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Somepeoplethinkthatuniversitiesshouldprovideknowledgeandskillsrelatedtofuturecareer.Othersthinkthetruefunctionoftheuniversityistogiveaccesstoknowledgeforitsownsake.Whatisyouropinion?Whenitcomestoeducation,noonecanfailtoadmititsimportance.Inthepresentage,thepurposesofuniversitiesariseahugedebateaswell.（第一段可以多说两句，既介绍背景又减少后面字数压力）Forsomepeople,theyarguethatthemostessentialtaskofuniversityisteachingcollegestudentsprofessionalknowledgeandskills.Intheiropinion,withouttheknowledgerelatedtofuturecareer,thestudentscannotgettheirdecentjobs,whichistheirultimategoal.Inviewofthefactthatmostpeoplepursueachancetotakeupsomekindofsatisfactoryoccupation,thereisnodoubtthattheknowledgewhichcanhelpuscompleteourworkfastandperfectlyisofsignificance.However,theothersbelievethatthewayofhavingaccesstoknowledgeplaysavitalroleinstudents’lives.Tworeasonsareasfollows.Firstofall,ifwe(一般不用第二人称）mastertheapproachesoflearning,wecangainknowledgeeasily.Especially,withthedevelopmentoftechnology,thespeedofknowledgeupdatingisincreasinglyfast.Therefore,whatweshouldpayattentiontoisthemethodofobtainingknowledge,ratherthantheknowledgeitself.Whatismore,itisgenerallyacknowledgedthatdesiretolearnisunlimited.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatobtainingtheapproachescanhelpyoutolearnanyaspectsyouinterestedin,ratherthantheonlyprofessionalskills.Inaword,themethodismorefundamentalthanknowledge.Fromthepointofmyview,Iagreetothesecondstandpoint.Ifonlyyourealizehowtoobtainknowledge,youareabletogetitifyouwant.Tosumup,comparedwiththeknowledgeandskills,Iprefertolearnthewayofobtainingthose.文章结构没什么问题，但采用这种先分析双方观点最后得出自己结论的结构，最后一段要稍微再说一下为什么自己倾向于选择的观点。句子结构OK，词汇还有待加强。