英文科技论文写作PPT课件(英文)

1Part1AboutSubmissiontoMiningScienceAndTechnologyFormerlyJournalofChinaUniversityofMining&Technology21.History1)Ithasbegunpublicationsince1990(semi-annualpublication)2)IthasbecomeaquarterlyjournalandindexedbyEIcompendexsince20053)IthasbecomethecooperatedwithElseviersince2007(attractingforeignauthors)4)Ithasbeenrenamedas“MiningScienceandTechnology”andbecomebimonthlysince2009(resultinginagreatincreaseindownload)32.Anoften-askedquestionIsthejournalof“miningscienceandtechnology”acorejournal?ForEnglishjournalinChina,thereisnotheso-called“corejournal”Ei“pageone”and“compendex”No“pageone”but“compendex”since200943.Howcanmyarticlebeaccepted?1.Academiclevel(themostimportant)2.FluentEnglish3.CiteasmanyaspossiblearticlespublishedinMiningScienceandTechnologyasreferences4.Styleandformat54.Mattersneedingattention1.Firstsubmission:EitherChinesealoneorEnglishaloneisOK,andsoarebothlanguagesatthesametime(you’dbetterusetelephone)2.Inputyourinformationincludingcell-phonenumberandemailaddress,etc,attheendofyourarticle,asdetailaspossible.3.youcaninquiretheeditorialofficeafteracertainperiodofsubmission6Part2英文科技论文写作的语言问题MAKING“GOOD”BETTER(使你的文章好上加好)ByLiChengjunTheeditorofMiningScienceandTechnology0516-83885569;[e-mail]71.国际主流期刊最新语言特点Ⅰ.Whywediscussthistopic?Ⅱ.PersonalandVoiceⅢ.It-sentenceⅣ.Tense8Ⅰ.Whywediscussthistopic?Tobeinlinewithinternationalleadingjournalinlanguageexpression9Ⅱ.PersonalandVoiceUpuntilnow,mostofusareaccustomedtousingpassivevoiceandunwillingtouse“we”or“I”assubjectbecause…10UseWe-sentenceandactivevoiceWe-sentenceisamore-modernstyle,readsmoreinteresting,andcommunicateswiththereadermoredirectly.Wereport…Wespeculate…Wegenerated…Wemeasured…11We-sentencesappearinmanyleadingjournalsInthisreport,wedefineamechanismfor…anddiscoverdistinctrolesfor…Weuse…assaysto…Wedemonstratethat…Weprovideevidencethat…(Science)Themajorityofknown…Toidentifytheresponsiblegenes,wemappedvirulenceinF1progenyderivedfromcrossesbetweentypeIIandtypeIIIstrains,whichweintroducedinto…(Science)12Cont.HereIshowthatapplicationofwaveletanalysistoexperimentallymanipulatedplanktoncommunitiesrevealsstrongsynchronyafterdisturbance.(Nature454,331-33417July2008)Here,weaddressplasticityandinterconnectionofdistinctsignaltransductionpathwayswithinthisnetwork.(Cell,Volume133,Issue3,2May2008,Pages452-461)13Problem:VeryfewofususeWE1)Situationaboutanarticlefromacertainjournal2)SituationaboutthearticlesfromThe6thIntern.Conf.Mining14PassivevoiceContemporarywritinginsciencehasbecomemoreandmoredirectand,asithas,theuseofpassivevoicehasbeenfastdisappearing.(PeteyYoung,WritingandPresentinginEnglish.Elsevier,2006,34)15Problem:PassivevoiceisoverusedbyChineseauthorsPassivevoiceiscommonlyfoundinresearchpaperswrittenbyChineseauthorsoreditedbyeditorsofChinesejournalsTheyareaccustomedtousepassivevoice16AnexampleInourstudy,byusingapplieddifferentialgeometricaltheoryandANSYSsoftware,the6×7IWSwireropegeometricalmodelbuildingandfiniteelementmodelbuildingwerecarriedout,thecomparisonofthewireropemodelofrightsame-direction-laywiththatofrightsz-laywasperformed,andthefiniteelementcalculationforboundaryconditionsbetweenthetwokindsofwireropeswasmade.17Usingpassivevoicewhenitisnecessary随着浅部煤层不断枯竭,许多煤矿不得不开采深部煤层Withtheshallowcoalresourcesbecomingincreasinglyexhausted,manycoalminesmustminedeepcoalseams.18Cont.Edited:Withtheshallowlyburiedcoalresourcesbecomingincreasinglyexhausted,thedeeplyburiedcoalseamshavetobeexploitedinmoreandmorecoalmines19Ⅲ.It-sentence“It-sentences”areoftenusedinsciencewriting,particularlybyChineseauthors.However,mostofthe“it-sentences”areunnecessary.20Useit-sentenceaslessaspossible很明显,温度影响了反应过程Ok:Itisclearthattemperatureaffectsthereaction.Better:Temperatureclearlyaffectsthereaction.21MoreexamplesBad:Itcanbeconcluded/Itisfoundthat…Good:Theresultshows/indicatesthat…22Cont.Indirectlanguage:ItwillbetheendoftheyearbeforewecanexpectresultstobereadyDirect,clearlanguage:Weexpectresultsbytheendoftheyear.23Cont.Indirectlanguage:Itwasdiscoveredinourlaboratoriesthatsulfurdichloridereactswith…Direct,clearlanguage:Wediscoveredsulfurdichloridereactswith…24Cont.Indirectlanguage:Itisvitaltorecognizetheimportanceofthevarianceamonglengthsofmultiplebonds.Direct,clearlanguage:Recognizingvarianceinthelengthofmultiplebondsisvital.25Cont.Indirectlanguage:Itisveryimportanttorealizethattheaforementionedresultsare…Direct,clearlanguage:Theresultsareimportantbecause…26Cont.Indirectlanguage:Ifmygrouphadbeenableto,wewouldhavepreparedthecompoundbut…Direct,clearlanguage:Wehavenotpreparedthecompoundbecause…27Cont.Indirectlanguage:TherehavebeenrecentdevelopmentsinNMRwhichallow…Direct,clearlanguage:RecentdevelopmentsinNMRallow…28Cont.Indirectlanguage:Therearethreemolecularorbits,namely,1),2),and3)…Direct,clearlanguage:Thethreemolecularorbitsare1),2),and3)…29Use“it-sentence”toemphasizesth正是由于这种双耳状高应力的连续及反复作用使得巷道逐渐被破坏Itisthiscontinuousandrepeatedactionofthedouble-ear-shapedhighstressthatgraduallydestroystheroadway.30Ⅳ.TenseUsingpastsim