2014考研英语二大作文辅导讲义-王江涛

考研英语强化阶段—写作考研英语（二）写作强化课程——大作文主讲王江涛考研英语强化阶段—写作图表作文：1、十大必背范文之一：交通问题英语（二）大纲样题（2007MBA真题）Directions:Inthissection,youareaskedtowriteanessaybasedonthefollowingtable,inwhichyoushoulddescribethetableandstateyouropinionsdrawnfromit.Youshouldwriteatleast150Englishwords.WriteyouressayonANSWERSHEET2.(15points)AccidentsinaChineseCity(2005)Mainaccidentcausesnumberofpercentagerise(+)accidentsin2005orfall(-)over20041.driversturningleftwithoutduecare608+10%2.driverstravelingtooclosetoothervehicles411+9%3.pedestrianscrossingroadscarelessly401+12%4.driversdrivingundertheinfluenceofalcohol281+15%5.driversfailingtogiveasignal264-5%图表：三大数据——最高数据、最低数据、变化最大的数据；时间——起始时间、终止时间、变化最大的时间；变化——上升或增加、下降或减少、保持平稳或波动。总体描述：ThetableaboveclearlyreflectsthestatisticsoftrafficaccidentshappeninginaChinesecity.Accordingtothetable,in2005,thetrafficaccidentsintheChinesecitystillfailedtoarouseconcernsofbothdriversandpedestrians.细节描述：Thenumberofaccidentsthatresultedfromdriversturningleftwithoutduecareincreased10percentto608,whichishighlightedonthefirstrowofthetable.Accidentsrelateddriversdrivingundertheinfluenceofalcoholenjoyedthegreatestrise,a15percentrise.Incomparison,thosepedestrianswhocrossroadscarelesslyalsoledto401accidents.Byanalyzingthesefactorsdisplayedinthediagram,wemaydrawtheconclusionthatbothdriversandpedestrianshavelittlerespectfortrafficregulations.考研英语强化阶段—写作建议措施：Ashasbeenmentionedabove,countermeasuresshouldbetakenimmediatelysoastoreversethegrimsituation.Firstofall,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbeestablishedtoseverelypunishthosewhoviolatetrafficrulesopenly,betheydriversorpedestrians.Furthermore,awidespreadeducationcampaignshouldbelaunchedtoinformcitizensthatproperrulesforthemareofbenefittopublicsafety.Onlybydoingsocanweexistinaharmoniousanddisciplinedsociety.(196words)参考译文：上述图表清楚反映了中国某市的交通事故数据。根据图表，在2005年，这座中国城市的交通事故仍然没能引起司机和行人的关注。源于司机左转不够小心的事故数量增加了10%，达到608起，这在图表的首行非常显著。与司机酒后驾车相关的事故增长率高达15%，这在所列示的五大事故原因中增幅最大。同样，那些过马路不小心的行人也导致了401起事故。通过分析图表中所显示的这些原因，我们可以得出结论，司机和行人都不太遵守交通法规。综上所述，我们必须立即采取抵制措施来扭转这一不好的状况。首先，我们应该制定相关法律法规来严惩那些公然违犯交通法规的人，无论他们是司机还是行人。其次，我们应该开展一场广泛的宣传活动来告知公众：适当法规对公共安全有益。只有这样我们才能在一个和谐、守法的社会中生存。2、十大必背范文之二：现代科技：2010年真题Directions:Inthissection,youareaskedtowriteanessaybasedonthefollowingchart.Inyourwriting,youshould1)interpretthechartand2)giveyourcomments.Youshouldwriteatleast150Englishwords.WriteyouressayonANSWERSHEET2.(15Points)2010真题图表Mobile-phoneSubscription考研英语强化阶段—写作图表描述：Fromtheinformationgivenintheabovecolumnchart,wecanseeastrikingcontrastinmobile-phonesubscriptionsbetweendevelopinganddevelopedcountriesfrom2000to2008.Duringthisperiod,therehasbeenadramaticincreasefrom0.4to4billionmobilephonesubscriptionsindevelopingcountries,whilethatofdevelopedcountriesremainedsteadyunder1billionduringthedecade.原因列举：Atleasttwofundamentalfactorscouldcontributetothisphenomenon.Ontheonehand,withtherapidincreaseineconomyhappeninginthedevelopingcountries,thetelecommunicationindustryinthosecountriesgotagreatboundtomeetthedemandofglobalization.Asaresult,theuserofmobilephonewhichcannarrowthedistancebetweenpeopleandlinkthewholeworldtogetherroseatanincrediblespeed.Ontheotherhand,theextremelyadvancedcivilizationofdevelopedcountriesmeanslesspotentialinmanyaspectsincludingintheareaofprivatetelecommunicationtoolsandtheirdemandforfurtherenlargementofsuchtoolstendtosaturation.归纳结论：Inconclusion,whilemobilephonessubscriptions,ifusedcarelesslyorwithoutrestraint,couldprovetobeadouble-edgedsword,thefactremainsthatit考研英语强化阶段—写作isalreadyextremelyprevalentinbothdevelopinganddevelopedcountriesandeventoday,continueriseinpopularity.Giventhelevelsofintelligence,prudenceanddiscretionimbuedinpeople,Iamsurethatmostofthemwillbeabletosidestepthepotentialdrawbacksofmobilephones,whiletakingadvantageofallitsmerits.（241words）参考译文：根据上述柱状图所提供的信息，我们可以看出从2000年到2008年，发展中国家和发达国家之间在手机入网方面存在着惊人的对比。在此期间，发展中国家手机入网数从4亿急速增长到40亿，而发达国家的相关数据只是在10亿之下保持平稳。至少有两点主要原因造成了这种现象。一方面，随着在发展中国家发生的快速经济增长，这些国家的电信产业必然会适应全球化的需求。因此，使用手机缩短人们之间的距离并与全世界联系的人数以惊人的速度增加。另一方面，发达国家极端先进的文明在私人电信工具等诸多领域意味着更少的发展潜力，他们对进一步开发此类工具的需求趋于饱和。因此，如果不小心或没有节制，手机入网就是一把双刃剑。但事实上，手机入网在发展中国家和发达国家中均十分流行，这种趋势甚至今天还在继续扩大。假如人们多动脑、谨慎些、具有判断力，我确信大多数人都能克服手机的弊端，利用其优势。3、十大必背范文之三：经济问题：2011年真题Directions:Writeanessaybasedonthefollowingchart.Inyourwriting,youshould1)interpretthechartand2)giveyourcomments.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.WriteyouressayonANSWERSHEET2.(15points)2008、2009年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额示意图（从左至右：国产品牌、日系品牌、美系品牌）考研英语强化阶段—写作图表描述：ThechartabovedemonstratesclearlythatsomechangeshavetakenplaceintermsofthecarmarketofChina.Baseduponthedataofthechart,onecanseethatthepercentageofdomesticcarshasbeenonarise,whilethesalespercentageofcarsmadeinJapanhaswitnessedbeenonadecline.Intheyearof2008,thepercentageofcarsmadeinChinawasnearly25%,whilewithinnomorethanayear,itwentuptonearly33%.ThepercentageofcarsmadeinJapanwas35%,whileitwentdownto25%in2009.原因列举：It’snodifficultyforustocomeupwithsomepossiblefactorstoaccountforthistrend.Atthetopofthelist,withtherapiddevelopmentofoureconomyandsociety,moreandmorepeopleprefercivilproductstoforeignones.It’sreportedthat,approximate