英语写作——推荐信

Howtoimproveyourwriting?---LettersofRecommendation假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，你最近使用了一本新版的XX英英词典，感觉非常实用，请你利用英语班会时间向同学们推荐它。内容要点如下：1.特色（如词汇量，用法，例句等方面）；2.使用心得Hello,everyone!…………………………………………………..Thankyouforlistening.审题Outline要点3:使用心得(总结陈词，再次点题)Para.1Para.2Para.3提炼信息列提纲明确主次分段落背景：在班会课上向同学推荐一本英英词典要点1：表明写作目的(推荐词典)要点2:特色(如词汇量，用法，例句等方面)Howtoimproveit?•Hello,everyone!I’mLiHua,studyinginaninternationalschool.I’mverygladthatIhaveachancetoshowsomethinginthisclassmeeting.recommend/introduceanEnglish-Englishdictionarytoyou信件的开头注意明确对象，开门见山！Para1:信件开头怎么写?Goodsamples:•Hello,everyone!TodayIwouldliketorecommendanEnglish-Englishdictionarytoyouinthisclassmeeting.(邱怀彬)•Hello,everyone!Inthisclass,IwanttointroduceanewEnglishdictionarywhosenameisHappyDictionary.Ithinkitisverysuitableforseniorhighschoolstudents.(沈晴)•Hello,everyone!RecentlyIboughtanewOxfordEnglish-EnglishdictionaryandIfounditisveryworthwhiletobuyit,soIwanttointroduceittoallofyoutoday.(郭安琪)开门见山，简练切题！明确主题，简要拓展！Para2：如何描述词典的特色?（如词汇量，用法，例句等方面）本词典的特色：1.词汇量大2.用法解释详细3.例句容易理解结果：篇幅简短，内容单薄，无法体现语言表达能力。对策：对要点进行合理拓展，使内容丰满，详略得当！遇到翻译难点，则转换表达方式！※如果简单罗列：1.largevocabulary2.detailedexplanationofusage3.examplesentencesthatareeasytounderstandPara.2：如何描述词典的特色?（如词汇量，用法，例句等方面）；(vocabulary)First,ithasalargevocabulary,withmorethan1000newwordsadded,whichisindeedahelptous.Andthewordsareexplainedindetails.(魏琪敏)(usage)Secondly,thedictionaryshowsusdifferentwaystousethewordssothatwecanusethewordscorrectlywhenwritingEnglisharticles.(马泽华)(examplesentence)Theexamplesentencesareeasytounderstand,whichhelpsushaveabetterunderstandingofacertainword.(陈晓杉)阐述要点，延伸细节Howtoimproveit?Para2：如何描述词典的特色?•Firstofall,thedictionaryhasalargevocabulary,whichcontain3500wordsweshouldlearninseniorhighschool.Ifwemeetsomeunknownwords,youcanrefertoit.Besides,theuseofeverywordislistedwithdetailedphrasesandexamplesinthisdictionary.Afterall,thereisnoworsethingthanexplainalotwithoutexamples.Moreover,theexamplesentencescannotonlyhelpustounderstandtheword,butalsopracticalinlife.Groupwork:1.Howtoevaluate(评价)thiswriting?Checklist:Areallthepointsstated?Arethereanydetailstosupportthepoints?Doesthewriterusethelinkingwordsproperly?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Arethereanymistakes?2.Markthegoodsentencepatterns.3.Circlethemistakesandcorrectthem.★Howtoimproveit?Para2：如何描述词典的特色?•Firstofall,thedictionaryhasalargevocabulary,whichcontain3500wordsweshouldlearninseniorhighschool.Ifwemeetsomeunknownwords,youcanrefertoit.Besides,theuseofeverywordislistedwithdetailedphrasesandexamplesinthisdictionary.Afterall,thereisnoworsethingthanexplainalotwithoutexamples.Moreover,theexamplesentencescannotonlyhelpustounderstandtheword,butalsopracticalinlife.Howtoimproveit?Para2：如何描述词典的特色?•Firstofall,thedictionaryhasalargevocabulary,whichcontain3500wordsweshouldlearninseniorhighschool.Ifwemeetsomeunknownwords,youcanrefertoit.Besides,theuseofeverywordislistedwithdetailedphrasesandexamplesinthisdictionary.Afterall,thereisnoworsethingthanexplainalotwithoutexamples.Moreover,theexamplesentencescannotonlyhelpustounderstandtheword,butalsopracticalinlife.★★★explainingwearenotonlyhelpfulforus1.注意检查语法错误。2.合理运用连接词。3.恰当选词，注意变换句型。★containswordsHerearesomerelatedphrases.短语积累•languagelearningstrategy语言学习策略•formthehabitof...养成...习惯•enlargeone’svocabulary扩大某人的词汇量•lookupawordinthedictionary查字典•theeffectivewaystodosth.做某事的有效方法•haveagoodcommandof对…熟练掌握•haveanadvantageover...比...有优势•developone’sinterest培养兴趣•beofmuchhelpto...有益于...•beusedtodo...被用来做...相关句子•ThereareseveralreasonswhyIlikethedictionary.1.有几个理由为什么我喜欢这本字典。•Iregardtheaccurateexplanationsofwordsasoneofthemostimportant.2.我认为准确的单词解释是最重要的。•People’sviewsonlearningEnglishvaryfrompersontoperson.3.不同的人对学习英语有不同的看法。•Withmanyvividexamples,ithasanadvantageoverothers.4.因为有很多生动的例子，它比其他的更有优势。Howtopolishyourwriting:思考2：如何描述词典的特色★★★Trytotranslatethesesentences.Para3：如何收尾?（使用心得，回归主题）Inaword,withthehelpofthisdictionary,IhavemadeprogressinEnglishlearning,andIhopethatallofyoucangetone.(林彦希)AfterstudyingEnglishwiththedictionary,Icanmemorizewordseasilyandsolveproblemsquickly.Itisagreathelperformystudy,soIsuggestthateveryoneshouldbuyoneforyourself.(王健超)Inmyopinion,itisahelpfulbookforus.Throughthisdictionary,IcanlearnmoreaboutEnglish.Irecommendthisdictionarytoyousincerelyandhopethatyouwilllikeit.(陈思琪)利用短语或从句，增加与主题相关的成分，简练收尾Onewell-writtenversion:Hello,everyone!I'dliketospendafewminutesinthisclassmeetingintroducinganEnglish-Englishdictionarytoyou.Firstly,ithasalargevocabulary,withmorethan1,000newwordsadded,whichisindeedahelptous.Astheexplanationsofthewordsareofgreataccuracy,itwillbeeasyforustounderstandandwewillhaveabetterunderstandingofacertainword.Moreover,theusageofthewordsarelistedindetail,withmanyvividexamples.AndIreallyappreciatetheseexamples,fortheycangivemeanauthentictasteofthislanguage.Still,thevarietyofthestructuresusedintheexamplesentencesbenefitsmegreatly.Allinall,thisdictionaryreallyservesasagoodtoolformyEnglishstudy.Istronglyrecommendthatyoushouldhaveone.Thankyouforlistening.★★★★第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，你的笔友Chris中文学得很好，对中国文化很感兴趣。他来信让你推荐适合的中文读物。请根据下面