第1页共22页英语各种题材体裁作文格式与范例高考英语书面表达练习——图表作文(格式与范例)高考看图作文的体裁:记叙文:要抓住记叙文的六要素:when,where,who,what,why,how.即五个“W”和一个“H”。要注意人物与空间的关系,画面与画面的关系,要点与发挥的关系。议论文:(见漫画作文)说明文:(另见图表式作文)常用句型:1.Oneday/theotherday/acoupleofdaysago/whilehewas…,he..2.Itwassnowing/rainingheavilyonMonday/Sundaymorning…when…3.Thepicturesetsmethinkingdeeply…4.Fromthepicture,wecansee….5.Itisreallyanunforgettableday…6.Asisshown/indicatedinthepicture,…7.Afterseeingthepicture,Iwasgreatlyshockedby…8.Thisisafunnyandinstructivepicture.Inthepicture,ayoungman…9.Wecanlearnfromthepicturethat…10.Thepictureshowsthat…11.Thissightremindsmeofsomethinginmydailylife….例题展示1:(2004年广东)假设你是下图的李华。请根据图画所提供的信息,写一篇英语作文,描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况,并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如:你向邻居提出要求,对方向你表示歉意等。)注意:1.词数:80—1202.可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程Onepossibleversion:LastnightIwaspreparingforthecomingexaminationwhenthenoisefrommyneighborinterruptedme.Thenoisewentonandon.ItwassoloudlythatIcouldhardlypayattentiontomystudyanylonger.SoIwenttomyneighbor’shouseandsaidtohim:“Excuseme,wouldyoupleaseturndowntheTV?I’mpreparingtomorrow’sexamination.”Havingheardthesewords,hisfacewentred.Andhesaid,“Ok,I’llturnitdown.LiHua,I’mverysorrytohavemadesomuchnoise.Justnow,thefootballwasverywonderful.Iwas第2页共22页tooexcitedtocontrolmyself.Iwon’tdothatagain.Goodluckinyourcomingexamination.”Afterthat,Igotdowntomystudy.议论文:漫画作文属于图画作文的一种。英语漫画作文,就是根据漫画所描述的内容,按照要求和提示写一篇英语短文。英语漫画作文常以讽刺画和幽默画为主,要求学生根据自己的认识水平,解读画面,展开想象,议论,揭示自己对生活的理解,使人受到教育。漫画作文多以叙述结合议论为主。探究异同:1.与一般图画作文的区别:图画作文只是对图画内容进行描写,形成一篇符合逻辑,行文连贯的文章。2.与图画开放作文的区别:开放式作文根据图画内容围绕主题,从不同的角度立意,有相当大的自由发挥空间,可以自圆其说。3.漫画作文:漫画作文要通过对画面的描述,揭示画面所蕴含的实质,并与现实生活联系起来,从而打到讽刺或教育的目的。漫画作文所揭示的实质只有一个,抛开这一主题就是离题,这才是漫画作文的关键所在。写作攻略:漫画作文写作主要通过三步完成:第一步:认真观察,正确叙述画面内容。画面的主体往往是人物。要仔细观察画面中人物的形体,相貌,表情,语言,动作等,推测人物的思想面貌,尤其注意人物在干什么;还要观察周围环境,弄清事件发生的时间,地点以及和事件有关的情况,然后把这些信息连贯性地表达出来,使静止的画面“活动化”。平面的事物“立体化”。通常以记叙为主,用一般现在时态或一般过去时态,第三人称。第二步:选点立意。通过收集画面所提供的内容,去粗取精,揣摩画意,揭示实质,得出结论。第三步:引发评论。与现实生活联系,由此及彼地加以联想与引申,在画面意义的基础上联想到另一层新的内容,发表自己的看法,可以提出一些建议和办法。第二和第三步没有明显界线。可以一气呵成,以议论为主。常用句型;1.开头:Thisisapictureabout…/Inthepicturewecansee…/Fromthepictureitcanbeseenthat…/Let’slookatthepicture…2.结尾段:Itisnotrightthat…/Iftheydolikethat…/Wecandrawaconclusionthat…/Thestorytellsusthat…/Itteachesusalesson…3.承接词汇及句型:inmyopinion/inourdailylife/nowadays/Astheproverbsays…/I’msure…/meanwhile/however/atthesametime/but/so/asaresult/Doyouthinkso?...4.另外,漫画作文在揭示实质后往往会有精彩的谚语,格言,成语等出现,给文章添彩不少。如:Nopains,nogains./AllworkandnoplaymakesJakeadullboy./Drippingwaterwearsthroughrock./Constanteffortbringssuccess.(滴水能穿石,功到自然成)/Use“onestone”tokill“twobirds”(一石击双鸟)例题展示1:简要描述图片,并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。第3页共22页(一)内容要点:1.描述文字说明:1)学生被迫上很多补习班2)无兴趣可言2.议论文字说明:1)太多的补习班是浪费时间2)学习要有兴趣3)家长不要强迫孩子参加补习4)表达希望(二)Onepossibleversion:Lookingatthispicture,youwillunderstandbetter“ToomuchworkmakesJackadullboy”.Hehastogotosomanytrainingclassesbesideshisschoolclasses.Lifeisnofunatallforhim.Holidaysandweekendshavebecomedullwork-days.Heistootiredtolearntheselessonswellwithnointerest.Inmyopinion,spare-timetrainingcoursesareawasteoftimeformanystudents.Theymightdobetterwhentheyshowinterestinwhattheyarelearning.Pleasedon’tforcethesestudentstodowhattheyarenotwillingto,andwhenlearningisfun,surelytheywilldobetterthanweexpect!(三)文章结构和套语:Lookingatthispicture,youwillunderstandbetter“ToomuchworkmakesJackadullboy”.Hehasto…besideshisschoolclasses.Lifeis….…havebecome….Heis…Inmyopinion,…formanystudents.Theymight…whenthey…whattheyarelearning.Pleasedon’t…whatthey…,andwhenlearningisfun,surely…例题展示2:根据图画内容,以“WeWantOurSchoolbagsLighter”题,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点,不得逐条翻译。1.简单描述漫画的内容;2.作业负担过重;3.精讲精练;4.参加体育锻炼和社会活动。WeWantOurSchoolbagsLighterThepictureshowsthatagirliswearingapairofglassesandcarryingabigheavyschoolbag,andawomanisdoingsomeexercise.Thegirlsaystothewoman,“Ifyoucarrytheschoolbagforme,I’msureyouwilllosesomeweight.”Asiswell-known,weChinesestudentsareoverburdenedwithlessonsandhomeworkwhichourteachershavegivenus.Allthatwedoeverydayistolistentoour第4页共22页teachers’lessons,totakenotesanddoourhomeworkwhichseemsendless.Wedohopeourteacherswillhelpusgetmoreknowledgewithfewerlectures,exercisesandlesshomework.Onlyinthiswaywillwehavesparetimetodomorephysicalexerciseandmakeusstronger,andwewillhavemoresparetimetotakepartinsomesocialactivities,whichmakesusallmentallyandphysicallyhealthier.例题展示3.根据以下图画再结合你的想象,写出一篇100字左右的短文:Itistheoldman’sbirthdaytoday.Nowheissittingonasofaalone.Maybehiswifehasbeendead.Ontherightsideisabigbirthdaycakesentbyhisson.Andtherearealsosomepresentsgivenbyhisdaughterontheleft.Yettheoldmandoesn’tfeelhappy.Instead,helooksverysadbecauseheislonely.Ourlifeisgettingbetterandbetterthanbefore.Somepeoplethinkthatoldpeoplewillbesatisfiedaslongastheyhaveenoughtoeatanddrink.Ithinktheyarequitewrong.Oldpeopleeasilygetlonelybecausetheyhavenoworktodo.Soweshouldspendasmuchtimetogetherwiththemaswecanandtakecareofthemineverypossibleway.说明文:高考“看图作文”的应试策略。一、审题审题是“看图作文”的第一关。审题准确,文章的大致框架也就初步形成了。要做到审题准确,应注意三个方面:文体、人称和时态。作文要求写什么?是通知、日记、书信还是?不同文体的格式要求是什么?应该用什么人称和时态来写?。二、审图审图即领悟情境,这是看图作文成败的关键。在审图过程中应处理好三个关系:(一)人物与时空的关系每幅画面都包含一些特定的细节(details),