2017新高考作文概要写作Summary-Writing

SummarywritingAsummaryisashortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsth,notthedetails《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》读者在正确理解文章的基础上,在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。Itisabrief,thoroughandobjectiverestatementofthemainideaandkeypointsofalongercomposition.01Whatisasummary?•Maryisabeautifulgirlwhoalwayssmilestoothers.•Maryisagirl.•Containthemainidea•Ignoretheunnecessarydetails√•a60-wordsummary•useyourownwords•inthethirdperson•withabriefsentence•connectionbetweensentences(句子衔接)02RequestsofSummaryWritingStep1.Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor’spurposeStep2.Dividethepassage&summarizethemainideaofeachpartStep3.HighlightthekeyinformationofeachpartStep4.MakeanoutlineofthepassageStep5.WritethefirstdraftStep6.Revisethesummary03StepsofSummaryWriting提炼要点整合删除细节删除具体例子（引用一两个说明问题即可）避免重复同义转换:近义词、同义词等替换语言句子重构:调整词类、时态、语态等逻辑：衔接（照应、替代、省略、连接和词汇衔接）04SkillsofSummaryWritingStep1.Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor’spurpose确定体裁，明确主题体裁：主题：记叙文文艺复兴时期的艺术Step2.Dividethepassage&summarizethemainideaofeachpart明确文章结构Para2Para1Para1Para2√Step3.Highlightthekeyinformationofeachpart划主题句与关键信息DuringtheRenaissance,newideasandvaluesgraduallyreplacedthoseheldintheMiddleAges.Peoplebegantoconcentratelessonreligiousthemesandadoptamorehumanisticattitudetolife.AtthesametimepaintersreturnedtoclassicalRomanandGreekideasaboutart.Theytriedtopaintpeopleandnatureastheyreallywere.Richpeoplewantedtopossesstheirownpaintings,sotheycoulddecoratetheirsuperbpalacesandgreathouses.Theypaidfamousartiststopaintpicturesofthemselves,theirhousesandpossessions,aswellastheiractivitiesandachievements.TheRenaissance(15thto16thcentury)Para1TopicSentence:“DuringtheRenaissance,newideasandvaluesgraduallyreplaced…”Idea1:“Peoplebegantoconcentratelessonreligiousthemesandadoptamorehumanisticattitudetolife.”Idea2:“Atthesametimepaintersreturnedtoclassical…peopleandnatureastheyreallywere.”Example:“Richpeoplewantedto…”Oneofthemostimportantdiscoveriesduringthisperiodwashowtodrawthingsinperspective.ThistechniquewasfirstusedbyMasaccioin1428.Whenpeoplefirstsawhispaintings,theywereconvincedthattheywerelookingthroughaholeinthewallatarealscene.Iftherulesofperspectivehadnotbeendiscovered,noonewouldhavebeenabletopaintsuchrealisticpictures.Bycoincidence,oilpaintswerealsodevelopedatthistime,whichmadethecoloursusedinpaintingslookricheranddeeper.Withoutthenewpaintsandthenewtechnique,wewouldnotbeabletoseethemanygreatmasterpiecesforwhichthisperiodisfamous.TheRenaissance(15thto16thcentury)Para2TopicSentence:“Oneofthemostimportantdiscoveriesduringthisperiodwashowtodrawthingsinperspective.”Informationaboutperspective:Putforward:Masaccio;1428Content:“…lookingthroughaholeinawallatarealscene.”Assistance:“Bycoincidence,oilpaintswerealsodeveloped…”Step4.MakeanoutlineofthepassagePara1TopicSentence:Idea1:Idea2:Para2TopicSentence:Informationaboutperspective:Putforward:Content:Assistance:Step5.WritethefirstdraftPara1TopicSentence:DuringtheRenaissance,newideasandvaluesgraduallyreplacedthoseheldintheMiddleAges.Rewrite:IntheRenaissance,newviewpointswereinplaceofthosehundredsyearsago.viewpointsnewideasandvalueswereinplaceofhundredsyearsagoreplacedheldintheMiddleAges同义转换Idea1:Peoplebegantoconcentratelessonreligiousthemesandadoptamorehumanisticattitudetolife.Rewrite：Firstly,peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones.Idea2:AtthesametimepaintersreturnedtoclassicalRomanandGreekideasaboutart.Theytriedtopaintpeopleandnatureastheyreallywere.Rewrite：Secondly,paintersreturnedtoclassicalideas,whichattachedgreatimportancetorealpeopleandnature.focusedmoreon同义转换句型转变短语连接删除细节Para1IntheRenaissance,newviewpointswereinplaceofthosehundredsyearsago.Firstly,peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones.Secondly,paintersreturnedtoclassicalideaswhichfocusedonrealpeopleandnature.(38words)Step6.RevisetheSummaryPeoplehadnewviewpointsduringtheRenaissance.Meanwhile,painterspreferredtheclassicalideasandpaintedrealpeopleandnature.Firstly,Secondly,PeoplehadnewviewpointsduringtheRenaissance.Peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones.Meanwhile,painterspreferredtheclassicalideasandpaintedrealpeopleandnature.(29words)OnepossibleversionofPara1TipsCoverallthekeypointsWriteincorrectlanguageUseproperconjunctionsAvoidcopyingtheoriginalsentencesCountthewords(60±20)OnepossibleversionPeoplehadnewviewpointsduringtheRenaissance.Peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones.Meanwhile,painterspreferredtheclassicalideasandpaintedrealpeopleandnature.TheperspectiveproposedbyMasaccioin1428becamethetypicalpaintingcharacteristicinthatperiod.Withthedevelopmentofoilpaints,peoplefeltlikeseeingrealitythroughahole.(58words)