsithasaroused.Thisiswhatanadvancedandrationalsocietyshouldbelike.合理利用模板及范文例句：Para.1：Ithaslongbeenacontentiousissueastowhether题目陈述.Somepeopleareoftheopinionthat观点一,whileotherspointoutthat观点二.（总结材料）Nowadays,with现象,peoplearebecomingincreasinglyawareoftheproblemwhether…(再总结材料)Nowadays,itisaheatedlydiscussedtopicthat引出话题.Thisproblemismuchdebatedinthatitaffectsalmosteverybodyintheirdailylives.Para.2:Asforme,Iagreetotheideathat…becauseitsadvantagesoutweighitsdisadvantages.Therearedozenofreasonsbehindmybelief…AsfarasIamconcerned,theopinionthat…holdsmoreweight.Foronething,论据一.理由一.Foranother,论据二.理由二.Inmypointofview,把标题变为陈述句.Therearenumerousreasonstosupportmyopinion.Oneoftheprimarycausesisthat理由一.Anotherreasonthatcanbeseenbyeverypersonisthat理由二.Agoodcaseinpointis举例证明二.Asacollegestudent,Ithinkthat论点.Tobeginwith,理由一.证明理由一.AfurtherreasonwhyIsupportthisisthat理由二.Thereisagoodevidencetoshowthat证明理由二.Para.3:Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,aconclusioncanbedrawnthat结论.Iwish提出希望.Aftercloseexamination,itisnotdifficulttodrawtheconclusionthat总结观点.