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短文改错专练（一）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。AMarch29th,DearDiary,I’mwritingthisatmyroom.It’salmostmidnightandIhavetogettingupearlytomorrow,butIcan’tsleep.I’mthinkingaboutmyfuture!Everyday,myparentsasksme,“Whatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrow?”Theproblemis:Idon’tknow!Mymomalwayssays,“Beadoctor!”Andshedoesn’tunderstand—tobeadoctor,youhavetostudyforalong,longtimeandthat’snotherideaoffun.AlsoI’mreallybadatbiologyattheschool.Mydadsays,“Beapilot!”Ishecrazy?HeknewIhateflying!NowI’mgettingtiring,soI’mgoingtobed.Icanthinkaboutmyfutureinbed.IgetmybestideaswhenI’mlaindown.BIhaveknownmyfriendRebeccaforalongtime.Wefirstlymetatafriend’sbirthdaypartyfiveyearsbefore.Wefoundoutthatwebothlikedsinginganddancing,soIinvitedRebeccaovertomyplace.Welistenedtothemusictogetherandsoonbecamebestfriends.Threeyearsago,Rebecca’sparentsinvitedmegoonholidaywiththem.Itisgreat.Wespentthreewonderfulweeksinalittlecottage.RebeccaandIlovedwalkingalongthebeautifullybeach.Wetookalotofphotosandhadalotoffuns.Lastyear,Rebecca’sfatherchangedherjob,andtheymovedtoothertown.Sincethenwehaven’tseeneachotherverymuch,butwe’vetalkedinthephoneandwe’vewrittenemailstoeachother.CDearJoe,Howareyou?Thankstoyourpost—goodtoknowwhenyou’reOK.I’vegotnewstoo.I’mgoingonholidaynextweekswithmybrotherandAnna,afriendfromschool.We’regoingtostayonafarmwithfourdays!We’regoingtolookaftertheanimalsanddoingsomehorse-riding.I’msureI’llloveit.YouknowhowcrazyIamabouttheanimals!Iwanttolearnallaboutthecowsorthehorses.IhopeIwillhavesometimestogowalkinginthehills,too.Well,rightnowI’mgoingtofinishhomework—lotstodobeforetheholiday!I’llwritetoyouwhenIgetbacktotellingyouaboutmyholiday.Yours,NadiaDPeoplehadalwaysbeeninterestedinbees.Thisinterestmayhavebegunwiththehoneywhatbeesmake.Inthefact,ithasbeenfoundthatpeoplehavebeeneatinghoneyforthousandofyears.Inthemorerecentlypast,peoplewereinterestedinthewaybeesmadehoney.Theyadmiredthewaybeesseemedtoworkingsohard.Somelanguagesevendevelopedexpressionsaboutpeopleworkinglikebees.InEnglish,forexample,wetalkwitha“busybee”.Nowscientistshasanewreasontobeinterestedinbees.Theyhavediscoveredthatbeesabletocommunicatewitheachother.Researchhasrevealedsomesurprisedfactsaboutthis,buttherearestillmanymysteries.EYesterdayafternoon,ItooktheNo.6bustogohome.Itwascrowdedonthebus,andIhadlistenedtomusicbymyearphones.SuddenlyIsawthenameofthebusstopthatIshouldgetoff,soIgotoffthebusinhurry.WhenIarrivedhome,IrealizedthatIhadleftmybagonthebus.MyIDcardandtenbookswereinthebag.Iwasworriedandeagertofindingit,soIwenttothebuscompaniesforhelp.Fortunate,attheLostandFound,Iseemybag.Iwantedtothankthepersonwhohadfoundmybag,andthestafftheresaidthepersonhadn’tlefthisname.Howagoodman!FIreadaninterestedpieceofnewsonanewspapertoday.AccordingtoProfessorRichardWiseman,onlylessthanaquarteroftheBritishachievedtheirNewYeargoalsbecausetheydoitinthewrongway.Hestudied700volunteerswhomadeawiderangesofNewYeargoals,includingquittingsmoking,losingtheweight,orgainingaqualification.Just22percentoftheparticipantsmanagedtomeetingtheirgoalsordescribedtheirprogresslike“verysuccessful.”Thereasonsomuchfailedwasthattheytookthewrongapproachandledbyself-helpbooksinthewrongway.Theytendedtospendalotoftimeonthinkingaboutthe“badthings”whatwouldhappeniftheydidnotachievetheirgoalsinsteadoftakingaction.GLastweekends,Iwentshoppingbymyself.ItwasasunnydayandIfeelveryhappy.WhenIhadboughtanythingIneeded,Iwenttothebusstoptotakeabus.Unfortunately,thereweretoomuchpeopleatthebusstop.Thenitwasmyturntogeton,therewasnoroom.Ihadtowaitthenextbus.Suddenly,itstartedtorain.Ihadnochoicebuttocallataxi.Halfwaythroughthejourney,thetaxiwasbrokedown.IwasfilledwithangrywhenIsawanemptierbusgoby.Finally,Idecidedtowalkhomeinarain.Whatanunluckyday!HMynameisLiHuaandIwantedtobeclassmonitor.Iamresponsible,sociable,oreasy-going.Ienjoyservingothers.Additionally,Ihavevaryinterests.Ilovesingingandplayingthedrumsaswellsoccer.Iamalsoagoodlistenerandbealwaysopentodifferentopinions.IamconfidentthatIcandothejobgood.Beingastudentmyself,firstly,Iwillcreateanacademicatmospheresothateveryoneinourclassescanimprovetheirstudies.Forthosestudentswhoisfallingbehind,Iwillfindwaystohelpthemtocatchup.Secondly,Iwillserveasabridgeamongteachersandstudents.Finally,Iwillarrangepartiessowecanrelax.IbelieveIamtherightpersontothispost.答案A1....atmyroom.at→in2....havetogetting...getting→get3....myparentsasks...asks→ask4....whenyougrow?”grow后加up5.Andshedoesn’t...And→But6....notherideaof...her→my7....attheschool.去掉the8.HeknewIhate...knew→knows9....I’mgettingtiring...tiring→tired10....I’mlaindown.lain→lyingB1.Wefirstlymet...firstly→first2....fiveyearsbefore.before→ago3....tothemusic...去掉the4....goonholiday...go前加to5.Itisgreat.is→was6....beautifullybeach.beautifully→beautiful7....alotoffuns.funs→fun8....changedherjob...her→his9....toothertown.other→another10....inthephone...in→on/overC1.Thankstoyour...to→for2....toknowwhen...when→that或去掉wh