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保护地球的英语作文ProtecttheEarthTheearth,theonlymotherofhumanbeings,isnowfacingagreatthreat-environmentalpollution.Therefore,itisimportantforallofustoprotecttheearth,forsheisonlyhometoallpeopleslivingonit.Throughouttheworld,environmentalpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreseriousasaresultofvariousreasons.Firstofall,therapideconomicandsocialdevelopmentisproducingalargeamountofpollutioninformofgas,wasterandwaste;.Besides,People'spoorawarenessofenvironmentalprotectionisalsoanotherimportantfactorcontributingtoenvironmentalproblems.Forexample,alargenumberofpeoplehavedevelopedthehabitofusingplasticbagsandwhitelunchboxeswhichdogreatharmtoenvironment.What’sworse,manypeoplearecuttingtingdownincreasingnumberoftrees,causingsoilerosion.Inaddition,themanagementofthegovernmentalsocontributestoseriouspollution.Therefore,wemusttakemeasurestopreventtheearthfrombeingpolluted.Livingonthisbeautifulplanet,wemustactivelycontributetobeautifyingtheenvironment.It'simportanttoimprovetheenvironmentalawarenessofhumanbeings.Thefactoriesshouldreducethedischargeofsewageandgas.PeopleshouldlearntousecleanenergysuchasSolar,NuclearandHydrogenenergy.Thegovernmentshouldmakesomelawstobandifferentharmfulpollution.Let’schangewordsintoaction!Theearthisouronlyhome.Fromnowon,everybodyshouldprotecttheenvironmentandmakeourhomeabetterworld.(指导老师：胡波)批改老师counter级别优秀批改1.…forsheisonlyhometoallpeopleslivingonit.建议此句改为：…forsheistheonlyhometoallpeoplelivingonit.这里，only前面一般是要带上修饰语的，如：theonlyperson唯一的人；myonlyson我唯一的儿子。另外，people是一个集合名词，本身就是一个复数，“人，人们”，所以，在此没必要加上s.(但是，如果people当“民族”讲时，可是视为可数名词)。2.What’sworse,manypeoplearecuttingtingdownincreasingnumberoftrees.我们有：anumberof大量的；numbersof大量的。但没有numberof.因此，本句可改为：What’sworse,manypeoplearecuttingdownanincreasingnumberoftrees.参考例句(文)1.Therefore,itisimportantforallofustoprotecttheearth,forsheisonlyhometoallpeoplelivingonit.2.What’sworse,manypeoplearecuttingdownanincreasingnumberoftrees,causingsoilerosion.Inaddition,themanagementofthegovernmentalsocontributestoseriouspollution.