第1页共56页实用英语写作指导第1单元1.1段落段落是构成文章的一组句子。段落必须表达完整的意思:或描写事物(describesomething),或争论某事(argueaboutsomething),或对某事提出疑问(questionsomething),或要求什么(demandsomething),或给事物下定义(definesomething),或驳斥某观点(rejectsomething)。1.2典型段落的构成一个典型的段落通常由三部分组成:(1)主题句(thetopicsentence);(2)说明或支持主题的推展句(supportingsentences);(3)结论句(theconcludingsentence)(有些段落没有该部分)。示范段落1-1Weallknowthatcigarettesmokingisadangeroushabitbecauseitcauseshealthproblems.Doctorssayitcanbeadirectcauseofcancerofthelungsandthroatandcanalsocontributetocancerofotherorgans.Inaddition,itcanbringaboutotherhealthproblemssuchasheartandlungdiseases.Itisclearlyidentifiedasoneofthechiefcausesofdeathinoursociety.1.3示范段落分析这是一个典型的段落,可概括提纲如下:主题句:Weallknowthatcigarettesmokingisadangeroushabit,becauseitcauseshealthproblems.推展句:1.Doctorssayitcanbeadireccauseofcancerofthelungsandthroatandcanalsocontributetocancerofotherorgans.2.Itcanbringaboutotherhealthproblemssuchasheartandlungdiseases.结论句:Itisclearlyidentifiedasoneofthechiefcausesofdeathinoursociety.从以上提纲可见,主题句提出了一个问题:Whatkindofhealthproblemsdoescigarettesmokingcause?随后的两个推展句回答了这个问题,结论句总结了推展句并再一次强调主题句。Exercise1-1Directions:Readthefollowingparagraphsandfindoutthetopicsentence,thesupportingdetailsandtheconcludingsentence,ifthereisone.(1)Theneedforwildlifeprotectionisgreaternowthaneverbefore.Aboutathousandspeciesofanimalsareindangerofextinction,,andtherateatwhichtheyarebeingdestroyedhasincreased.Withmammals,forinstance,therateofextinctionisnowaboutonespecieseveryyear;fromA.D.1to1800,theratewasaboutonespecieseveryfiftyyears.Everywhere,menaretryingosolvetheproblemofpreservingwildlifewhilecaringatthesametimefortheworld’sgrowingpopulation.TopicSentence:____________________________________________第2页共56页______________________________________________________________Details:1.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________2._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ConcludingSentence:______________________________________________________________________________________________________(2)TheAmericansandtheBritishnotonlyspeakthesamelanguagebutalsosharealargenumberofsocialcustoms.Forexample,inbothAmericaandEngland,peopleshakehandswhentheymeeteachotherforthefirsttime.Also,mostEnglishmenwillopenadoorforawomanoroffertheirseattoawoman,andsowillmostAmericans.PromptnessisimportantbothinEnglandandinAmerica.Thatis,ifadinnerinvitationisfor7o’clock,thedinnerguesteitherarrivesclosetothattimeorcallsuptoexplainhisdelay.TopicSentence:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________Details:1.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________2._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ConcludingSentence:______________________________________________________________________________________________________(3)Birdsusemanydifferentmaterialstobuildnests.Somebirdsusebitsofgrass.Thetailor-birdofAfricaandIndiausesgrasstosewleavestogether.Otherbirdsfindtwigsandpebblesuseful.TopicSentence:___________________________________________________________________________________________________________Details:1.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ConcludingSentence:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________第二单元主题句简介2.1主题句作者的首要任务是让读者知道所写段落要谈的是什么,这就是每段的主题句的作用。因此主题句应该阐明段落的主要思想,所有支持主题句的细节和描述都与这一主要思想有关。第3页共56页2.2主题句的形式主题句通常有以下三种形式:1)肯定句(AffirmativeSentence)Example:Theneedforwildlifeprotectionisgreaternowthaneverbefore.2)反诘句(RhetoricalSentence)Example:Howdoyouthinkpeoplewillsolvetheproblemofwildlifeprotection?3)不完整句(Fragments)Example:Andtheworkingman?初学者最好使用肯定句作为主题句。2.3主题句的位置主题句出现的位置有以下四种情况:1)段首(Atthebeginning)主题句经常居于段首,以便读者浏览主题句就可掌握文章的概要。这个位置适用于写提供信息或解释观点的段落。2)段末(Attheend)用推理方法展开段落时,主题句往往位于句末。3)段中(Inthemiddle)有时为了使段落多样化,主题句也可以居于段中。4)隐含(Implied)有时候,尤其在写叙述性或描写性段落时,当所有的细节都围绕着一个显而易见的主题时可以不用主题句。Exercise2-1Directions:Readthefollowingparagraphsandidentifythetopicsentence.Ifitisimplied,summarizeityourself.(1)Butnomatterwhatitiscalled,allpolyesterhascertaingoodpoints.Itdoesnotwrinkleeasily.Itdriesquicklyafteritiswashed.Itholdsitsshape.Itisstrongandkeepsitscolorswell.TopicSentence:____________________________________________Position:________________(2)Blackisthecolourofmourning.Redsymbolizesdanger,violence,orbloodshed.Ifyouareafraid,youareyellow.NoneofthesesayingsistrueoutsidetheEnglishspeakingworld