专题六应用文一.书信重点诠释英文书信格式与中文书信格式有许多不同,它包括五部分,即:信头,称呼,正文,结束语和签名,具体如下:精典题例解读下面是2003年NMET的书面表达试题。体裁为书信,内容为学生所熟悉。要点通过汉语和图示两种方式给出。汉语句子虽不算少,但无法照译。考生在完成本题时需要做到以下几点:1.认真审读所给文字和草图,确认全部信息要点。2.确定写的动机:向你的英国笔友介绍你为他所找住房的情况。3.确定写的基本路子:以回信的口气,介绍情况,询问态度。4.确定语篇的结构:书信开头、介绍情况、询问态度、书信结尾。5.起草语篇,考虑措辞。6.进行文字修改。假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校来学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。注意:1.词数:100左右。2.参考词汇:房租—rent(n.)。DearBob,Yours,LiHua内容要点:1.开头;2.公寓(一室带浴室、厨房);3.面积、家具(25;4.公寓位置(芳草街,离学校一站远);5.月租500元;6.结尾。说明:1.内容要点可用不同方式表达。2.对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。3.开头、结尾的内容须合乎逻辑、语言得体。DearBob,I’msogladtolearnthatyou’recominginSeptember.I’vefoundaplaceforyou,It’sasmallflatof25squaremeters,withabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.Inthebedroomthereisabed,asofa,adeskandachair.Therentis500yuanpermonth.TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxiuChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyoustraighttotheschool.Infact.it’sonlyonestop.Doyouthinkyou’dlikeit?Ifnot,Icantryandfindanotherplaceforyou.Justletmeknow.Yours,LiHua1.假如你是贫困地区的一名失学的儿童,名叫李萍。你很幸运地得到在北京工作的一位美国人Mr.Smith的帮助,得以重新回到校园继续学习。于是你于2002年2月1日给Mr.Smith写一封信,向他表示感谢,并介绍了学习情况。(字数:80~120)信中内容包括:1.收到书和钱,并能重返校园,表示感谢;2.在老师的帮助下学习上取得了很大进步;3.老师表扬了你,家长鼓励你;4.下决心更加努力学习,取得更大进步;5.盼望见到Mr.Smith,但因没有机会去北京,希望Mr.Smith给你寄张照片。【参考范文】DearMr.Smith.I’mgladtohavereceivedyourmoneyandbooks.Now,Icangotoschoolagain.I’mveryhappy.Thankyouverymuch!IhavebeenstudyinghardsinceIacceptedyourgifts.Ihavemadegreatprogressinmystudy.Ourteachershavepraisedmeforit.Andmyparentshaveencouragedmetoworkharder.Ihavemadeupmymindtodosoandmakeevengreaterprogresswiththehelpoftheteachers.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyou,butIhavenochancetogotoBeijing.Couldyousendmeoneofyourphotostome?Thankyou!Bestwishes.Yourssincerely,LiPing2.假定你是李华,有一位美国朋友Smith托你在北京找工作,你看到21世纪英文报(21stCentury)上刊登了一则招聘启事,认为他很合适。请用英文写一封短信,用E-mail发给Smith,告知此事,并征求他的意见。广告原文如下:ForeignTeachersWanted!TheEducationDepartmentoftheLadderCompanyisrunninganEnglishcourseforchildrenandadults.Requirements:1.NativeEnglishspeaker2.Universitydegreeineducationorrelatedfieldpreferred3.ForeignexpertcertificationIfyouareinterested,pleasecallus:Tel:86-10-68019433E-mail:liecbj@hotmail.com注意:1.开头语已给你写好;2.介绍必须包括所有内容,但不要逐词翻译说明部分;3.词数:100个单词左右。DearSmith,IknowyouwanttofindajobinBeijing.【参考范文】DearSmith,IknowyouwanttofindajobinBeijing.Ireadanadvertisementintoday’s“21stCentury”,anEnglishpaperhere.ABeijingLadderInformationCompanyisrunningaschoolforchildrenandadults.SotheyneednativespeakerEnglishteachers.Whattheypreferisauniversitydegreeineducationorotherrelatedfield,whichyouhave.Andaforeignexpertcertificationisalsorequired.Ithinkyouaretherightpersontheywant.Ifyouareinterested,pleasedirectlycallorwritetothecompany.Thetelephonenumberis86-10-68019433,andtheire-mailaddressis:liecbj@hotmail.com.Goodluck.Yours,LiHua3.光明中学依山傍水,校园曾经安静美丽,一年前该校附近建了一家化工厂。学校受到了严重影响。假如你是该校的一名学生,名叫李东。请你根据下表内容用英文给中国日报写一封信,反映情况,呼吁有关部门采取相应措施。建厂前建厂后校园内鲜花盛开,树木常青;校园安静,学习佳地工厂每天排出大量污水、废气,严重影响师生健康,花草树木受到危害,工厂噪音也干扰了教学活动。注意:1.词数:100左右;2.开头已为你写好。Deareditor,I’mastudentofGuangMingMiddleSchool,Ourschoolusedto…【参考范文】Deareditor,I’mastudentofGuangMingMiddleSchool.Ourschoolusedtobeverybeautiful.Thereusedtobegreentreesandallkindsofflowersinourschoolalltheyearround.Itusedtobeaquietplaceanditwasagoodplaceforstudy.Thingshavechangedsinceachemicalworkswasbuiltnearourschoolayearago.Everydayitproduceslargequantitiesofwastewaterandharmfulgases.Theterriblepollutionhasdonegreatharmtousaswellastothetreesandflowers.Andthegreatnoisefromtheworkshasgreatlyaffectedourteachingandstudyingactivities.Ourschoolisnolongeraquietandgoodplaceforstudy.Wesufferalotfromthepollution.Wedohopeyoucanhelpustotakemeasurestoprotectourschoolandstopitfrombeingpolluted.Yourstruly,LiDong4.下面是某中外合资企业刊登在昨天的ChinaDaily上的一则广告:Officesecretary,withexperienceinbookkeeping,typewriting,publicrelations,operatingPC(personalcomputer).Address,age,healthconditionWritetoA518,CharlieOffice.假如你是张林,现年20岁,身体健康,学习英语6年,学过广告中所列项目。通信地址是滨海市745信箱(P.O.Box745)。请根据广告中提出的招聘职务、应聘条件和你自己的简要情况,写一封自荐信。字数:100词左右。【参考范文】DearSir,Ihavereadyouradvertisementinyesterday’sChinaDaily.IfeelIamqualifiedforthejobinyourcompany.I’m20yearsoldandingoodhealth.Aftergraduationfromamiddleschool,IstudiedEnglishforsixyears.Ialsolearnedbookkeeping,typewritingandpublicrelations.I’mgoodatoperatingPCandhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.I’minterestedinthepositionofasecretary.Iwantverymuchtobeacceptedbyyourcompany.I’llworkhardifIcanbeamemberinyourcompany.ZhangLing5.假设你是王晓明,请根据你校美化校园的规划,用英语给你在美国的笔友Peter写一封短信,介绍该规划。短信的主要内容如下:规划目的美化校园、净化空气创造良好学习和生活环境规划内容种植花草树木建一个植物园,供参观、实践建一个小花园,供休息、读书建几座名人雕塑,激励师生注意:1.短信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。2.词数:100左右。3.参考词汇:雕塑—statue(n.)植物园—botanicalgarden(n.)DearPter,Iwouldliketotellyouthatourschoolhasworkedoutanewprogram.Welcometoourschoolifyouhaveanychance.Yours,OnepossibleversionDearPeter,I’dliketotellyouthatourschoolhasworkedoutanewprogram.Thepurposesoftheprogramaretomakeourschoolmorebeautiful,tomaketheaircleanerandfresher,andtoturnourschoolintoabetterplaceforustostudyandlivein.Accordingtotheprogram,wewillplantdifferentkindsoftrees,flowersandgrassinandaroundourschool.Ab