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高一短文改错专练下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。1Ioftendreamofbeateacher.IdreamofstandingintheplatformintheclassroomandIgivelessonstolovelyboysandgirls.Iteachthem,playwiththem,watchthemgrowingup.IamalwaysyoungwhenIwasstayingwiththem.Iknowthereisnoteasytobeateacher.Withoutenoughknowledges,youcanneverteachgood.Besides,youhavetomakefriendswithyourpupilsandtakegoodcareofhim.ThoughIamastudentnow,butIwillworkveryhardtomakemydreamcomestrue.2IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.FromthetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmytoy.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingsdidwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.Forawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,That'sit.Nomoretoystoyou.Mypunishmentlastedayear.Meanwhile,IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceImustmakemytoystolastMyattitudechangedfromthenon.3Mysummertravelstartedterribly.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangZhou.IwasgoingtovisitafriendhereandafterthatIwouldgotoXiamenforlongholiday.IboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagFormthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket,buttheonlyclothesIhadwasthoseIhadon.Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.WhenIfinallyarrivedatmyfriendhelenttomelotsofclothes.IfeelveryhappythatIcouldchangemyclothesatlast.20114DearMrsWinthorp,Somyfirstweekatcollegeisover!NolecturesthismorningsoIthinkI’demailyouandletyouknowwhatthingsaregoing.I’mgladtosaythatanythinghasworkedoutfineinthedorm.Irememberaskingforaroomasfarawayfromtheliftsaspossibleandtheyfindmeacomfortableonesecondfloor.TherearetwogirlsfrommycoursehereandIplantomakefriendwiththemsotheywecanhelpeachotheronthecoursework.Everyoneelseseemsveryniceandwarmlyhere.Well,Ihadbettertostopnow.I’mgoingtoattendminefirstlessonthisaftemoon,forI’vegotsomepreparationtomake,Keepintouch.Best,Carol5WhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcouldalsohaveit.OnedayIsawasecond-handbicycle,thatwasonlyonehundredyuan.Iaskedmyfatherthemoney.Buthesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.Heshouldfindtheotherhalfmyself.SoIwenttosellnewspapersaftertheschool.MyfatherwaspleasedifIshowedhimthemoneyamonthafter.Hegivesmetheotherfifty.YoucanimaginehowmuchhappyIwaswhenIrodetoschoolonmyownbicycle.6OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriend,atruckcametoastopbesidesus.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrellabecausehefoundwewerewetthrough.Istoodthereandcouldn’tbelieveinthatacompletestrangerissothoughtful.Themaninsisted,soIgratefulacceptedtheoffer,thankedhimandwatchedthetruckdisappeardowntheroad.Thismanmightneedtheumbrellahimself,andhepreferredtogiveittoeveryoneelse.Itwasalessontousthatitwaspossiblegivewithoutexpectanythinginreturn.7Jimisoneofmycloselyfriends.Twomonthsago,hismotherboughtacomputertohimasabirthdaypresent.ShehopedJimwillstudyhardwiththehelpofthecomputer.Tohissurprise,Jimjustwastedplentyoftimeplaycomputergameseveryday.Nowsheregretsbuyingthecomputer.Asmatteroffact,acomputercandoalotofeverydayjobsforus.Itiswideusedinfactories,hospitals,banksandsoon.Manycomputersscientistsarenowtryingtomakethecomputerto“think”likeaman.Inmyopinion,thekeyiswhatweshoulduseitwisely.8Onedayatravelercametoasmalltown,whichhehasnevervisiteditbefore.Thereisnodoubtthatheknewnoonethereandeverythingaboutthetown.Sincehishairtoolong,hewantedtohaveitcut.Therehappenedtohavetwobarbershopsclosetoeachotheronthemainstreet.Ashopwastidy,andthebarbersatonthesofa,waitedforhisnextcustomer.Theflooroftheotherbarber’swasfullofhair,andthebarberlookedtiringinachair.Hethoughtthesecondbarberwasmoreskillfullythanthefirstone.Hefinallyleftthesecondshop.9Mr.Smithhada8-year-oldsonnamedTony,whoenjoyedlisteningtomusicverymuch.SoheboughtapianotoTony,hopingthathecanbecomeafamouspianistoneday.Thelittleboyputherheartintopractisingthepianodayafterdayandseemedenjoyeveryminuteofit.However,halfayearlater,hetoldhisfatherthathewastiringofpractisingthepiano.Heardthis,Mr.Smithsaid,“Tony,itisonethingtobefondoflistentomusic,butitisanotherthingtoperformskillfulbyyourself.Youcanneverplaythepianowellevenifyoudon’tpractisemore.”10OnThursdayIwillhavetodecidewhatIwantmyselftodooveraweekend.IamthinkingofmakingatriptoLondon,visitingtheBritishMuseumandsomepark.ButIhavespentmostmymoney,soIcannotevengooutoftown.Imaygotoafilm,oraconcert.Yes,aconcertcanbeveryexcited.Youcanwatchyourstarswhileenjoyingyourfavoritemusic.Soaconcertcostsomuch.Imayjustlistentomusic,Ihavesomerecordsgivingtomeasbirthdaygifts.IfIlistentomyownrecords,therearenoneedtospendmoney.Allright.That'swhatI'mgoingto.Ioftendreamofbeateacher.IdreamofstandingintheplatformintheclassroomandIbeingongivelessonstolovelyboysandgirls.Iteachthem,playwiththem,∧watchthemgrowingup.andIamalwaysyoungwhenIwasstayingwiththem.Iknowthereisnoteasytobeateacher.amitWithoutenoughknowledges,youcanneverteachgood.Besides,youhavetomakefriendsknowledgewellwithyourpupilsandtakeknowledg