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Exercises:1.Icannotarguewithyourreasoningthattelevisionequipmentisstillinanearlystageofdevelopment,butatmyageIcannotaffordtowaitfortechnicalrefinements.你认为电视还处在开发阶段，我无话可说；但我已这把年纪了等不到电视技术的改善了。2.Ifchildrenareaccordedtherespectasadults,theycanbecountedontodisplaycomparablemanners.假如孩子能象成人一样受到人们的尊敬，他们同样也会对人彬彬有礼的。3.IammorealiveinthepresenceofaletterfromyouthaninthecompanyofmostofthepeopleIencounterinmylife.令我感到振奋的是看见你的信，而不是一生中相处的大多数人和我相伴。4.The1.248billionthChinesewasbornin1999.到1999年，中国人口已经达到12.48亿。5.Tooclearly,itisatopicweshalldonojusticetointhisplace.很明显，象这样的问题我们在这里是不可能讲得透彻的。第二章翻译的过程（2）（2011年9月22日WangZhengChapterFocus:1.Representation2.Testing/Proofreading第二节表达Adequaterepresentationistheendofaccuratecomprehension.Somerelations1.betweenloyaltyandsmoothnesseg.Itisatruthuniversallyacknowledged,thatasinglemaninpossessionofagoodfortune,mustbeinwantofawife.(JaneAusten:PrideandPrejudice)Version1.有钱的单身汉总要娶位太太，这是一条举世公认的真理。Version2.举世公认，一个拥有一大笔财产的单身男人必定想娶一个女人做太太，这以成为一条真理。Version3.有钱的单身汉必定想娶亲，这条真理无人不晓。Version4.谁都知道，单身汉有了钱，第一件事儿就是要娶个媳妇。2.betweenformandcontenteg.IwasinthemiddlebeforeIknewthatIhadbegun.(p.25)version1.等我发现我自己已开始爱上你的时候，我已经走了一半路了。version2.我是到了不能自拔的时候才发现爱上了你。3.betweenself-confinementandcreativityeg.1Therainyseasonhassetinearlierthisyear.version1.今年，雨季来得早了点。version2.今年的雨季来得比往年早。eg.2Thecoldweatherfrostedupthetracklastnight.version1.昨晚寒冷的天气使跑道上结了霜。version2.昨晚天气寒冷，跑道上结了霜。cf.over-representationandUnder-representationeg.1HewasonhiswaytoChinaagain.version1.他又风尘仆仆地踏上去中国的旅程。version2.他又踏上去中国的旅程。eg.2Hesoldhard-to-getitems.version1.他行贿受贿，兜售紧俏商品。version2.他经销紧俏商品。第三节审校Effectiveproof-reading,sometimestermedrevision,isacarefulreviewofthetargetlanguage,withspecialemphasisonaccuracyandconsistencyofrendering1.Correctionandcompensationeg.1（p.30）2.Avoidingtranslationeseeg.3（p.30）3.Hypotactic（形合）v.s.paratactic（意合）(withorwithoutsyntacticconnection.)InEnglish,clausesandphrasesarecoordinatedwithoneanotherorsubordinatedtooneanothersyntacticallywhileinChinesetheyareplacedoneafteranotherwithoutcoordinationconnectives.eg.Hehadadisconcertinghabitofexpressingcontradictoryideasinrapidsuccession.他有一种令人难堪的习惯：一会儿一个看法，自相矛盾，变化无常。Tosumup:accurate,natural,economical,brief,terse,refined,Exercises1.MissOsborn’sandheartwerestillfreeaftervariousincompleteloveaffairs.2.PeopleseeReebokshoesas“cool”andthetrendythingtowear.3.Hewastheopensesametoanewandglitteringworldthatexcitedmeasnothinginmylifehadevendonebefore.4.Moreandmorehard-workingyoungcouplesarebecoming“dinks”.5.Clothingnewideasinoldformisinnowaydifferentfromputtingnewwineintooldbottles.