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HOWTOCOMPLETEASTORY——读后续写之阅读与构思WARMING-UPAvacationwithmymotherAtripfilledwithsurprisesandamusementsAbsent-mindedandforgetfulyetnice,sweetAccordingtothetitle,whatkindofquestionscomeintoyourmind?e.g.:Whatwouldhappeninthevacation?ReadforstructureWhatisthewritingstyle?A.Narrativewriting(记叙文)B.Argumentativewriting(议论文)C.Expositorywriting(说明文)D.PlayA.Narrativewriting(记叙文)Who:Mom,Dad,DavidandIWhen:IwaselevenWhere:FromColoradotoNorthDakotaWhat:AstrangefamilytripCharactersPlotsThemeIhadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother--loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.CHILDHOODMOTHERcause&effectFAMILYTRIPReadforDetailsPara1strangeabouther.SettingWritingtip1:Comestraighttothepointtoattractreadersinterests.OrganizationofthetextPara1settinganinterestingchildhoodloving,sweet,absent-minded,forgetfulmomReadforDetailsPara2Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached……DavidandIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriendsWhoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?bravelydroveoffMomForgotthepurseandtraveler’scheckBeforethetripOrganizationofthetextPara1settinganinterestingchildhoodloving,sweet,absent-minded,forgetfulmomPara2beforethetripforgotthepurse,travelerscheksunwillingReadforDetailsPara3onestandsoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhiletheothergoestothebathroomIhadterriblepicturesinmymind:…DavidandIMomWritingtip2:Combinethedirectdescriptionwithsidedescriptiontohighlightcharactertraits.ReadforDetailsPara4Father,DavidandIMotherMomsuddenlygotagreatidea:…Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.be_________tostrangersdefensivebe______tostrangersnicegapofthoughtOrganizationofthetextPara1settinganinterestingchildhoodloving,sweet,absent-minded,forgetfulmomPara2beforethetripforgotthepurse,travelerscheksunwillingPara3&4duringthetripplayedlookout;setuptent;foundavacancynervousrelievedPara5&6duringthetrip/afterthetripReadthegivensentencesandinferPara5:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus._____________________________Para6:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.___________________________drovethroughsawlotsofgreatsightsAconclusionforthetripVSThebeginningofthenewtrip?TheendingofthetripSeparatepartofthetripintroduction(para1)beforethetrip(para2)duringthetrip(para3)duringthetrip(para4)duringthetrip(para5)conclusion(para6)OnepossiblestructureReadthegivensentencesandinferPara5:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus._____________________________Q1:Whydidtheyrememberthebrand-newtent?Q4:Howwouldtheyfeel?Q2:Whatwouldtheydo?Q3:Whatwouldmotherdo?Somethingwasrelatedtotent?SomethingwasforgottenbymomWritingtip3:Analyzethecloselinkbetweenthegiveninformationtohaveasuitablelogic.ReadthegivensentencesandinferQ1:Whatsightswouldtheysee?Q4:Howdidtheyfeelattheendofthestory?Q2:Whatdidthesightslooklike?Q3:Whatwouldtheydo?Para6:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.___________________________Thebeautifulsights?Arrivedatdestination?Echowith(呼应)theParagraph1Writingtip4:Echowith(呼应)thebeginningtomakeyourarticlemorecoherent.ClarifytheunderlinedwordsCharactersforgetful,absent-minded,niceEventtrip,camping,troubleCharactertraitMom,Dad,DavidtooltentWritingtip5:Choosingtheproperwordscarefullybasedonthecloselinkbetweenthecontentandthegivenwords.Don’tforgettounderlinethem.ReadforthetitleandthemeAvacationwithmymotheramusementandsurpriseabsent-mindedandforgetfulyetnice,sweetunwillingnervousrelievedThinking:Whatwillbethebestthemeforthisstory?Writingtip6:Havingcreativeplottingneedstohaveaproperthemetomatchthestory.Tipsforcontinuationwriting“4C”forwriting:CarefulreadingCreativeplottingCarefulpolishingClearwritingThecloselinkamongthegivenparagraphsWritingtip1:Combinethedirectdescriptionwithsidedescriptiontohighlightcharactertraits.Writingtip2:Analyzethecloselinkbetweenthegiveninformationtohaveasuitablelogic.Writingtip3:Havingcreativeplottingneedstohaveaproperthemetomatchthestory.Writingtip4:Choosingtheproperwordscarefullybasedonthecloselinkbetweenthecontentandthegivenwords.Don’tforgettounderlinethem.StoryLogicPlotOnepossibleverisionThenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Thinkingofthistent,Momsuggestedthatwegocampinginthenextvillageinexcitement,withhereyesglittering.Consideringherenthusiasm,weallagreed.Whenthedoorofourcaropened,Momstormedoutinstantlyandurgedustoputupthetent.DavidandIwereaskedtopickupsomebranchestobuildafire.Andwhenwecameback,DadandMomhadalreadylaindownthegrasscomfortablyinfrontofthetent,talkingmerrilywithalocalboyatourage,whokeptglancingatthistentcuriously.Soonwelearntthattheboyinragsevendidn’thaveahometolivein.Ofcourse,Mom“forgot”totakethistentwithusagain.Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Andwealsohadanicetimelivingwithmygrandparentsduringthattrip.Butwhatimpressedmemostwasthattent,whichwasforgottendeliberatelybyMom.Thoughshedidlovegoingcamping,shepresentedth