高考英语专题书面表达4

书面表达突破(四)——调查报告原题再现最近我校对高一学生入学一个多月来的学习生活适应情况做了一个调查,情况如下。请你用英语表达下表的调查内容,并提出个人观点。60%左右的学生认为40%左右的学生认为我的观点1.高中学习很有压力；2.科目难度大,课后作业多；3.没有时间参加锻炼等活动。1.适应并喜欢高中生活；2.课程更有趣,活动更丰富,受益匪浅。……要求：1.词数100左右；2.文章开头已给出,但不计入总词数。参考词汇：course课程；benefit对……有益；stressful有压力的写作模板学生习作Recently,asurveyhasbeencarriedoutinourschoolwhetherthefreshmenhasadaptedtothelifeinseniorhighschool.Ascanbeseenfromtheresultofthesurvey,opinionsaredivided.About持有第一种观点的人数.Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,第一种原因.Besides,第二种原因．Onthecontrary,otherssay他们的观点.Theysaythat持有这种观点的原因．AsfarasI’mconcerned,weshould自己的想法.Onlyinthisway美好前景预测．Recently,asurveyhasbeencarriedoutinourschoolwhetherthefreshmenhasadaptedtothelifeinseniorhighschool.Ascanbeseenfromtheresultofthesurvey,opinionsaredivided.About60%ofthestudentsholdtheopinionthatlifeinseniorhighschoolisfarfromrelaxing.Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,thesubjectstheyarelearningnowareobviouslymoredifficult.Besides,theyhavetodoendlesshomeworkafterclass,whichleavesthemlittletimeforexerciseandotheractivities.Onthecontrary,otherssaytheyhaveadaptedtothenewlifeandhavebeguntoenjoyit.Theysaythattheyfindthecoursesaremoreinterestingandtheactivitiesaremorecolorful,whichsurelybenefitthemalot.AsfarasI’mconcerned,weshouldbalanceourstudyandotheractivitiesanddoeverythingefficiently.Onlyinthiswaycanwelearnmoreandenjoyourlifebetter.名师点评本文同样以三段论的形式进行写作的,文中用了简单句、并列句、同位语从句、定语从句、倒装句,句式丰富多样,结构复杂,恰当运用了较多高级句式,足显作者写作功底深厚；段与段之间巧妙运用了衔接语onthecontrary,asfarasI’mconcerned使过渡自然,整篇文章浑然一体；另外,文章中还运用了一些较高级词汇,如farfromrelaxing,balance等。所以该篇文章应属于一篇档次较高的优秀作文。仿写训练今年寒假期间你就返乡农民工问题进行了一次社会调查。调查中发现因受国际金融危机的影响,农民工原来打工的工厂倒闭,致使25%的农民工失业。针对农民工的就业问题,政府采取了一系列的措施,如举办各种劳动力招聘会,鼓励返乡农民工自己创业,为年轻农民工提供免费技能培训等。请根据你的调查写一份调查报告,并谈谈你的看法。注意：1.词数100左右；2.文章的开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。参考词汇：economicslowdown经济危机；jobfair招聘会Duringthewintervacation,Iconductedasurveyaboutthereturnedoff­farmworkers.75%ofthesurveyedoff­farmworkerssaidtheywouldreturntotheoriginalworkasscheduled,but___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Duringthewintervacation,Iconductedasurveyaboutthereturnedoff­farmworkers.75%ofthesurveyedoff­farmworkerssaidtheywouldreturntotheoriginalworkasscheduled,but25%ofthemlosttheirjobsbecausetheirfactorieshadbeencloseddownowingtotheglobaleconomicslowdown.Buttheywerenotalonestrugglingtosurvivetheeconomiccrisis.Duringmyinvestigation,Ifoundthatthelocalgovernmenthaddonewhattheycouldtohelptheoff­farmworkerstobeemployed.Allkindsofjobfairswereheldtohelpthemtofindjobsinthehometown.Somefarmerswereencouragedtoengageintheagriculturaldevelopment.Somewerehelpedtosetuptheirownbusinesswiththeloanprovidedbythestate.Youngpeoplewereofferedachancetobetrainedfreeandlearnapracticalskill.Ithinkthestatehasattachedgreatimportancetothelifeofthefarmers,butwestillfacealotofchallengesandmuchremainstobedone.However,withthegovernment’shelpandoff­farmworkers’hardworkingIbelievetheycansurvivetheglobaleconomicslowdownandliveabetterlife.补偿练习1——阅读理解Workersmayfeelcomfortablehandinginasicknoteforfluorphysicalillness,butnearlyhalfofworkersreportednotbeinghappytodiscloseamentalhealthconditionatwork,especiallyamongmanual(体力的)andskilledprofessions.Thesurveyof1,000workersbynationalcharitytheShawTrustfoundthat18.3%wouldnotrevealaconditioneventotheirHRdepartmentandonly17.9%woulddisclosedetailsofanillnesstoacolleague.Oftherespondents34.5%saidthereasontheywouldnotdiscloseamentalhealthconditionwasthattheyfeltworriedorashamedtheywouldbetreateddifferently.Thisfigureroseto43.3%among16to24­year­olds.Besides,oneintenworkersthoughtthatdisclosingaconditionwouldreducetheirchancesofpromotion.TimCooper,managingdirectoroftheShawTrust,said,“TheOfficeofNationalStatisticsestimatesthatoneinsixpeoplemaysufferfromamentalillhealthconditionatonetime.Despitethis,ourresearchshowspeoplearestillunwillingtodisclosesuchacondition,particularlyinthecurrenteconomicclimateinwhichworkersareconcernedaboutshowinganysignofweakness.Weknow,however,fromourworkpeoplewithmentalhealthconditionsareperfectlycapableofmanagingajobandtheirconditionswiththerightsupportfromtheiremployersandthereforefeelitisimportantthatsuchmisunderstandingislaidtorest.”Tosolvetheproblem,businessesneedtocreateanenvironmentinwhichpeoplenotonlyfeelconfidentenoughtodiscussamentalhealthconditionwithalinemanagerormembersoftheHRteambutcanalsoreceivethesupporttheyneedtocontinuemakingavaluablecontribution.Additionally,tohelpbusinessesachievethis,theShawTrusthascreatedawebsiteofferingadviceandinformation.1．What’sthemaintopicdiscussedinthepassage?A．Workerstendtokeepsilentonmentalhealthconditions.B．Alargenumberofpeoplesufferfrommentalhealthproblems.C．Workerspaymoreattentiontophysicalhealththanmentalhealth.D．Workersdisclosetheirmentalhealthconditionsindifferentways.答案A解析综合概括题。这篇文章讨论的问题是员工们对自己的精神健康状况保持沉默。2．Workersaren’twillingtodisclosetheirmentalhealthconditionsmainlybecause________.A．theythinkit’stheirentireprivacyB．theywillbedismissedifdoingsoC．theyareafraiditwillinfluencetheirworkD．theywillhavenoopportunitytogetp