书面表达--申请信2018.11.08WYQDearMr.Smith,I’vereadyouradvertisementforanassistantteacher.IamsointerestedinthispositionthatIamwritingtoapplyforthejob.NowIwouldliketointroducemyselftoyou.Iamoutgoing,energetic,andresponsible;Besides,IloveworkingwithchildrenandIamalwaysangoodhelpertomyteachers.Andmostimportantly,IcanspeakfluentEnglish,whichenablesmetocommunicatefreelyandeffectivelywithstudents.SoIwouldbepleasedtobeanassistantteacher.ThankyouforconsideringmyapplicationandIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.文章结构?1.书信类型?2.三个层次3.人称、时态?4.过渡词?开头?中间?结尾?Groupdiscussion(2mins)文章结构:1-2句表达写信目的3-6个介绍个人优势1-2句表达请求和盼复第一人称结构层次?人称、时态?过渡词?书信类型?这是一封________besides,so,mostimportantly一般现在时、一般将来时开头:中间:结尾:申请信applytobeapplyforsthapplicationposition/postadvertiseforgraduatefrom…in…agraduateofTsinghuaUniversityworkasworkingexperienceinbesuitable/fit/qualifiedforhavesomerelatedknowledgeabout申请成为申请申请职位从事毕业于…学校…专业登广告招聘一个清华大学毕业生在…方面的工作经验适合/胜任begood/skilledatmeetyourabilityrequirementshaveagoodcommandofcommunicatewithabilityofcommunicationbeingoodconditionwarm-heartedandpatientteamworkspiritmakeeveryefforttodosthsparenoefforttodosthhaveanadvantageoversbinsth擅长符合你的能力要求与…交流交流能力努力做某事热情和耐心的身体健康团队精神不遗余力做某事比某人有优势精通/掌握佳句:定从DearMr.Smith,I’vereadyouradvertisementforanassistantteacher.IamsointerestedinthispositionthatIamwritingtoapplyforthejob.NowIwouldliketointroducemyselftoyou.Iamoutgoing,energetic,andresponsible;Besides,IloveworkingwithchildrenandIamalwaysangoodhelpertomyteachers.Andmostimportantly,IcanspeakfluentEnglish,whichenablesmetocommunicatefreelyandeffectivelywithstudents.SoIwouldbepleasedtobeanassistantteacher.ThankyouforconsideringmyapplicationandIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.模板大声朗读佳句:so…thatYours,LiHua近几年高考真题回顾年份写作目的题材内容体裁类型2015约稿介绍稿件的要求书信2014询问情况询问广告情况书信2013告知情况把叔叔将去开会的事项告知朋友书信2012申请申请参加夏令营电子邮件DearMr.Smith,I’vereadyouradvertisementforanassistantteacher.IamsointerestedinthispositionthatIamwritingtoapplyforthejob.NowIwouldliketointroducemyselftoyou.Iamoutgoing,energetic,andresponsible;Besides,IloveworkingwithchildrenandIamalwaysangoodhelpertomyteachers.Andmostimportantly,IcanspeakfluentEnglish,whichenablesmetocommunicatefreelyandeffectivelywithstudents.SoIwouldbepleasedtobeanassistantteacher.ThankyouforconsideringmyapplicationandIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.申请信应该用到哪些词句?applyforintroducemyselftoamIloveIcanThankyouforlookingforwardtoIaminterestedHavingreadyouradvertisementforanassistantteacher,IamsointerestedinthispositionthatIamwritingtoapplyforthejob.1.Havingread/learnedfromthenewspaperthat2.Iamwritingtoapplyforthejob.3.Iwouldliketointroducemyself(Iamgoodat…/Ican…Ihaveagoodcommandof…Ilike/amfondof…)Iamwellacquaintedwithsth4.Thankyoufor…andIamlookingforwardto…5.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucould…背诵下列常用句型:(2mins)我从报纸上得知…我写这封信是为了申请这份工作。我想介绍我自己擅长我精通….我喜欢我在盼望着…如果…我很感激我非常熟悉…1.I’veread/learnedfromthenewspaperthat…2.Iamwritingtoapplyforthejob.3.Iwouldliketointroducemyself(Iamgoodat…/Ican…Ihaveagoodcommandof…Ilike/amfondof…)Iamwellacquaintedwithsth4.Thankyoufor…andIamlookingforwardto…5.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucould…背诵下列常用句型:(2mins)我从报纸上得知…我写这封信是为了申请这份工作。我想介绍我自己擅长我精通….我喜欢。我在盼望着…如果…我很感激。我非常熟悉…•假设你是李华,从网上得知一所美国中学正在招募中国中学生志愿者。本次招募旨在通过网络帮助美国学生体验春节。请用英语写一封电子邮件提出申请,内容包括:1.愿意参加2.自身优势3.计划与愿望•注意:1.词数:100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯请按刚才的思路审题(2mins)文章结构:愿意参加个人优势盼复第一人称结构层次?人称、时态?过渡词?写作目的?写一封______可能用到的连接词:Inthefirstplace…besides…moreimportantly…一般现在时、一般将来时开头表达:中间介绍:结尾表示:申请信DearSirorMadam,I’mLiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudentfromChina.HavinglearnedthatyourschoolisrecruitingvolunteerstohelpyourstudentsexperiencetheSpringFestival.I’mwritingtoseeifIwillbeluckyenoughtobeinvolvedintheactivity.IthinkI’mfitforthejob.Inthefirstplace,IhavelearnedEnglishfortenyears,whichenablesmetospeakgoodEnglish.Besides,beinggoodatusingcomputersmakesitpossibleformetosharepicturesandvideosoftheSpringFestivalwithyourstudents.Moreimportantly,wellacquaintedwiththecustomsandtraditionsoftheSpringFestival,IammorethanhappytoansweryourquestionsabouttheSpringFestival.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.范文互评作文(5mins)任务:1.看看你觉得疑难的地方,别人怎么表达2.找出文章的优、缺点3.打分第一档:21-25分(很好)内容要点齐全,少错误第二档:16-20分(好)因使用复杂句有错误第三档:11-15分(适当)有错误,但不影响理解第四档:6-10分(较差)词汇、句子较多错误第五档:1-5分(差)明显漏掉主要内容评判标准(80-120字)1.卷面是否整洁?2.内容是否完整?3.句子是否基本通顺?4.是否有好词好句第一档:21-25分(很好)内容要点齐全,少错误第二档:16-20分(好)因使用复杂句有错误第三档:11-15分(适当)有错误,但不影响理解第四档:6-10分(较差)词汇、句子较多错误第五档:1-5分(差)明显漏掉主要内容评判标准(80-120字)1.卷面是否整洁?2.内容是否完整?3.句子是否基本通顺?4.是否有好词好句?学生习作点评•假设你是新华中学的学生李华,得知某英文报暑假招聘兼职记者,你有意应聘,请按下列要点给报社写一封申请信。•表示感兴趣•说明优势:知识能力、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历•希望得到回复•注意:1.词数:100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯写作:15mins)时间Anyquestions?反思:本节课你学会了什么?Homework:1.熟读范文2.积累常用短语