读后续写The-Hidden-Treasure(公开课)

ContinuationWriting读后续写Treasurepositiveattitudefriendshipmoneyjewelryloveknowledge1.Whatwasthehiddentreasure?2.Howwasitdiscovered?…Fastreading4.Whatisthemessageconveyedinthepassage?2.Whoarethecharactersinvolved?1.What’sthestyleofthecontext?3.What’sthehiddentreasure?Fastreading2.Whoarethecharactersinvolved?1.What’sthestyleofthecontext?A.NarrationB.ArgumentationC.ExpositionOldManDonovan,AnnandI,andhisfamily.Narration（记叙文）（议论文）(说明文)3.What’sthehiddentreasure?Thesweet,kindheart.4.Whatisthemessageconveyedinthepassage?Don’tjudgeaheartuntilyouknowit.1.Whatisthefirsttreasurementioned?2.Whatdidchildrendoabouthistreasure?3.WhatdidDonovandotothechildrenwhostolehisfruit?ReadforcomprehensionPara.1---34.Whatwasourattitudetohim?Readforcomprehension1.Whatisthefirsttreasurementioned?2.Whatdidchildrendoabouthistreasure?Hisbeautifulfruit.They,drawnbythefruit,stoleit.3.WhatdidDonovandotothechildrenwhostolehisfruit?Hethrewrocksandevenshotatthem.Wewereinfluencedbythe________.4.Whatwasourattitudetohim?rumorsnegativeWehelda________attitudetohim.1.Howdidwegobackhomethatday?2.Howdidwefeelwhenhestoppedus?Para.4--53.Howdidwefeelwhenheofferedusapples?1.Howdidwegobackhomethatday?Wewenthomethroughhisfarm.2.Howdidwefeelwhenhestoppedus?Wewereextremely__________.frightened3.Howdidwefeelwhenheofferedusapples?Wefeltquite_________.surprisedPara.61.Whatdidwedotogetherastimewenton?(1)Hekepton…(2)Wetalkedtohimforhours.Wewereimpressedwithhimby_____________.communicationwefrightenedsurprisedconcernedsweet,kindheartOldManrumorsmisunderstoodexperiencegottoknowcommunicationunderstoodWetooka_________attitudetowardsOldManDonovan.positiveWhichofthefollowingsentencescanbestconveythetheme?A.Afaithfulfriendishardtofind.B.Wisdomismoretobeenviedthanriches.C.Ahumanbeingcanalterhislifebyalteringattitudes.CriticalthinkingC.Ahumanbeingcanalterhislifebyalteringattitudes.D.Themanproposes,theGoddisposes.Unfortunately,hisfamilyneverseemedtoenjoyourcompany.Theyneversmiledorwelcomedusin.negativeItcanbeinferredthathisfamilyhada_______attitudetowardsus.PredictionAdvice:Theendingshouldbepositive.Wouldthefamilychangetheirattitudetowardsusaswealteredourattitudetooldman?How?Paragraph7:Everysummer,wewouldvisitMr.Donovanandtalktohim._______ContinuationwritingMr.DonovanWeHisfamilyillnessParagraph8:Thenextwinter,wordgotaroundthatOldManDonovanhaddied._____________…attitudeAdvice:makesurethestorydevelopslogicallyandreasonably.PossibleversionEverysummer,wewouldvisitMr.Donovanandtalktohim.Hetoldusdifferentkindsofstorieswewerefondof.Butonesummer,weheardthathewashospitalizedbecausehewassickwithhisthroat.Findingoutthathewasdischargedfromthehospital,wewenttovisithimrightaway.Thefamilyreceivedus.Whenaskedabouthisillness,theytoldusnottoworrytoomuch.Whenweweretoleave,surprisingly,theyofferedussomelusciousfruitandaskedustovisithimasusual.Paragraph8:Thenextwinter,wordgotaroundthatOldManDonovanhaddied._____________weWeHisfamilysadness…attitudePossibleversionThenextwinter,wordgotaroundthatOldManDonovanhaddied.Hearingthebadnews,AnnandIcouldn’tholdbackourtears.Wewereheartbrokenanddecidedtogotothefuneral.Whenwegottothefuneral,wesawalotoffamiliarfacesfromtheneighborhood.Thefamilykindlygreetedusandsaidtheyweresogladwehadcome.AtthemomentwhenwehadtosaygoodbyetoMr.Donovan,ouroldfriend,forever,weallweptmournfully,butourwonderfulmemoriesofhimcomfortedus.Asuccessfulstorymessage(positive)development(reasonable)(picturesque)languagesadnessWecouldn’tholdbackourtears.weallweptmournfully.止不住眼泪悲伤的哭泣我们的心像针扎一样痛Wehadpainsofneedlesstabbingourhearts.Advice:tellone’sfeelingsbymeansofvividdescription.ContinuationWritingcomprehensionlanguagedevelopmentreadcarefullymakesurethestorydevelopslogicallyandreasonably.tellone’sfeelingsbymeansofvividdescription.