Should-the-University-Campus-Be-Open-to-Tourists

ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?Nowadays,manyfamousuniversitycampuseshavebecomeoneofthepopulartouristattractions.IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothateveryyearthousandsandthousandsofmiddleschoolstudentsvisitTsingHuaUniversityandPekingUniversityandotherfamousuniversitiesinChina.Intheplacefarawayfromthecapitalcity,thelocalstudentsalsovisittheuniversitiesfamousintheirownprovince.Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingtoopentheuniversitycampusfortourists?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingforthestudentstovisitthefamousuniversitycampusinthatitcanenablethemiddlestudentstogetmoreinformationabouttheuniversityandtheycanhaveenoughtimeandopportunitytopreparethemselveswiththechancetogetintotheuniversity.Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,thepublictourismwillhavenegativeeffectontheuniversitiesbecauseitwillnotonlydoharmtotheenvironmentbutalsototheintellectualatmosphere.Inmyopinion,thetourismtotheuniversitiesisnotagoodthing.Thecampusismainlyaplaceforstudy.Withtheincreasingtourismonthecampus,itwillruinthespiritualatmosphereinthislearningfield.首先，提纯范文“谋篇布局”及结构模板。第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays,……havebecomeoneofthepopular…….IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothat…….第二段：正反列举人们的看法。Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingto……?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingfor……inthat…….Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,……willhavenegativeeffecton……becauseitwillnotonlydoharmto……butalsoto…….第三段：摆明自己观点。Inmyopinion,……isnotagoodthing.……Withtheincreasing……,itwillruin…….其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。统一性（unity）：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题isitagoodorbadthing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。连贯性（coherence）：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays,ononehand,ontheotherhand,inone’sopinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。完整性（completeness）：以设问句“Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingtoopentheuniversitycampusfortourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“Ononehand…….Ontheotherhand,…….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。1.Ithasbeenshownthat……类似句型：Itisknowntousthat……Itissaidthat……Itisreportedthat……Itiscontroversialthat……2.“……TsingHuaUniversityandPekingUniversityandotherfamousuniversities……。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。3.enablev.使…能够Igavehimfulldirectionstoenablehimtofindthehouse.4.inthat=because表“因为”的连词还有since,for,as，如：Theboywasabsentbecausehewasill.=Theboywasabsentsincehewasill.此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：Sincetheboywasill,hewasabsent.句式多样化。最后，提纯范文“措辞”。1.attractionn.具有吸引力的事情。2.thousandsandthousands成千上万的形容“多”的表达方法：millionsandmillionsamultitudeofagreatdealofalargeamountofplentyofmanya3.“somepeoplearguedthat……”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。Iarguethat……Imaintainthat……Iclaimthat……Iinsistthat……=Ithinkthat……Iholdthat……Iassertthat……Iassumethat……4.negativeadj.否定的，相反的holdnegativeview=holdoppositeopinions5.phenomenonn.现象socialphenomenon社会现象naturalphenomenon自然现象6.intellectualadj.聪明的=intelligent,bright,clever（选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectualintelligentbrightclever）在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会3.我的看法Nowadays,theSpringFestivalEveninghasbecomeoneofthepopulartopicandattractionsduringeverytraditionalNewYear’sEve.IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothateveryyearthousandsandthousandsofChinesepeopleappeartobeaccustomedtoenjoyingthesightsandsoundsofabrilliantfeast,whilegatheringwiththeirbelovedfamily.However,anincreasingnumberofpeoplehavevoiceddifferentopinionstowardsit.Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingtocanceltheSpringFestivalEvening?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingtoamusetheaudienceinthatitiscomposedbyanumerousadequateprograms,suchastheemotionalsong,thegracefuldance,thefunnyshortsketch,theamusingcomicdialogue,thedelightfulmagic,andthemarvelousacrobaticsandsoon.Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,theSpringFestivalEveningwillhavenegativeeffectonthefamilyharmonybecauseitwillnotonlydoharmtohavingthetalksbetweenfamilymembersontheSpringFestivalEvebutalsotoenjoyingthegourmetmealinafancyrestaurant.Inmyopinion,theSpringFestivalEveningisagoodthing.Itmaynotremainamustforallpeople,butitcanbringusastrongsenseoffestivityandserveasanalternativeamongthevarietyofholidayactivities.WiththeincreasingaudienceoftheSpringFestivalEvening,itwillruinadistinctivecultureduringtheSpringFestivalvacation.寄语：分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。Toseeaworldinagrainofsand,Andaheaveninawildflower,Holdinfinityinthepalmofyourhand,Andeternityinanhour.一沙一世界，一花一天堂，手中即无限，永恒亦短暂。