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商英教研室评分标准&写作问题自我剖析&互评题型分析&应对模板一、评分标准&写作问题剖析What’swrongwithyourcomposition?知己knowaboutyourselfFinishthecompositioninthe2016TEM4.Andreflectontheproblemsaboutyourcomposition.内容结构语言得体词汇句子切题；论证充分。有条理；层次清晰。无拼写问题；恰当、准确、地道。无语法错误；无标点问题；句式多样。语气恰当1.内容&结构：面对新题型————材料作文，无所适从，容易跑题，不知道怎么展开？是否条理、层次清晰？2.词汇：拼写错误？用词简单，不地道，显得low?Thispolicycanmakethefarmer’sfinancialburdenlessandless.Thispolicycanrelievethefarmer’sfinancialburden.Tobecontinued…3.句子：语法错误：主谓一致，虚拟语气…句式单一不高级无新意（是否是模板的锅？）模板可以借鉴，但要用有新意的！Switchyourcompositionwithyourpartner,andexchangeconstructiveremarksoneachother’scomposition.What’swrongwithyourcomposition?二、题型分析&应对分值：20大于200词45分钟题型：材料作文、命题作文、图表图画作文2016&2017：材料作文Readcarefullythefollowingexcerpt(about…)andthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200words,inwhichyoushould:Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthenCommentonwhether…Youshould(can)supportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.材料作文三段式开头：缩写/总结材料→提出个人观点主体：论证自己的观点结尾：总结&重申自己观点命题作文三段式开头：引出主题→提出个人观点主体：论证自己的观点结尾：总结&重申自己观点图表图画作文三段式开头：描述图表图画内容→提出个人观点主体：论证自己的观点结尾：总结&重申自己观点材料作文开头：缩写/总结材料→提出个人观点命题作文：引出主题→提出个人观点图表图画作文：描述图表图画内容→提出个人观点材料作文的开头如何缩写/总结材料1.抓取关键信息&关键句2.如何缩写提取出来的关键句：同义单词/短语替换;去掉修饰成分；用几个抽象概括词取代一堆具体词（比如头衔etc）；如果是引言，用概括后的间接引语代替直接引语缩写/总结材料的注意事项：1.不要篇幅太长，2.切不可一字不差地照抄原文。Exercise:Thebeginningpartofthe2017TEM4WritingWiththewideuseofintelligentmachines,peoplebegantoworryabouttheirthreattohumanintelligence.Theyholdtheideathateveniftheartificialintelligenceisofgreathelptohumanjobsandfacilitateshumanlife,thedevelopmentoftheartificialintelligencewillunavoidablydeprivehumanofmentaleffortandcausetheregressofbrain.Frommyperspective,…命题作文的开头引出话题的方法1.背景介绍——改写题干中背景/摆出两种对立的观点/简单分析现象原因或结果Nowadays,therefollowsacrazefor…Withthedevelopmentof…,…isbecomingamoreandmoreseriousproblem.Theearly1990ssawanunprecedentedtideof…Inthepastthreedecades,Chinahaswitnesseddramaticimprovementin…Recently,thephenomenonthat…hascausedwideattention/becomeasubjectofwidespreadcontroversy.Otherpeopleareinclinedtothinkthat…Opposedtothisopinion,thereisanotherviewthat…2.提问题3.引用图表图画作文的开头描述图表图画的方法Asisindictedinthechartabove,….Ascanbeseeninthepicture,…Thispictureintendsto…三、模板题型材料作文命题作文图画图表作文共性：除了开头略有不同，开头：…+提出自己观点主体：论证自己观点结尾：总结、重申自己观点1.开头：提出自己观点的模板Weighingupthesetwoarguments,Iprefertheformer/latterone.Inmyview/opinion,…Asforme,I’minfavorof…AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithink..Frommypointofview,…Personally,..2.主体：论证自己观点的模板1）引出理由Therearemanyreasonsexplaining/accountingfor/contributingtomyview.Therearemanyreasonswhichmayaccountfor..Therearemanyfactorsdeciding/influencing..Thefollowingreasonscanaccountfor/support/prove….Thereasonsfor..mainlylieinthefollowing..aspects.Thisargumentcanbeprovedbythefollowingfacts.2)举例论证Therearenumerousexamplessupportingthisargument.Therearemanyexampleswhichcansupportthisargument.Let’stake…asan/anotherexample.Acaseinpointis…Agoodexampletoillustrateis…Forinstance，…3.结尾：总结、重申自己观点1)总结：Consideringtheabove-mentioned,Ithink..Alltheabove-mentionedtellsusthat..Therefore,…Judgingfromtheevidenceoffered,wemightsafelydrawtheconclusionthat..Toconclude/Inaword/Insum/Ingeneral..Therefore,itissafetodrawtheconclusionthat…2)强调重申(强调句/倒装句/虚拟语气)Onlyinthiswaycanpeople…Itishightimethatwe…Itis…that…常见作文内容类型立场选择型既定观点型建议方法型利弊分析型题型（3）材料作文命题作文图画图表作文∽Itishightimeforustotakesomeeffectivemeasuresto..Itishightimethatwetooksomeeffectivemeasuresto..Itisnecessary/imperativetotakesomemeasuresto…Thefollowingmeasurescanbetakento…Effectivemeasures…..shouldbetakento….benefitfrom..bebeneficial/favorableto…hasmanyadvantages/disadvantages..havebroughtusgreatconvenience/considerateeffect/influence..exertundesirableeffect/influence..doesmoreharmthangood.beharmfulto..